The Mage Who Ushered in a Revolution
掀起变革的魔法师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 7y ago
- English
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Personal Reading List
A personal list with no fixed genre. I've read all the books here. I tend to prefer light reads, no harems, and solid logic. (I kind of want to recommend some unfinished novels and let everyone fall into the same pit with me, hahaha.)
The Goofy and Pseudoscientific Little Den of Adorable Giant Beasts
Stories with reasonable plots and no stupid characters, plus goofy stories with wildly imaginative premises. Most are still updating, with a few already complete. They're all books I've read or am currently reading. Before book lists became a thing, I used to clear out my bookshelf every year, so these are mostly books I've read within the past year or so. The scores aren't actual ratings. They just show how much each book appealed to me.
A Tiny Little Reading List
Mainly recommending fantasy. Every day I read some books recommended by editors, and... They're all fat sheep waiting to be slaughtered. The question is whether I can fatten them up first. I added The Witch because, come on, you know why it's the banner image... If you're a new author who wants your book recommended, leave a comment. I'll read it carefully and add it right away if it's worth including. If it goes more than three days without an update, I'll remove it immediately. One more thing:
Lingyan Pavilion
Grand worlds, masterful writing, and fascinating stories unfold at the author's hand. Whether or not they're complete, they're at least worth a read.
The Creativity Tower
The main focus is creativity, nothing else. All kinds of genres.
Books I Like
I just want to read in peace.
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After reading the free chapter, here are a few random thoughts.
Here are a few thoughts after reading the book; these are purely personal opinions and not objective. The protagonist has a pretty good personality; he's cautious and rational, and his goal of becoming stronger and more interesting is quite appealing.
Seeing that whitening necklace in chapter 60-something, in a mysterious world focused on strength, you actually made a support item more expensive than a primary attack item? Also, I don't know if your world is one where everyone considers fair skin beautiful or what! At least you should know some basic common sense.
The protagonist possesses numerous magical abilities and consistently acquires a multitude of skills. However, the protagonist is incompetent, unable to handle enemies on their own, and the plot is prone to sudden and disjointed shifts.
What kind of change is this? After reading over ten chapters, I haven't seen any improvement in my own abilities. I'm not even learning magic properly, trying to rely on a cheat system. But that cheat system isn't working. If I wanted to build up my strength gradually, there should at least be something impressive in the beginning. There's nothing here.
Without guidance, figuring things out on your own is unsystematic! Isn't that what a wild mage is like?
Everyone is inseparable from their mobile phones. Years from now, tombstones will be engraved with QR codes. Anyone passing by can scan them to learn about the deceased's life story—who they loved, who they hated, and who they still cared about. This is what we call tomb sweeping. This isn't scary in itself. What's scary is that the deceased can successfully add you as a friend.
I've read this introduction several times, and I must say it's really well written.
The biggest flaw in this book is its excessively slow and drawn-out pace. Your novel isn't a diary written for yourself. There are a few other minor flaws, but they're not major issues. Personally, I can only accept novels under 3.5 Million words. Anything longer, I don't really want to read.
The book should be titled "Thanks to the Hexagram for Giving Me a Breading".
The protagonist is too naive. Popularizing meditation and knightly training techniques in a world where glory belongs to oneself? And he attributes this recklessness to poor communication? How could such absurdity exist in this world? Poor communication has different types. Even in ancient China, communication was difficult. Try becoming an emperor!