The Transmigrated Boundary Line

Regarding the appearance of the protagonist Shiki and the protagonist are considered brother and sister = Shiki and the protagonist look similar... Shiki=Takeuchi face=Protagonist Takeuchi face So, the protagonist's appearance=King Da Mao=Okita Souji=Nero=Arquette=Eltruchi=Zhu Yue=Three Valkyrie Sisters=Sparkle=Grey=some version of Rin=Jane of Arc=Black Sadness=Mysterious Heroine Marshal: Saint? ... Many saints? ? Mu Xiu: Just say I am a popular face... Zhu Yue: I found that you look similar to our family!

I want to be RBQ. No one will watch it, right?

The reason why the first volume felt poisonous was because the author's portrayal of the protagonist made the readers lack a sense of security. Here we only evaluate the content of the first volume First of all, in terms of personality, he is a soft-hearted + passive + pleaser type personality. When being unreasonably asked to take a life and death risk, he did not take any proactive action and chose to accommodate himself. Even if it is for the heroine's own good, we should try to persuade her to give up instead of taking her as a burden to take risks. The character of the protagonist gives the impression that it is difficult for him to make the right choice, and sooner or later he will suffer from his character, which makes the reader lack a sense of security. The second is the ability setting. It cannot be said that superpowers are not strong, but if the superpowers are played well, the superpowers themselves are inherently powerful. Either the user is incredibly intelligent and knowledgeable, and has developed his originally weak superpower to an astonishing level. However, the setting of the protagonist's superpowers feels like a defective product. The superpowers in the Forbidden series have many shortcomings, and even have additional shortcomings. Not to mention that it is directly incompatible with all enhancements containing mysterious elements. The computing power limit that was supposed to limit the maximum power has also become a blue bar, and the combat ability reflected is not strong. In addition, the protagonist's intelligence is not outstanding and his knowledge is not high. He just uses his super powers violently. It gives people the feeling that the compatibility between the protagonist and the enhancement of super powers is really bad. It consumes a lot of resources but cannot produce tactical effects, and other ways out are blocked by super powers. Finally, there is the issue of incompatibility between the daily comedy style and the style of the main god Infinite Flow. The underlying logic of the two conflicts. In daily comedy-style works, characters do not need to consider the pros and cons, nor do they need to consider behavioral logic issues, everything is for the sake of comedy. The Lord God Infinite Style uses danger to force the characters to grow. The characters need to weigh the pros and cons and carefully consider how to choose in order to survive. In the early stage, the author used the dangerous coercion mode of the main god style to let the characters adopt a daily funny style of behavior. The readers' insecurities are instantly filled, because daily comedy will not kill people, but the Lord God will really kill them.

After reading dozens of chapters, I found that it is really long-winded. A lot of space is devoted to psychological descriptions and explanations. Except for the necessary ones, some places can really be cut down appropriately and it will be better. Many chapters only say two sentences, do two actions, use two skills, and then explain. This feels like a very serious plot split. It's like watching a half-hour commercial after watching a TV series for three minutes. Do you understand this irritability?

Readers who can't stand this book will basically say goodbye to online articles. . . Authors who are so individual and whose performance is always stable and good-looking can be regarded as the best among the existing authors.

It's okay to give up magic for a superpower, but isn't this magic too comprehensive? As long as all the energy is included in this magic? You can't practice! ! ! Are you afraid that you will be too strong and impose restrictions? Wouldn't it be nice to find an ability that has no side effects? Also, what is the meaning of depletion of calculation power for a person with super power level 4? How many times does a person with great power use it? Is there a setting of depletion of calculation power in the Forbidden City? It looks like a blue bar! That Accelerator had maintained vector control all day long and soon ran out of mana.

Excellent work! As long as you survive the poison in the first volume, the world behind will be very exciting. When I saw Yahweh, I couldn't help but sigh: Princess is awesome!

Why did the protagonist give up the enhancement of the magic side and choose super power enhancement when he knew at the beginning that he was dealing with ghosts?

Build a Yingying Tower and put in a few Yingying monsters every day for me to kill.

It's been so many years that I've learned that Mario is a harem game (˘•ω•˘) Know about Princess Bowser (⌯¤̴̶̷̀ω¤̴̶̷́)✧ Who do you think dropped the gold coins on the road to guide you to hunt him down! ? Why do you think she would rather kidnap the princess and become your enemy? ! Why do mushrooms slide? ! Why do we prepare flags for you as a guiding light! ? It's all because Bowser likes you! ! Mario! (Grabbing Mario by the collar) Do you know what you are doing? ! She kidnapped the princess but did nothing, waiting for you on the other side of the level. Just to see you. And you! ! (Pumping fist) It actually made Bowser cry!