The Passerby's Self-Cultivation

I now have a strong complaint**. Takeya Kosaka, how can you bear the will of so many people? Takeya Kosaka, when will you be strong? Takeya Kosaka, when will you have your own ideas? Takeya Kosaka, when will you be able to look at the problem calmly? Takeya Kosaka, when will you seriously become stronger? Takeya Kosaka, have you ever cherished everything you have? Takeya Kosaka, when will you be able to dance in the wave of fate instead of being pushed forward? Takeya Kosaka, do you know how much I expect from you? I am so disappointed. Unprecedented disappointment. To Takeshi Kosaka, who is the most annoying in the favorite theme and the favorite plot

Now that I see it, I want to say some thoughts on this book. The rhythm of switching between daily life and non-daily life in Gensokyo at the beginning of the book is good, but at the end of the book non-daily life accounts for a huge proportion, and daily descriptions become dispensable. The existence of characters like Anmei, Denpa Girl, and Chuunibyou are not found to have any meaning. Many people in the comment area complained about the removal of the CP, which is actually related to this situation. Since these characters are not necessary, why destroy their original happiness? The tragedy is not that the CP was removed, but that there were not many opportunities to play after being removed. The main line of this book is the non-daily life of Gensokyo. It would be an excellent Gensokyo fanfic if you completely delete the daily part. Adding chuunibyou, my sister, and the radio girl into the daily life does not have much role. This approach is not pleasing to daily life lovers like me. (Of course it's really hard to write about pure daily life) Although I complained a lot, I still admire the author very much. He is writing novels for himself. Although I can't keep up with his radio waves, I can see that the author has invested a lot of emotion in his works. I hope to see the author write more and better works in the future.

How should I put it, after reading it, it is considered a good book except for the ending. I can actually accept the inexplicable tragedy at the end. But the only thing he couldn't accept was to whitewash that Luo Tianshu, destroy the world, and play tricks on others. He shouldn't be a hero anyway, and he didn't pay the corresponding price. The ending of a book should be the ending, the end of a drama. As the saying goes, grievances and separations are broken. The originally good ending was suddenly ruined by Luo Tianshu. Moreover, many pitfalls were not filled in. The plot in the later period was completely violent, which caused a strong sense of separation from the early stage. The author may have realized this problem and started writing extras to make up for it. How should I put it, he is indeed a passerby male protagonist, he is pushed throughout the whole process, but his beliefs cannot be seen, it is very empty. But it is still a good book, excluding Luo Tianshu (this character really failed, and finally got away without paying anything), everything else is good. The ending is very uncomfortable, but since I said that the ending is an extra chapter... Well, actually treating the extra ending as an extra chapter is too extreme. I can only say it to comfort myself. In short, it is a good book, but there are many big problems. If there are brothers who are like me, I suggest you watch it as appropriate.

Updates are inherently slow, and they are divided into Gensokyo and the outside world. I even forgot about Kyousuke.

Oh, I thought it was okay. Forget it. You are a cruel author. It turned out to be an abuser and a tragedy. The true truth of the world is so dark. And you actually think that Luo Tianshu is a hero. Well, you can play with others and destroy the world. You can still clean up. That's enough. I will continue to read it and leave a comment 😭😭

Were the everyday characters written earlier just pulled out to show their faces? . It feels like there is only Gensokyo in the back. I thought it would be a coming-of-age and joyful novel, but the more I read it, the more depressing it became. .

It's a whole life, right? It's a torture of the master, right? It's a depressing ending, right?

I originally had a lot to say, but I didn't know where to start. I liked this book and the characters in it, but I didn't like Luo Tianshu who suddenly appeared at the end. I didn't like the ending, and I didn't like this story born from tragedy. The extra gave me a little comfort, but it's a pity that the author ran away If the author decides to come back, please inform me and support me with a subscription.

*Just looking at the title of the book, there is no connection with the East at all... If I hadn't searched for Marisa on a whim... Anyway, it is worth celebrating, because this is a completed book!

Why doesn't anyone write a fanfic about Little Birds Traveling to Ten Flowers? Don't you think it's regrettable to get married and have a child out of nowhere?