Pirate Incarnation as Thunder

After reading Golden Chapter 3, there are no highlights. It just talks about how to exercise and the current situation on the sea. It is very boring.

Hehe! Another pirate blow! You can't live without joining the revolutionary army! Instead, he became a pirate and burned, killed, and plundered civilians! It's good that the Celestial Dragons are evil, but how good are the pirates? Besides, how many Tianlong people can there be? In terms of base numbers, pirates are N times more powerful than Celestial Dragons! At the same time, pirates harmed N times as many people as the Celestial Dragons! I personally like the navy very much, because no matter how rotten the navy is, you can't erase the fact that they protect more than 70% of the world's civilians! No matter how passionate the pirates are, they can't hide their evil deeds!

Cyrus awakened his overlord color and almost made me laugh to death

The latest plot of saving the fur tribe started to be sloppy and indifferent, and the taste has changed a lot compared to the previous chapters. This phenomenon was first reflected in the chapter of the rescuer Tezzolo. I still remember that when the protagonist left CP9, the plot of dealing with the fallen girls in the battle at the Shampoo Land Slave was very neat and tidy. There is also a brushstroke later to explain the tragic end of the fallen girls, which left a deep impact on people. However, the latest chapter seriously changes the character of the protagonist Long Aotian. If the author hopes that the plot will be mainly light-hearted and funny in the future, then there is no problem in conceiving and describing it this way. How about facing the critical period of the development of Sky Island and the preparation period for the decisive battle of BIGMOM, in such a tense state, the main character's itinerary was changed for the sake of a mere Catwoman, and the power of the Sky Island was gathered and built, and even the explanation of the love between the heroes and their daughters would make them panic. It may also be said that the world of One Piece is inherently passionate and sincere, and the protagonist's behavior is beneficial to people's hearts. Instead of being a cold and lonely hero, it is better to design a Luffy-style protagonist from the beginning. Why use the template of a CP bitter boy? I hope the author will make some choices, otherwise such a protagonist with a split personality will be really awkward~~🙏

After reading the table of contents, Roger died after more than 400 chapters... I immediately persuaded him to quit.

Did the protagonist's combat power collapse when he got the Thunder Fruit? He could defeat the Lieutenant General just like that. He is only 13 years old. He is said to be weak in talent. GramLockedar has the natural system and is not a weakling in the early stage. Speaking of what is the definition of "talent", the protagonist's understanding is not weak. Training makes the body memorize, so even if he sleeps three hours a day, the overall time spent is still less than many people over the age of twenty-five. In addition, others are more efficient than him. Why is he so strong? The lieutenant general is also very talented. Otherwise, the navy only has a dozen lieutenant generals, and the protagonist can fight as a lieutenant general at the age of 13! To sum up, the protagonists are the protagonists, an awesome bunch. Goodbye! 😁

Why didn't you dress up as a Celestial Dragon in the salted fish novel?

I don't know why, but every time I see a comment section about who is right or wrong between the navy and the pirates, I find that I hate the pirates more and more, and I hate the protagonists and Ace. Those people from the Black Navy probably believe that no matter what the Navy does, it is always wrong, and the pirates are still right no matter how wrong they are. Just because there is a slightly better pirate in the protagonist group, I think all pirates are good, and because there are a few disasters in the navy, I think all navy are like this kind of people. It's funny. It feels like a bad guy puts down his butcher knife and becomes a Buddha immediately, and a good guy can't become a Buddha even though he goes through all kinds of difficulties.

... Watching Pirates fan fiction, I either get poisoned to death, or I finish it straight away... For the first time, I get bored to death. ... There's nothing wrong with it and it's not poisonous, but it's not fun at all, it's extremely boring, and the protagonist is still very weak after eating the fruit🐔. Eating and not eating are the same. So boring…

If the physical strength is not good enough, practicing the Six Postures is suicide. The pressure caused by breaking through the speed of sound, the physical strength is not enough, and you will be a ball of flesh. The protagonist is only five years old and can be said to be an ordinary person. He can do six types of force and poison.

Go to the world of One Piece. Those who don't become sailors and become pirates are mentally ill. It's best to live with the government. Pirates are just a bunch of cancer. What kind of bullshit friendship. In the final analysis, aren't they just burning, killing and looting?

Can you please not wear a top hat? It's so ugly and doesn't match Thor's domineering attitude at all. Or keep it simple. Or be different, please don't have such a tacky aristocratic and small family temperament 😅

It's too harsh and watery.

Too watery, no sense of substitution. You must know that readers who like fan fiction first like anime. You are no different from me when I read fantasy. If you were into fantasy, I wouldn't bother to read such pale writing like yours.

In fact, when I read One Piece fanfic, I want to see the author's imagination I want to see the author's protagonist develop the wasted fruits of the original work to the extreme. The biggest advantage of Xiang Lei is speed and output. It is equivalent to an ADC with a movement speed comparable to displacement. It is almost impossible to be caught to death Ultra-high movement speed, ultra-distance output, ultra-high burst However, he wants to be a warrior... Not to mention the protagonist, Dangdang's original Anilu's development level, as long as he has a brain, who among the pirates can beat him except Kizaru? Standing at an altitude of thousands of meters and doing crazy output, who can resist? Who can catch him except Kizaru? ?

What can I say about this novel? Youth is a poisonous point. 11 Years old is a bit too much. Don't talk about the aunt. That was Oda's fault. Oda also explained the talent steel balloon, and the race is unknown and the bloodline is not simple. The author has also emphasized many times that the protagonist is an ordinary person. Ordinary people cannot be said to be fighting Kaido at the age of 11. Even if there are fruits, his 11-year-old body is not strong enough and is still developing. Secondly, the plot characters are pulled out too early and there is no sense of substitution at all. The Shichibukai plan is also too early. Well, before Roger became the Pirate King, the sea was still the domain of the navy, and there was no need for the Shichibukai to balance the sea. The Shichibukai plan was created to balance the sea after the pirates exploded after Roger's execution. The character description is not good. For example, the protagonist has no idea what his character is and what he is doing. For example, Akin is a loyal person. How could he abandon the original owner just because of a few words? That's it. The author's writing skills are not good, I hope to improve them.

After reading it for a while, I found that the writing of this book is okay. The biggest poisonous point is that the system does not even have the combat power of a general at just a few years old. How can you let other people live? It would be better if the protagonist is older

There is no need to write about thunder. You see, the thunder fruit in Thunder God was written by the author to be weak. He has developed electromagnetic abilities. His thunder and lightning itself has not killed a named character. I guess you are about the same, all of them weaken the sound of thunder, and fighting relies entirely on the body. Because if you don't write it this way, you won't have to write it. In this case, it is better to use the fruit ability to assist Tired.

It's not good-looking and boring, and the full text is watered down.

Eating the Thunder Fruit is simply an insult to this fruit. All the fruits are developed are pit-stop skills. You might as well eat phantom beast species. Thunder is thunder and lightning, doomsday punishment, beyond visual range strike, flexible kite, and destructive thunder and lightning. If you don't have one, why would you need to develop magnetism and develop your body? I'm speechless. Only one of the next ten chapters is mainly about the protagonist. What are you doing in the water? There are a lot of words that have nothing to do with the protagonist and will not affect the main line. The protagonist's battle is not rewritten. After the water, there is no passion at all.

More than half of the ten fics lick Rayleigh Xaki

The main character is so bad that no one can beat him or run away. What is the speed of the fruit? It's just that Garp didn't want to catch him. It's not that he died early. He doesn't have the strength to run around. He can't beat anyone. He doesn't practice on the empty island. He just came down and vomited. Then he was beaten everywhere.

Luffy's rubber body is not afraid of guns or knives, and there is no physics at all. Many One Piece fan fictions about getting the Thunder Fruit, or talking about Marvel's Magneto, like to create electricity to generate magnetism, magnetism to generate electricity, and then create the gun sister's electromagnetic gun. Just because the problem is caused does not mean that it can be directly controlled. Well, you just use your mind. Controlling electricity to operate in a certain state produces magnetism, but it does not mean that you can directly control the generated magnetism with your thoughts. The ability of the gun sister is to control both electricity and magnetism. To control electricity or magnetism alone, to make an electromagnetic gun, you should use some tools to control the generated electricity or magnetism to form an electromagnetic gun.

The writing doesn't look like Pirates anymore, it's really boring and boring to watch.

It's a bit weak, with a lot of minor and major irritations, and it was awkward to read throughout. I've been a bookworm for 8 years.

A thunderous fruit made you write more than 90 chapters. It's really outrageous. It's really outrageous.

There are more than 50 chapters from finding the Thunder Fruit to eating it.

Is there something wrong? Have you never watched One Piece? You really deserved it when you wrote Moonlight Oden as Yasuo. Kaido's character is also wrong. Black Carbon Orochi made you awesome.

I think the author can refer to it Derivative fields 1 Extreme electric heating (scalding, magma) 2 Electromagnetic field (piaopiao, gravity, gravity, repulsion) 3 Electromagnetic weapons (Golden Sword, Railgun) 4 Stimulating Cells (Li Xiaolong, Wolverine) 5Matter Annihilation (Dark Phoenix)

I just want to say one thing, without a career, there would be no woman. As long as there is a career, there will be more women.