The Warlord's Throne

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If you have too much power, you can write some satisfying stories. The people who read your books are all people who like satisfying stories. You don't need to force yourself to show off or slap people in the face. It's just the kind of story where you have to use your power to defeat your opponent when you have a conflict of interest!

It's already a mess! The pacing feels too fast; it's like the protagonist becomes a god after finishing high school and college! The key issue is that high school was barely covered, just a short training session. College is even worse; he hasn't even enrolled, just attended a summer camp, and he's practically a god already—we haven't even seen the school, and he's already graduated?

Actually, the reader could have been turned off when the male protagonist transformed into a giant dragon during the battle. The powerful cheat ability wasn't properly developed and utilized; it was really boring to just transform into a dragon and win by physically brute force. Did the author forget that the protagonist is a mage? According to the setting, mages should be far stronger than warriors. I'm off the page.

This is pointless. A perfectly good premise has been ruined. Warlord isn't about individual heroism; the protagonist becomes a god directly, so what's the point of soldiers and heroes? Faith is completely useless; it's not a Shinto story. And they keep padding the updates with two chapters for every one and a half chapters. You can skip around without worrying. One world has dozens of chapters of filler, how many of them are actually important?

The protagonist is so strong that he can handle everything alone without needing any subordinates. This isn't a leading genre; it's a mythological one. What's the use of having dragons as his minions? Are they just there to serve his faith? The war has nothing to do with the minions; the protagonist pacifies the world and everything is fine.

It's getting worse and worse. It started off quite well; the Warlords were a system, and the protagonist was competing with other lords. But then what? It started veerging into a Shinto-style novel. What's the point of the war domains you're writing now? It's just to reach the word count. What kind of garbage is this? Don't you see how the domains are used in battles?

Stop wasting time here. Can't you just open a separate skill description? You have to post this every few pages.

I've read three books by this author; two had terrible endings, and this one was completely abandoned. It's unbelievable. I'll never read his books again.

I found it rather confusing; the protagonist was portrayed as incredibly powerful, yet he was easily defeated.