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After reading dozens of chapters The Bronze Dragon mission was like a fairy tale Thunder and Bai cried for no reason Bai Mei has no sense of existence, no opinion, and no character Tang Friend Tang Friend Tang Friend The above are a few poisonous points that I remember, and there are many more that I didn't remember. In summary: college students' creativity, high school students' writing style, junior high school students' details, elementary school students Tang Youyou

As I watched along the way, I felt a lot of problems: Tang Shidao's enigmatic view of emotions and time Extremely scumbag... How many years has it been since he left his eldest wife behind? This one is suspected of objectifying women (the five-person group has the most scenes, followed by Morosa, and the eldest wife is last, but she is actually last? Except for the beginning stage, occasionally the return home stage, and the open plane synchronization stage, there are scenes, but it doesn't matter at other times if there is none. Tool person) Too many colloquial words give people the feeling of telling a story: Must, definitely, haha, absolutely, big It's not that it can't be used, but the frequency of repetition is high, which gives people a sense of rusticity The villain is too mentally retarded. He is the most mentally retarded brother in the world. He is reckless when he comes up and will die if he is not reckless. The protagonist is completely invincible. Except for the puzzle part, there is nothing difficult to stop him... Attached are some personal impressions of the characters Tang Shidao: Oh, Okay, no problem, I don't care, you can do whatever you want Emotional Viewing Scum When solving difficult problems, he is Tang Shidao with humanity, but at other times he is the Cursed Human Emperor who lacks humanity Bai Meiren: What do you look like? In which chapter did you appear? How long has it been since you appeared? Morosa: The one with more status among the tool men Su Honglin, Elf Queen: When was the last time you appeared? Group of five: More like a royal palace than the eldest wife, with enough scenes

Before reading this novel, I came in and read the reviews. I felt that this was a brain-burning and high-IQ novel. After reading more than 100 chapters for a few days, I realized that this is a book full of bugs and can only be read without thinking. It's normal for novels to have bugs. After all, it's impossible for one person to be so rigorous when creating, but others have already suggested it, so you can modify it appropriately so that it doesn't feel so toxic when you read it later. Congratulations on the completion!

I thought the first 400 chapters were quite interesting, but in the end it was basically a routine. Someone was looking for trouble for the protagonist. The protagonist was awesome but didn't use all his strength and fought in a way they couldn't understand. Most people couldn't understand it. Then a small number of people who understood it explained how awesome the protagonist was, and then said they looked down on the protagonist because he was young. Basically, this is the routine behind it

It feels like it has changed since about chapter 200. The plot of the original world is too complicated and there are too many scenes, and even the plot of the mage world is inexplicable. . . Although I understand that this is about digging a hole, digging a hole should also have ups and downs. . The plot is a bit too bland, and I still don't understand what the staff-making characters like Lei Dazhuang do, which really makes me quit. . There are a lot of people in the original world who don't understand what is going on, and it looks really baffling When I first watched it, I didn't want to skip a chapter, even if it was an urban plot about making a staff, but then I felt that skipping five chapters at a time was not enough, there was no plot, and there were too many descriptions of irrelevant characters I have always been curious about why Bai Meiren became the heroine. I obviously didn't know her at all at the beginning, and then he took her with him after a show. Why?

The author is a big water monster. He raised his paw if he felt the same way. 😒😒😒 The author has time to comment in the book review area, so he might as well write more words every day.

The subject matter of this book is very novel. I read the first 100 pictures and it was just right. The second part is full of mindless and cool articles. Especially in the later period, the combat power system completely collapsed. I don't know what it is writing. Anyway, I didn't understand it very well. The most important thing is that the setting of one agent and one mage won my heart, and the rest is just so-so.

This book is good, but I feel like it should be almost finished...

I'm almost finishing this book if I keep it up, what do I plan to write in the next book? (ﾟДﾟ)ﾉ (Don't look at the value, trumpet)

This book is like a matryoshka doll. All the contents have various upgrade stages. If the author wants to continue, it is easy. But now that I have finished reading it, I don't know how the author did it. I have also read other books, but not as seriously as this one. Maybe because human beings are also like matryoshka dolls in nature. They make mistakes repeatedly, trial and error, and then upgrade and transform. It is very similar.

If the name Bai Meiren had been used in ancient times, her parents would have been beaten to death by her grandfather. The ancients called beautiful jade "Shen", and the word "Shen" when used in people's names means "beauty" or "beautiful man". For example, "He Shen", a famous figure in the Qing Dynasty, described his appearance in history books as a peerless handsome man. Therefore, the correct name should be "Bai Shen" rather than "White Beauty".

The progress bar has passed halfway, and as I read along, I found that the only thing left in the protagonist's life is the pursuit of truth (pretending), which is as compact and frequent as Li Qiye, the eternal persecutor. Of course, I can't catch up with this old senior. The setting of the world view is very exciting, but I feel that the protagonist is the author. He is a machine that only pursues the truth (pretends). I even think that Yihui, who only appears in a few appearances, is much cuter than the protagonist (due to a little bit of nonsense), which may have something to do with my taste, but because the setting of the world view is really good, I have no choice but to continue watching it (so delicious)

I would like to ask if Qidian books can be discounted? If you can get a discount, I suggest you get a discount on this book as well. The price is a bit expensive for newbies. It seems to be more than 200 if you book it all. I think if the price is lower, many people who watch pirated copies will support the genuine ones.

Everyone seems to be invincible if they gain the protagonist's abilities. Everyone thinks they can beat the protagonist 😥 Everyone is stupid. Everyone thinks the protagonist is stupid😥

I think the protagonist should not be named Tang, but Wuhe🙏

You can be weak in strength, but you must have enough face 😏

After reading Chapter 224, the direction of the book completely changed. I don't know if it was predetermined or what. In short, the style of the book changed completely after the Great Zhou Travels, from humorous and intelligent to a novice and full-level invincible novel. After the Great Zhou Travels, the author seemed to have been deprived of his life.

Core values ​​are controllable power, innovative wisdom and a desire for excellence, which express the core of Confucianism. I like books like this. As a person in the era of mass production in the 21st century, you have power. You only follow the script and do not use it, innovate or dig out the book. I can only say that you are a primitive person living in the 21st century.

Conjecture about the ending of this book Conjecture 1: As the introduction of the book says, I am the only mage in the world. Maybe the protagonist will become the only mage in the end. Others are just like mortals in front of the protagonist, and he is the "mage". Conjecture 2: Transcendence and emptiness. In a certain chapter, it was mentioned that the gate of colorless nothingness can reach a place that seems to be nothingness. I don't know in which chapter it was mentioned, and I know the secret there.

Another point is that I feel that the protagonist is invincible and has no sense of crisis. As long as he swipes the Mage Network, his power will increase slowly. As long as he does not do tasks, he will never be in danger. As long as he swipes casually, level up and buy some longevity medicine from that count, he can easily live for thousands of years. This Mage Network is like raising waste. Moreover, the protagonist's mission feels very casual, uninspiring, and simple. I have never seen a strong sense of threat. The power is insubstantial and a bit brainless. There are many unreasonable settings, but if you insist on saying it is a setting, I have nothing to say. I just want to express my dissatisfaction. The book seemed okay at first, with a slightly pretentious feeling (it took me a while to read it), but it was boring as I read it.

Chicken Soup for the Soul keeps repeating itself, but it can't be written differently, and it can't arouse resonance. It just keeps buzzing – I hope it will improve next time. ↗θ^θ↘Although there may not be 😭

The realistic plot feels meaningless, and you don't intend to change reality, so you can just brush it off in one stroke. You have to write a lot. The character's IQ and plot logic can't be said to be bad or good. It's probably the kind of writing that is a bit worse than normal. I don't want to evaluate the writing, and just talk to myself. In short, big bugs don't have a bunch of small poisons. They force people to show off their IQ and force passers-by to praise them. The highlight is creativity, and creativity is all that's left.

I quite like this book, in fact I like the style. Quietly articulating the known and expressing the unknown.

Happy New Year and good luck in the Year of the Rat!

From the early stage to more than 200 chapters, the concept was careful, all the pitfalls were filled, the writing was okay, and the lines were clear. However, from the beginning, the middle part was too watery. It was upgraded and upgraded to be pretentious and pretentious. It was repeated to torture. The readers were too tired to understand what the author wanted to write and how to express a story and line. It was too messy and disorganized. The middle part was really difficult to accept. It felt like the style of two people.

It was pretty good at first, but I guess the author didn't consider that he would be popular when he designed the outline and map, so he made it very casual. To put it simply, he was discriminated against, slapped in the face by pretending to be cool, and upgraded and changed the map. Perhaps because he is reluctant to give up good grades, the author repeated the above plot many times. Older readers can see that the author has fallen into a vicious circle and cannot get out. I feel like I am so out of my depth that I have nothing to see.

The borderless perfection of the Great God's Art is called "Undistanced" which is more suitable. It ignores distance and is focused on strangers. It is suitable for infinite speed. Unbounded is suitable for a type of teleportation spell, such as the Grand Portal Technique. It ignores boundaries and obstacles. You can come and go when you want.

The seven relics of the last world, the four forbidden curses are all left, but the life system is not. Is it because there are only 9 kinds now?

After reading 8 chapters, the novel itself is quite passable. However, the book reviewers are obsessed with the point of "Why do others hire the protagonist to perform healing techniques instead of learning it themselves?" Which hinders the reading experience. Let me ask, are people with this kind of thinking a sage who wants to eat meat and raise pigs by himself and never go to the market to buy it? If he wants to watch a movie, he can make it himself and never go to the theater to watch it? Mana is currency in the Mage Network. Who can make money like a brave man without spending it at home for their own entertainment? Consumption in moderation and hiring others to make up for your own shortcomings in order to complete your goals more efficiently is the best policy. The mage relationship in the book is a win-win cooperation: the protagonist Gu, who is rich in mana, plays as an assistant, and the employer gets a more secure and enjoyable combat experience, ends the adventure early, and enters the next round of training or adventure with a lot of loot; the protagonist gets enough mana, which increases his resource acquisition speed and promotion speed. According to the opinions of those "smart and witty" book friends, the employer should play solo, with no support in the bottom lane, and one blue support to fight and two sets of support skills. The enemy killing efficiency is at least half slower, and it requires more frequent stops. It takes a lot of time to recover physical strength and mana. A month-long adventure is delayed until half a year to complete the level. It is very frustrating, frustrating and tiring. In the time it takes for you to clear one book alone, others spend money (mana) to form a team and clear ten. After all, time is money, my friend

There are shortcomings in the early stage, but it is very good in the middle and late stages. I saw more than 800 comments. Looking at the comment area, most of them are complaining about the early stage. I feel that they are either rats or trolls.