The Mage Who Ushered in a Revolution

Let me tell you a few words about my thoughts after reading this. It's completely personal and not objective. The protagonist has a pretty good personality, cautious and rational, especially his goal of becoming stronger and interesting, which is a bit interesting. However, the setting of Goldfinger is deliberately unclear. To increase energy, it depends on reputation but also on mages? I always feel confused and unreliable. Especially using the lottery mode makes people feel very passive and insecure. Moreover, spells are not systematic and there is no way to do research. I don't know about other people, but I read wizard novels. What I love most is the research part. It feels like growing up with the protagonist, rather than simply being given a golden finger. "Moves", "Spells" and "Abilities" feel like castles in the air. In addition, there are too many "secret matters" and "foreshadowing" in the article. If this is a painting, the protagonist would know it. The other parts are all foggy. Appropriate white space can help increase readers' expectations and imagination. If the proportion is too high, But it will give people the idea of ​​"can be read or not".

I saw the whitening necklace in more than sixty chapters, a mysterious test world, a world of main power, you can actually make a auxiliary equipment more expensive than the main attack equipment, and I don't know if the world you set is that everyone thinks white is beautiful or something! At the very least, you should understand some basic common sense. The reasons why China likes white skin are complicated and I won't go into details. However, there are more than just people who like white skin in the world. Moreover, your description of the Free Federation means that there are more goblins, which means there are alien races. Do you think that all people of alien races will have the same aesthetics? And even within the human race, the aesthetics are not necessarily the same. The aesthetic gap between the Western world and the Eastern world can be seen, but this is your work and you set it first! The main reason is that a foreigner buys something with a human aesthetic. The price is more expensive than a strength-testing equipment such as a magic wind staff, which makes me, a sophisticated person, embarrassed. Maybe it's the reason why men conquer the world and women conquer men! But you have to consider that not all men can accept fair-skinned girls.

The protagonist has many magic abilities and can draw many skills every time. The protagonist is rubbish, he can't always solve the enemies he encounters, and the plot always suddenly becomes incoherent.

Change what? After reading more than ten chapters, I have no strength at all. Magic is not easy to learn and relies on golden fingers. But Golden Finger is not very powerful. If you want to make a lot of progress, you should also pay attention to it in the early stage. Nothing.

No one teaches me, so I feel like I have no system when I try to figure it out on my own! Wouldn't that be a wild mage?

Everyone is inseparable from their mobile phones. A few years later, there will be a QR code engraved on the tombstone. As long as you pass by and scan it, you will know its life story, who you loved, who you hated, who you still care about. This is simply called grave sweeping. This is not terrible. What is terrible is that the other person can successfully add you as a friend.

I have read this introduction several times and I have to say it is really well written.

The biggest flaw of this book is that it is too thin and the flow is too long. Your novel is not a diary written for yourself, and there are some flaws besides that, but they are innocuous. From my personal perspective, I would accept a novel of no more than 3.5 Million words at most. I don't really want to watch more than this. I read one or two chapters of what the author wrote about the work, and it was no better than this one, or even worse. Every year, someone will write about a new subject, and the writing style will also... In short, your subject matter is really not good, no matter how strong your writing style is, you will be limited to it.

The name of this book should be "Thanks to the Six-Pointed Star for the Food"

The protagonist is too naive to popularize meditation and knightly exercise in this world where the glory belongs to himself? Still attribute the lack of scruples to poor communication? How could such nonsense be possible in this world? There are different types of poor communication of information. In ancient China, there was also poor communication of information. How about trying to become an emperor? Even if you proclaim yourself emperor in a poor fishing village, officials at all levels will report you like crazy and then brutally suppress you. Not to mention that the protagonist is in a fantasy world, not to mention that he is a hereditary noble, not to mention that he is shaking the foundation of all the ruling classes in the entire world. Without the foundation to unify the country or even the world, we dare to think about popularizing magic and knight education. What do you want those magic towers to think? What does the king think? Anyway, I don't believe that the king would know nothing about someone popularizing or even spreading the knight's advanced method to foreign countries. If his control over the country is so weak, he can just wipe his neck, what kind of king he is.