Song of Unrestrained Living

This kind of weak protagonist, bullied by the villain and even by his childhood sweetheart, is likely to turn readers away. After all, the "broken engagement" trope in light novels is notoriously disliked. While your story isn't exactly a light novel, this opening is likely to be mistaken for one, scaring readers away. The author might consider revising the opening. Friendly suggestion.

Raise your hand if you've fallen for the mask craze. The author, Jiecao, has now published three consecutive martial arts and fantasy novels. I sincerely hope that after finishing this book, the author will write a modern fantasy or Western fantasy novel next. ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ ).

Anjia's attraction to Xinghai stemmed from her desire for the life she longed for, but this affection couldn't withstand the test of time. So when she finally achieved a life of wealth and then faced unexpected changes, she immediately wavered. Anjia wasn't heartless; she inevitably felt guilty, remorseful, and confused, and material possessions couldn't compensate for all of that.

What I find most interesting about the novel "Mask" is that while they may each have their own sins, they are essentially good people. Many readers say that none of the protagonist's women are good people. The first Meng Qingyi waited four hundred years, then gave up love for the world, and finally sacrificed herself to become the new Sanqing.

This author's writing style is so awkward, it's painful to read.

The child at the beginning lacks intelligence and logic, and is somewhat schizophrenic. It was easy to write, I just wrote whatever came to mind, but what do readers think? The first three chapters contain long descriptions of being bullied by children, which could have been done in a sentence or two. What's the point of writing it in such detail?

The more I watch, the more upset I get. The characters seem to have no intelligence at all. Some things could have been resolved simply by talking about them, but they just won't. Some people are obviously bad guys, but they insist on talking about the past. It's really frustrating to watch. (")

Suddenly, she reached out her small hand and smeared something on the eagle's face. There was an undeniable determination in her movements, and the eagle felt a sense of relief, as if a heavy burden had been lifted from his shoulders. His lingering past, the fear hidden deep in his heart, the murderous intent that seemed to strike like thunder and fire, and the guilt that lingered in his heart all vanished with that gentle touch.

To be honest, the way Jiecao portrays deep love is still lacking. I never really felt that Bai Xue and Xinghai were deeply in love.

I really don't understand. In the end, Xinghai didn't kill Yuanhui. It disgusted me. I really can't accept it. This is the most disgusting thing I've read in the book. It's even more disgusting than the male disciple suddenly turning into a woman and dancing with his master.