Interstellar Warlord

The writing is good, but what I want to say is that the author should pay attention to the financial aspect. A protagonist who does not even fight for his own real interests is unlikable. On the one hand, the protagonist is short of money, and on the other hand, he spends a lot of money. Using money to maintain relationships is the lowest form of practice. If you give one million today, what about tomorrow, and the day after tomorrow? And people's desires are endless. If you give one million today, others will be grateful. If you give another one million in the future, others will think you are sending a beggar away. The protagonist only does this because he knows that as long as he needs money urgently, someone will give him a large sum of money in various ways. This way of writing is very cliché. , Has long since been eliminated. Just like the early online game novels, the protagonist's artifacts and holy pets are not used by Shang Que and they are given away to people in the guise of making friends. The same is true for your last book. The management is also a mess. The cost of dismissing one guild member is enough to keep your entire guild busy for a month.

I don't understand why we have to fight against that hostile civilization now, and fight in our own home base in a year. Although we can definitely win, why wait a few years before trying again? The protagonist himself also knows that the most lacking thing is time. Even if he can succeed now, can he eat the biggest cake? There are only two legions now, including those from his hometown? Not even comparable to those senior military leaders, let alone lords. At that time, in addition to honor and so on, the cake after the fortress is captured will still be distributed to others. Why don't you wait for yourself to become stronger? We have been at war for tens of thousands of years, and you are missing this moment? Wait ten to eight years, or twenty to thirty years, and you will have a lot of Immortal Star-Losers, not to mention the fleet, at least the number of resets, can't we fight again by then? It is designated that you can eat the biggest cake. Is there no other plot if you don't play this during this time period?

Epic corpse fraud, the author is really awesome

Mystery, you are awesome, your address has not been exposed yet. 🤔

The author's ideas are still very good, and his writing style is also good. Unfortunately, life is stressful. I don't agree with it but I understand it. I hope this book will be a big hit.

The Milky Way in the palm of your hand, the star system in your palm

When I saw two hundred and fifty-five, I stopped pursuing it. Maha, just continue to abuse your protagonist. I don't understand what's going on in your head.

The more I read, the more frustrated I became, and I gave up reading the book.

What I wrote above is pretty good. After unlocking the 500 million-damage cannon, the supporting actor directly uses his wits to provoke, and then the protagonist takes out the cannon and slaps him in the face. Suddenly I didn't want to watch anymore.

After mining, after paying off the debt from the auction, wouldn't it be okay to go back and develop while mining over time? Why do you have to mess with Bruwan out of nowhere? I have been wandering around outside, developing my own planet and advancing to become a military leader. I have put aside the main line and have to run around to lower my intelligence