One Shot, One Kill

I picked a few sentences from Yuemian, the author of Qidian. I don't know if the author can read the book review section, but I very much hope that the author can read these sentences. "Readers of online articles - originally I wanted to say Chinese but I always felt that this was too broad - readers of online articles are very stingy with their praise. If they read a book and feel it is good, they will give it a recommendation. Most people will not use words to praise the book in the book review area. Many people will not even click on the recommendation, but only subscribe, but they really like your book. There is a word to describe these people, called the "silent majority". They do not express, or the way they express is silent and difficult to detect. But conversely, people who don't like your books tend to jump very high. Because the black ones jump high, and the silent majority don't speak. " I like this book very much. To be more precise: now that online game writing is in decline, there are fewer good online game writings to read. I hope the author will not be biased by the opinions in the book review section. I don't want to see another good book ruined by book reviews!

Author, I have many questions to ask you. First, why is this book so rushed? You see, in addition to upgrading, you also do tasks and auctions. Don't you think the tasks are too tight? There are also biohazards that are either breaking out here or there. The federation is really screwed. Let's talk about the issue of psionic energy. Are the protagonist's Eye of Death and the Blade like that? What a simple question. Why don't you just change it to Old John? If it doesn't work, just upgrade the gun manufacturing. In theory, if you can create legendary force weapons, you can also create legendary psionic weapons! Besides, if a mercenary has the opportunity to make his own weapons, he will not do it. You can see that your protagonist's interest has almost been wiped out by you. The protagonist cannot fail to see that his two careers in life are helpful to him. There are also how long the game is open, the levels are opened too quickly, which game is like this, and you only write about online games, and you can't even make it through a section. What kind of alien world is that? And then the level seems a bit strange. The Zerg level is low. It's not that the level is low, but how do I put it? I can't understand The Force Awakening. For example, the second awakening at level 70 is too big. According to the Zerg level written in the book, it doesn't feel right. There is also The Force Awakens, which has at least intermediate and advanced levels depending on talent, and maybe even ultimate. These levels and things make me feel that the Zerg level is a bit low. The above alone can almost prompt the protagonist to reach a large level. Don't always fight monsters to level up. There are also force skill enhancement chips. Such a tricky thing, has the protagonist ever thought about making it himself, or a psionic skill enhancement chip, or a professional chip? Are there no players who want to make these things themselves? Let's talk about pets. The protagonist's pet is too bad, or the system is too bad. Even if it has no attack power, its defense power is not that strong either. It doesn't have much HP, it's been weakened too much, and even the summons are just average. But I still have a question. Have you never thought about equipping pets? And it's not difficult to develop some kind of psionic potion. There are so many ways to defeat monsters and upgrade. If you fight monsters for several months, won't your eyes get tired?

I have read Chapter 458. I don't know why, but the more I read, the more inconsistent I feel. Things with no technical content such as flash bombs and smoke bombs are not easy to produce. I think the author's restrictions on these props should focus on their abilities rather than making them rare. For example, smoke bombs have different diffusion ranges, diffusion capabilities, anti-dispersion capabilities, and some additional capabilities such as poison, electronic interference, energy stability interference, etc. At different levels. If you can describe these. If there is a confrontation between technology and technology, between technology and superpowers, it will definitely have a good performance. The current descriptions feel very awkward. As of Chapter 458, I haven't seen the appearance of high-explosive weapons such as C4. The author is not good at writing numerical values, nor is he good at writing guns. The power of a gun is not improved by the gun itself, but by bullets. The gun can only make your shooting more stable and accurate. The metal the bullet is made of, as well as the ammunition used, can increase the bullet's power. The Wolverine's conventional weapons are basically ignored when mounted, but it can be damaged by bullets made of Adamantium alloy. In addition to changing the bullet, another way is to change the caliber, but the reason is still the bullet. Another problem is the damage of machine guns. Some are larger and some are smaller. The rate of fire is 50+ per second. Is boos difficult to kill? A level 50 machine gunner will hit 50boos. The most common machine gun has 50 health per bullet, which means your BOSS has one million health. 1000000/50=20000 Rounds. Count on your speed of 50 per second and ten machine gunners. 20000/50/10=40 Seconds to end the battle. Even if I cut the damage to 10 HP and double the HP, it only costs 2,000,000/10=200,000 rounds. Cut the speed per second to 10, that is 200000/10/10 = the battle will end in 2000 seconds, and if I have a hundred machine gunners, the battle will end in 200 seconds. The bullet costs 200,000 rounds, one credit point per shot, 200,000 credit points. You have to tell me that even a little forced damage can kill you without breaking your defense. The 5,000 team also lost 2,000 people, 100 people went to the front to fight, and 4,900 people set up machine guns in the back. A little damage, 10 seconds, and the battle ends in 40 seconds.

There is no need to read after Chapter 300. The supporting characters reduce their intelligence (just find any excuse. All the supporting characters in the Evernight City all said that our IQ should be offline to cooperate with the protagonist. Anyway, we will believe whatever you say); People have expressed their astonishment, fearing that others would not know that they are rich, and they may have forgotten that they are a sniper after getting a second career); amnesia patients (before chapter 20, they tried their best to hide their pet abilities with stupid excuses, but after chapter 20, the protagonist casually revealed his pet abilities 😅)

What are you beeping about in 2016 novels (￣∀￣)

The writing is general and verbose. The character that pisses me off the most is Big Pineapple, the pig brother. Every time I see this character appear, I want to poke his eyes out. There is also sexism. What does it mean that female players will vomit after seeing these scenes? As long as ordinary people, regardless of men and women, they will vomit when they see it, okay? Then there's the character's IQ, which is really not high. The protagonist's personality was okay at first, but when he was a lone ranger, he couldn't stand it anymore when he had many friends. The villain also forcibly defeats the protagonist and opposes the protagonist from the beginning to the end until he can no longer continue. And most of them are children from rich families. Why, do you hate the rich? How well educated are children from rich families? In this river? The villains are generally unintelligent, and the character descriptions are flat and extreme. I forced myself to finish reading half of it. After I came out of the role of Big Pineapple, I just wanted to know what other poison the author could give me. This poison is already red. I would like to advise you to run away quickly!

The reader group of this book is relatively directional, with keywords such as online game firearms, decisive killing, straightforward and refreshing writing, and large quantities. The writing style of this book is relatively average, that is, at a medium level, allowing readers to read normally. In terms of plot, the book is quite interesting in the early stages. Although it is slow-burning, it makes people enjoy reading it. However, in the middle stage, the level of the story began to decline, and the content became bland. In the later stage, it was reduced to the level of hay. Of course, I personally think it may be that the author has written too much. With more than 3 million words written in a novel about online games and firearms, it is inevitable that the writing power will not be able to support it. If this book could be compressed and squeezed out of the later water, it would probably be more popular among readers. In addition, Brother Jiu, I have to pull out the poison for you. Remember, you must ignore or skip the realistic part of this novel. The realistic part is quite bad. ---Recommended by Gong Zhonghao's "Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Shuhuang" Come to us for the Shuhuang!!!

Really hydrology, the first part is okay, very exciting, the sniper type is very well written, but after chapter 240, I started to hide the professional mission, I don't know why the author is exhausted. Especially hydrology, I wrote a hundred chapters of a hidden career mission to downgrade, to save an NPC, and I wrote more than 50 chapters just because I was robbed by others and pretended to be cool. Anyway, I couldn't stand it anymore, and it became more and more incompetent as I went to the back.

The plot of the battle royale was a complete failure. It was long and smelly. It didn't make any sense or make any sense. It would have been better to finish the mission earlier. The word count was always low. I skipped at least dozens of chapters, but I still felt that I could connect. This also shows that the middle was completely full of nonsense.

The front is very good, the sniping is very good, but the back is not so good. A sniper's weapons are not legendary, the old back is. I have some other weapons. I am really speechless. After changing my profession, I personally feel that it doesn't look good. It doesn't have the sniper flavor from the front.