Clouds Rise Valoran

I thought the author would take me to experience the scenery of Runeterra, but he wrote more than two hundred chapters about the war between Demacia and Noxus... Since we know the grandeur of the world and don't explore the truth, why does the protagonist fight like ants? Glory? Justice? What does it matter in front of the giant? What does it mean before the void? The Star-Forging Dragon King can create and destroy stars with just a few clicks... The scenery on the thousand-year-old ice of Freljord, the isolated Ionia, the two sides of Piltover and Zaun, Pilgewater where pirates clamor, the mysterious Shadow Island, the yellow sand sky of Shurima, towering into the clouds Targon... At this level of procrastination, even if I write more than 500,000 words in one block, I can't finish the areas I want to see even if I write 10 million words, and depending on the results, sooner or later... Do I come to watch game fan fiction to watch war movies? The impression given by the whole novel is that of nobility, justice, glory, war, reform, liberation... I thought it was a novel about the history of ancient Rome's struggle... In the current environment, war-themed content is really boring and makes me want to vomit... I am curious, is this easier to write for the author or better for the readers? Am I just bored? The author of DND is like this too. He often brings a bunch of young men to fight, and it is always about lord activities, power struggles, etc., Yuck... I suggest changing the name of the book: "The Justice of Demacia in Time Travel" Purely complaining, welcome to chat, my keyboard is already thirsty

I can't stand it any longer 1. The combat power system is broken. Are the people I met in the early stages considered to be the high-end combat power of the entire force? Evelynn can be ranked so high. Demacia's combat power is ranked among the world's strongest. Except for the two sisters, who are both mortal-level T4t5, how can the Demacia group still fight against the void? The top celestial warriors are as strong as the star spirits, can you catch up? 2. Some stories are obviously used before the official follow-up is released. They are not as good as Hex's heart, and they do not comply with the settings, and there are often contradictions in the context. 3. The writing focus is biased, with many anecdotes and less focus. For example, after the protagonist killed those 1k people, did the protagonist's mentality change? You just brushed it off, but you can see that he has changed. It's very sudden. This thing doesn't mean that if you write that he has become cold, he will be really cold, but it is revealed through a little bit of psychological details. My opponent said you are so cold. Why can't I feel it? I feel like you are so nagging and so girly. 4 How is this game played by the protagonist? He just logs in and starts playing. He doesn't watch any of the activities, and he doesn't even take a look at the lobby. It doesn't mean that you have to know all the stories like the protagonist Hai Xin, but you also need to know a few. Okay, ask the one who doesn't know the story of the man-stealing Silas? How much momentum did the officials create at that time? At this point, do you think I know a man who steals a man? Everyone knows that the prince was almost captured, but when it comes to the protagonist, besides knowing his skills, he is really just an idiot. 5Why is the protagonist so fond of his parents? Can you give me a deeper reason? You've only known each other for a few days, and you're just kissing me like this? It was just a brief introduction, and the feelings became deeper. Your description has no psychology at all. Some things seem to be unclear. Why are you suddenly so close to the protagonist? I can't understand it. It's just like giving you a meal and letting you try an appetizer. I think it's great and I'm looking forward to it. In the end, I give you a lot of Aoli. How does it feel? ? 6 What's the plot? Who wants to read your Demacia orthography to ease the change? When you talk about change, it doesn't make people feel profound, that is, I want to change. I don't know if the author has considered some of the protagonist's ideas. It's disgusting. It's really disgusting. You talk about justice one after another and practice double standards. If it's not true, why did you think about it? One moment he said he felt sympathy for ordinary people, and the next moment he said it was a matter of family background, they were all guilty, and I just wanted peaceful change. Isn't this pure NT? The author has really thought poorly about some things. Why do mages riot? Why do most civilian mages support it? Why can Silas be so extreme and still be supported? Have you really considered the issue of the rights of the forbidden demons clearly? If you, like Hai Xin, write in a fast and concise way, and the logic can stand up to scrutiny, there will be no readers who will panic when they look at it.

I have read more than a hundred chapters and I feel quite comfortable. Maybe I like reading this kind of slow-burning writing. But the introduction should not be so broad... If this is a novel telling the story of Demacia, then it is good to write it this way. But there was a lot of foreshadowing, and as a result, so many chapters were written on just one war, which is not accessible to the current era. Although I feel good, I still suggest that the author can speed up the process a little bit.

The following big event probably involves the conflict between the two cities, and this is probably the Noxian spy war. . . . Ionia, the founding of Shadowstream, the vastayan war with the people, the Noxian invasion. . . . The alternation of power in Bilgewater and the arrival of Soul-Eating Night. . Purification of the Shadow Isles. . . The Rise of Furrima The witch spirits and the Ascended Ones have arrived. . . Top God's Peak involves the entire star realm, from the conflict between the sun, moon, and star spirits to the differences in concepts between the two-winged star gods. . . . . Then came Void's final counterattack. . . The order of each city is arbitrary. The protagonist should not become stronger before the star world plot. The plot should only involve local heroes, so that the protagonist can act as a vertical and horizontal bearing. By the way, he can pick up girls, build relationships with the characters, and tell the hero's background story. Don't stir up the psychological fluctuations of the protagonist too much. From the actions described by the author, we readers will piece together the heart of the plump hero without you having to worry so much. . . . . . These are my suggestions as a reader. . . . Come on, author, you can watch me continue to chase you below, but you can't watch me leave voluntarily, no more bbs

Come on, author... The writing is really good League of Legends has suffered heavy casualties recently, and now the only book I can read besides yours is Hex's Heart, and even Windwalker has not been able to survive the disaster. I put all my hopes on your book. I will reward you with rewards.

When I saw Chapter 218, I'll give you a brief introduction: The plot starting from Chapter 180 is too big and the author doesn't have such good writing skills After a wave of routines, the plot is greasy and disgusting, and you, the author, are not exempt from it in the end. Does the struggle of human nature, the swing of morality, and the darkness of the world need you to repeat it over and over again in your novel? Only you can see through this. Do you think you can teach us anything? Remember Lao Guo's words: Let's be funny first! Otherwise it would be too funny We are here to read novels for fun, understand?

Damn, I've added a chasing cast, don't be a eunuch!

It is not easy for the author to write so much. It is really out of love, but in the final analysis, the poor performance is also due to the quality of the book itself. The plot goes crazy after the man escapes from prison in Chapter 180, and then there are dozens of pictures in a row without the protagonist, and then there is a forced war between the angel sisters. To be honest, the plot is too outrageous, and the strength of the protagonist is not worthy of the previous major events, so he can only use mechanical deity. Then the content of these dozens of pictures becomes a big filter, directly sending away the joy of 60 to 70% of readers.

The main abuse text, although it is a Valoran world text, but I still don't like it very much. And I don't like the development of the plot. Keep talking about war, which is a war story that ignores the alliance's world view. I might as well read a historical article, at least it would be more interesting.

Is this book really interesting? It was so vicious in the early stage. People who praised this book had their consciences eaten by dogs, but they still took the money 😰😰😰😰

What on earth are you going to talk about? ? ? Isn't it annoying to have to waste so many things in the weakest city of Demacia (similar to Qingchao)?

Since the protagonist already knows that Silas is there, why not kill him earlier? As the core strength of the entire country, does Galio have no defender at all? Just force Silas to cheat.

What I hate the most when reading LoL articles is forced CP. It's best not to cobble together CPs that haven't been confirmed by the official. It's really disgusting. I don't care about harem or not, but forced CP is too *br> To be honest, I don't know why there are so few people writing LoL articles. The League of Legends universe is slowly improving. It feels good to watch the universe and write it carefully 😓

Let's not talk about whether the differences between various heroic novels and the official setting are too big to make things appear. Let's talk about logic. As a time traveler, all actions must first ensure your own survival. After all, this is not a hometown in a broad sense, but the actions of the protagonist in the middle period are a bit illogical. If you want to leave the country quickly, Ionia will solve your physical problems, and let's go to war and pick up girls. If you want to change the country to ensure your own survival, the protagonist has chosen a "bloodless reform" stance that even children in reality know is impossible to succeed. ; To prevent more people from knowing about his magical physique, the secret of the protagonist was basically revealed by himself in the early stage, and passers-by basically turned a blind eye to the background of the protagonist, and the protagonist still felt good about himself; the protagonist was very clichéd and framed (a martial arts routine from decades ago) when his relatives were killed and he was determined to take revenge. As a result, he disappeared directly in the next dozens of chapters, without even a psychological description of the protagonist having to plan, and even the joke-like gag "the protagonist is on the road to XX at this time" is hard to come up with. These are the flaws in the early stage, but I'm still looking at it later.

The book was pretty good at the beginning, except that all the female heroes who appear must like the protagonist, but after seeing Silas, it changed. It felt like a group of people with cerebral palsy, Galen looked like a fool with cerebral palsy, Lux, the Virgin with cerebral palsy, and Morgana were all written as purebred cerebral palsy. I really didn't understand. Silas was a disaster for everyone. Harmful, he killed countless people and came to power just like that. It's really awesome. The protagonist's personality is even more cerebral. He wants to change the system and doesn't do anything. He's like a fool. He screams blindly all day long and doesn't do anything. He said he was going to Ionia, and he said he wouldn't go for eight hundred years. It's really awesome.

The author's writing is quite good, but one thing you should pay attention to is that I couldn't find this book when I searched for key information such as Valoran and League of Legends. . . Author, please note that your book does not have any exposure. Even when I search for your book title, it is not in the first position?

I've read Chapter 30 and I want to ask if the function of the Forbidden Magic Stone is not common knowledge among players. Why doesn't the protagonist know about it?

I've read so much about what was said on the first floor, so I won't go into it. Author, if you want to write a good alliance article, I suggest you read Sword and Rune Land. Only that book is worthy of your introduction. This is a personal one. You are welcome to comment. I strongly agree with the first floor brother.

Protagonist: I want to go to Ionia as soon as possible to improve myself! 😂

How long has it been since the protagonist appeared? You are writing a novel, not a background story. What about the protagonist? Everything should be written around the protagonist.

I didn't expect that even if you steal a man, you won't die.

Harem literature, divorced from women. I feel like the author can't continue writing.

Newcomer, is there a female protagonist in this book? The author is awesome

I found that most of the comment sections are for pirated copies.

Come on, author, I have to finish the book even if it's not finished yet.

The master is abusive, and the plot design is really confusing I jumped directly from chapter 150 to chapter 1000. I only read the title in the middle and couldn't stand the plot. Also, I have read a lot of lol fanfics recently. Why do I always like to write what happened between Lux and Silas as if it were the Green Lord, and the relationship between Lux and the protagonist? The relationship always ends in marriage with the prince. Every book is just brutal, without any innovation or change. In every book, the protagonist is indifferent, and in every book, Lacus gives up love and accepts marriage. As a result, I really hate Lacus now. She is childish and has no courage. She has killed so many people and is still so ignorant.

There are many stories in Valoran, and Demacia and Noxus are indeed important, but this is not a reason for you to procrastinate on justice and honor, and then die in Demacia. Your profile is seriously inconsistent with the content. Looking at your resume, I thought you were traveling in the mainland and experiencing various stories. However, you stopped in Demacia and wrote boring avoidance. You had no idea what you were doing the whole time.

With over a thousand chapters and 88 discussions, how does the author persevere 🤤

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see

Shyvana and Jarvan were torn apart by book-eating designers