Veigar the Mage

I have read many chapters of this book, and I like reading it anyway. Abide by the laws of the empire and be decisive in killing, which is much better than those whining virgin slapping texts.

Age is a big mistake, even writing 16 years old is better than 11 years old! How can an eleven-year-old without plug-ins complete training that even adults cannot?

The biggest failure is not darkness or humanity. It is indeed what the author said himself. It is a completely self-exciting novel. In the past, I felt high about writing about Goldfinger, so I wrote more about Goldfinger. Later, when I felt high about writing about battles, I wrote about slap-in-the-face wars. The terrible thing is that I basically threw away Goldfinger.

After being convinced, a fake Taoist priest in the comments came to argue. Dark novels insist on distinguishing the good and evil of human nature. Is the evil spirit reincarnated? This is the first time I met someone who was making comments in the comments building. I will first give the author a 10,000-dollar reward for being published. If Taoist priests really want to make excuses, why don't they come and reward them on the forum? The more rewards you give, maybe other authors will write according to your ideas, how about it?

This book has a lot of poisonous points. It was Shia. If a normal person thought about it, he would have been cut into pieces and divided into five pieces. The protagonist not only did not punish him, but also reused him. What is this behavior? For the sake of a person who betrayed him, he imprisoned himself. Made like this? Is the protagonist not Shi Lezhi? I can't understand. Just ask about Lao Shenzi's disgusting love? What the hell?

This book is a typical novel under the official system. It is obvious that the author's historical level is not low, and the control of the system also shows the various criticisms of an upgraded version of the European medieval empire. But there are actually a lot of things that don't make sense logically. Whether it's the age of the protagonist or the military loopholes, it's all speechless, and the same is true for the extraordinary level. It was said earlier that dark magicians are rare, and elemental magicians can't be beat in single combat. Later, for the purpose of decapitation tactics, a squadron of more than thirty shadow mages with multiple medians immediately appeared. With so many people, it doesn't matter if they can't beat a high-level mage. They can also be stolen by pig's feet, so forget it. Then the author's understatement of guerrilla warfare really showed off my face. Playing guerrilla warfare in the city is as funny as why there was no large-scale resistance in Paris during World War II and why Nogi Nogi-nori wanted pigs to attack during the Russo-Japanese War. Taking a step back, a magically modified version of a superpower is so amazing that you, an eleven or twelve-year-old boy, are bossing you around. You really think you are Han Xin. In the end, the high-achieving leader was sent away again. On the road, he got involved with a scheming bitch on the pretext of making money. A chamber of commerce system actually thought that by controlling the bottom managers, it could indirectly control the entire chamber of commerce. This plot is not only somewhat similar to the first sequence, but the process is exactly the same as that of King of Darkness and Billions of Gods and Demons. The above are the shortcomings of the first two hundred pictures, and it is really uncomfortable to look at them later. This book cannot be called a dark novel at all. Although it kills decisively, it is really uncomfortable to read. It is not enjoyable in many places, and the logical party is even slapped in the face. In fact, the pleasure for readers is very simple. If you are wanted by the Tribunal after about 100 pages, and you escape, whether it is to join the Chamber of Commerce or the Royal Army, it will be more comfortable than staying in the empire all the time. That high-ranking magician Everyone knows that the director of the Law Enforcement Bureau is the hero of the kingdom. Based on this, even if the kingdom is not clean, it will still make people lick a favor or go directly to the academy when they have 200 cards. The talent of the protagonist will definitely win over him. No matter what, it is more practical than investing in a scheming bitch who even wants to be a free hand. A large chamber of commerce will never be controlled by low-level managers. This is a perfect subject, and as the author said, he doesn't care much about the readers' opinions and does not cater to the psychology of ordinary readers. The reason why readers like to kill decisively is precisely because reality is already difficult.

The military style under the guise of magic style is very low-end. Go study military theory...

The protagonist doesn't feel like a time traveler at all, more like an aboriginal who wants to live. You said it's normal to kill someone to survive. Then, first kill Carlo's brother who had the grace to save his life, and then kill Carlo and the store manager. This is understandable. Just treat the protagonist as a selfish person, and then watch Carly, who saved him twice, be killed. You say this is something a normal person can do.

The introduction is very misleading. After reading the introduction, I thought it was a cool article about killing people and stacking magic skills, but it turned out to be a cunning military war article, and the war plan is very childish. The protagonist seems to be a smart person, and a powerful country that relies on military strength is supported by the protagonist, a modern man with no military literacy. This is not a very exciting story, because the protagonist is stabbed in the back every day, and there is no crushing pleasure brought by rapid upgrades. As for the darkness, you can't tell, the world is like this.

This is an alien military hegemony novel that talks about the alliance. Mages are dispensable. Those who come in for the word mage can leave.