Interstellar Warlord

I didn't see the role of the pig's feet's own talent at all. Maybe I looked too quickly and didn't pay attention. As a bastard, Zhuji ran to join the team created by the girl from the Yu family just like ordinary people, and then even wanted to be a dog for the girl for a skill that he didn't even know the use of. As for how to write it later, I don't know. Anyway, I withdrew it when I saw it.

There is still a problem with the rhythm of the plot, but the main problem is the ending. 95% Of your content is used to write things before level 5. It only takes 5% of the space to write from level 5 to level 8. So many things are covered in one stroke.

I thought it was quite interesting at first, but until Chapter 58, I just couldn't figure it out. He has a super invincible character and has to be a dog for others. I can only say that this protagonist is indeed quite unbelievable.

It's good to watch, but maybe the author saw that not many people would watch it, and the ending was a bit rushed, but you can really keep watching it!

1. It is a science fiction novel with a game as the background. If it is not a game, there should be no mention of NPCs. It will make people think it is just a game. People who have not played Eve will not want to read it. 2. The so-called data flow is to pile up a lot of space to write about the attributes of various ships, weapons and people, which is too serious. 12+12+11=33 Is also called data flow? 3. There is no literary talent and the plot is confusing. 4. It is so easy to make money that currency and commodity prices have collapsed. There are also people who do not pay taxes on countless transactions at the beginning and do not consider other costs. They only pay taxes a few times later. 5. The enemy wants to kill the protagonist. If the protagonist hits part of the opponent's ship and runs away, this doesn't even count as revenge.

It's so verbose! What a science fiction article, it feels like playing an online game. Moreover, a large number of fragments in the article describe some peripheral things, like a textbook, and have nothing to do with the main line. It is really annoying to read.

What are you writing about? It's a complete mess. It's about the game content. I can't give you even one point for this book.

Why is it not good? Because the content is not bad, but there are too many professional terms, which makes it look more confusing and has a small audience. What was originally a good science fiction novel has been turned into a novel that describes battleships. It is a ghost if you can read it comfortably. I hope that most of us who don't understand the principles can read these few words and not curse you twice a day. It is considered merciful.

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It's so confusing to watch! , Is this an online game novel? Or science fiction?