I Logged Into the Primordial World from the Cultivation World

There's absolutely nothing wrong with writing about the bloodline of the primordial dragon race. Don't listen to the readers who changed the so-called dragon bloodline. The primordial dragon race was originally the most elite race in the primordial world. If there were no karmic entanglements and no saints appeared, could you name a race more elite than the dragons? Don't bring up anything about innate background or anything like that; that's a person, not a race.

I've subscribed to the latest chapter and finished reading it. I'm still defending your plot in various ways, but then I noticed that my previous post questioning the plot had been deleted. That post only questioned the plot, and the tone was quite mild. I've seen other posts with much stronger tone, and they weren't deleted. So, I can only say, you can delete whatever you want, I'm leaving. Goodbye.

In the primordial era, people were human, while Earthlings evolved from apes. Therefore, the protagonist, after transmigrating to the primordial era, shouldn't be human anymore, but rather a monkey demon.

It's unreasonable to forcibly equate the Nascent Soul and Void Refinement realms of cultivation with the Immortal realms of the Primordial World. The main issue is that many novelists have some vague understanding of cultivation realms, so this forcibly lowers the prestige of the Primordial World. It would be better to add a few more realms before Void Refinement for comparison; otherwise, it feels very jarring.

The primordial world was overflowing with spiritual energy and elixirs, but spirit stones still needed to be brought in from reality.

It would have been perfectly fine to just cultivate immortality in both realms... But then they got involved with bloodlines... And even more so with dragon lineage inheritance... And to make matters worse, a dragon lineage technique is upgraded by killing other dragons... What kind of filial son has a dragon lineage inheritance?

The protagonist is transporting things from the primordial era to the present while simultaneously concealing his identity from his family. Author, do you really think that's possible? You're selling things without hiding your identity or appearance, treating everyone in the world like fools?

I've been reading your books for a while now, and I quite like them. Write well this time; otherwise, you'll lose popularity. With popularity, even if your writing is terrible, you can easily make a living.

Generally, people ascend from smaller worlds to larger worlds through cultivation. This protagonist, born into a larger world and even able to travel to the Primordial World, goes through the trouble of studying at a small world's immortal sect and then striving to squeeze into the larger world where the sect is located.

The sect already knows the protagonist has a Void Refinement stage avatar, yet they still want to turn against him because of a Heaven-Opening Spiritual Treasure? The same applies to the previous example. What gives a Zhong, a late-stage Nascent Soul cultivator, the confidence to fight to the bitter end against the protagonist, who has the background of a Void Refining Dragon God, just for the…