Everyone's Castle: All Living Beings Play Chess

I hope I can change the castle later. Why must I write about the undead? In Invincible Heroes, or similar strategy games, the undead are all weaklings, let alone the undead natural disasters, they are just cannon fodder And as a normal person, you like to look at skeletons every day, and then turn into skeletons yourself? The golden finger is very good, but the undead really can't stand it. Let's see what is written later.

The author. . . Your writing style. . . It's amazing It's just that I didn't understand the plot.

Front row tip, invincible hero category, but the author writes about Castle of the Undead...

Since about Chapter 80, I have been waiting for the author to give a reasonable explanation. For example, SSS was so suppressed by SS that he could not lift his head up. A person who almost killed himself 2 or 3 times said that he would live after being reborn on the cross. To be honest, don't be the first. Isn't it better to be honest and be a member of the public?

The author is not very good at expressing himself, and his language is neither refined nor popular... In other words, what did you write?

Hurry up and kill this woman. It's so disgusting.

All sentient beings are chess players. Have you ever heard of Wanning Xiangqi?

The creativity is quite good, but the story arrangement is also so-so. However, the language is too obscure and difficult to understand, and the explanatory text is long and explanatory. Many people said that the plot was a bit incomprehensible. A good idea was wasted.

Why is this routine all about undead? It was quite good at first, but then I got tired of aesthetics. Really, I felt tired and had no feeling at all.

The damage calculation of the violent goblin in Chapter 3 is wrong. I hope the author can correct it soon.

Everyone can travel through time and become a lord. Random arms and undead types can be copied and pasted here.

It's so abrupt, the characters and battle plot are very stiff, and it feels like there are thousands of words missing at the end of each chapter.

Give the author some suggestions. At the beginning, I read the first five chapters, and I only had a superficial concept of the environment and layout near the castle, such as the front door and the back door. Then talents and other things are automatically displayed. When encountering an enemy, the system will remind you and then the battle will begin automatically. I think we can first conduct real-life investigations, detours, etc., And then the protagonist can decide whether to develop talents according to the situation. After reading the previous chapters, the settings are fairly clear and there are no obvious contradictions. But the details are really poor. The danger of the environment is only described with words such as danger, and the reader has no sense of urgency at all. The whole thing is really like the protagonist playing chess (regardless of whether the talent is developed or not)

There are a lot of typos. There are several typos in the first picture.

I ask what is the use of having too many people in a high-energy world?

Strategy articles don't need cool articles. Cool writing is easy to be mindless.

Speechless =_=, the skeleton is acceptable at the main start, but the question is, is the unit sent a unicorn?

22-23 What? I missed 22.1-22.9, Right?

The writing is awkward as hell and the plot is blunt.

I couldn't bear it after seeing Chapter 15. The undead gave a unicorn. What happened? At the beginning, the skeleton fell down and died. Is it understandable that it suppressed the protagonist? Then finally, Long Aotian had a chance, and a unicorn was randomly chosen. This was not suppressing, but rubbing on the ground.