The All-Purpose Demon-Detecting Mirror

Author Jun, I just read Chapter 241. But I want to tell you, please write less quantifiers. The curse seal can be withdrawn at any time, within three miles at one time, and within ten feet at the other time. In the Fierce Demon Realm, there are only 5 minutes left. After a while and ten minutes passed, it became negative. There is still time. If you write any more, your math teacher's coffin won't be able to hold it down. It's fun just to read the content, but when I look at these quantifiers, I immediately feel embarrassed. Please, use less, it will affect the readers' reading experience.

It's very well written, why so few people read it? The story is quite rigorous! At least it's better than some writers who are full of holes and haven't filled them yet.

The purpose of this pig's foot monastic discipline is to "see everywhere", which I personally think makes a lot of sense! Many fantasy novels claim that pig trotters practice Buddhism for the sake of immortality, but in fact most of the pig trotters are either fighting or preparing to fight throughout the novel. Immortality is a piece of shit.

This book is really not an ordinary one. You can get the golden elixir during your Qi training period. It is the most awesome protagonist I have ever read.

Fantasy and fantasy can be mysterious or dreamy, but the design and arrangement that are brainless and illogical and cannot be justified are probably not very suitable for people on earth to read. I can't stand the last 10% of this book.

Why do you specifically describe how handsome the male protagonist is, so handsome that all men love him? Are you doing this to attract female readers? Or is it just for cool-looking readers like elementary school students? Just this section is very uninvolving.

How can I put it, the book is a good book. But what the author presents. It gives me the feeling of being forced to show off, forced to share the same hatred, forced to... This feeling makes me uncomfortable to watch. Thank you Bumin! The above remarks are purely personal opinions, please don't criticize them if you don't like them. Thanks. At the same time, the author can see this.

In fact, the protagonist of this book is quite well portrayed, but after the first small copy was opened, the subsequent plot completely collapsed. The author is great, do you know Fengling, the great god in the world? In fact, I think you are very talented in writing, but I don't know how you got obsessed with it. You want to be unique and separate yourself from today's mainstream routines. In fact, you have your own style in writing books, especially the female characters that many fantasy masters like to fall into, and you also write them brilliantly. As a result, it seems that he doesn't like to follow routines and makes various mistakes, which leads to a complete collapse of the plot. Do you know what I regret most? It was a book that could become a god, but it was ruined by the writing. If the author had followed the routine, it would have been easier, and the book's score would have been at a higher level. Don't believe it, according to the mainstream writing, the protagonist will be a big fan if he succeeds in getting slapped in the face. After being disfigured, he will be treated as a guest of honor by the country instead of being slapped hard by the Ninth Princess. After all, he is representing the country. You can write it separately from the country and the Ninth Princess. Just like in Dou Po, it was Nalan who slapped the face instead of Yunzong behind him, so in the end the sect leader was good! If Yun Zong slaps Xiao Yan in the face, and finally wants to fight back, wouldn't it mean that he wants to kill the sect? How can personal grievances be elevated to the level of the country? Is the entire country so dark, with no one who knows how to understand others? Forget it if you write it like this. If the map is made larger, the protagonist can change the country and then come back to slap him in the face later. The problem is that there is something wrong with your map. In the early stage, you basically stayed in a small town, but suddenly it rose to the national righteousness, and skipped a lot in the middle. It was like everyone was practicing qi and playing, and suddenly they were fighting against the golden egg or the god. How could this make the protagonist slap in the face? If one's strength grows too fast, it will easily collapse. If one's strength grows too slowly, that's nonsense. If you can win a battle after a big gap, you will suffer a loss of one thousand and eight hundred, and it will be extremely frustrating, just like the battle between the Nine Princesses. The show-off and slap-in-the-face scenes in the early stage were obviously written so well, but the subsequent plot seems to have been written by a different person. This book only looks at the early stage, it really has the qualifications to become a god. Because I see a style that many authors don't have, including the brotherhood portrayed by Master Feng Ling, the stable structure of Dou Po, and the sense of humor of Master Shidong. I really think the author writes well, and he might be a fantasy master again. You must know that every line is like a mountain. Fantasy has always been the easiest and most difficult category to write. How many category masters have fallen into this category! This book is such a shame.

This book is very cheerful and comfortable to read in the early stage, but it is too depressing in the end. I saw the author saying that writing upbeat articles is not interesting, but today's society is too depressing, and reading novels is just to relax and feel refreshed. However, the author, your novels are so depressing, which must have caused the loss of many readers. You also said that the subscription is not high, but readers will not spend money to find happiness. After seeing that the mood has been very depressing in the end, first suppressing and then uplifting, but you suppressed too much and promoted too little. I think this should be the reason why the author's performance is not very good. However, this novel is still very exciting. The writing style is very good. If you stick to it, you can become a god. I hope the author can write more exciting articles and don't suppress it first and then suppress it. After all, life is too difficult. I can only find pleasure in novels. I hope the author can see it. Honest advice from an old reader!

I can't even watch it without my fucking brains.