Chaotic Immortal

I suggest the author revise the opening chapter. 1. At the beginning, it was written that the protagonist's impermanent identity was inherited from his cousin. Then we looked at the situation of the protagonist's cousin's family. Even his son could not afford a wife. It can be said that the family situation was very bad. From this, we can see that the impermanent identity has many restrictions. 2. If this inheritance is very good, why not pass it to a very poor son, but to an outsider? Therefore, it should be inferred that this restriction is very detrimental to the inheritor. 3. The desolation of the cousin and the various NBs of the protagonist are too different, and there is no reasonable reason.

Just added this book to my reading list! The author adds some details.

It's a complete mess, and it's only begun after a hundred chapters. I also wrote so much nonsense that has nothing to do with the main storyline. The writing of a good creative concept is broken. Why write so much about handsome men and beautiful women? If you focus so much on appearance, why don't you just write someone who relies on appearance to practice? The writing of a good subject matter is broken. It is more annoying than writing randomly from the first one.

Like the author's other books, he has matured and is no longer good at writing. This book gives you ten golden chapters and you are not interested in reading it. Looking at the table of contents again, alas, there is really no hope.

I like the setting of this book very much, but since the heroine has been decided so quickly, there is no need for other women to get involved. After all, this is not the main plot. At most, the heroine can appear more often and show affection and write about daily life. Also, come on, speed up the progress.

A good book, but it's a pity it didn't run well

To be honest, there are more than 180 chapters, but I only read about 20 of them seriously. It's too procrastinating, and a lot of the content has not been read or has nothing to do with the main plot. The part about robbing tombs is too far-fetched. Why go to robbing tombs? You haven't spent the millions you earned in the past. Are you so short of money? It seems that the protagonist's cultivation resources are all exchanged for the Impermanence Order. What does it have to do with money? There are also many protagonists that a normal person would think of doing, but they just wouldn't do it. It's too far-fetched. . .

IQ is a flaw. We can all guess the plot after killing the funny family. Just like fighting zombies after it is released, everyone can guess the plot from the second day after it is released! Author, are you really okay with this? Your ability has been exposed. You have another enemy. Kill the boss behind Wang Jinyang. Everyone knows who it is! If written like this, it will only appear as a troll in the eyes of a few people. The ruthlessness of the protagonist is not shown, which will only make everyone think that the protagonist's IQ is not online! Try not being online! The story structure, background, etc. Are all fine, but is it really good for the plot to continue like this after it's released?

Are we going to be treated as dogs next?

The protagonist shouldn't be robbing tombs and being anchors. He should be looking at Feng Shui. Why is there no merit or luck in this book?

TMI DE A book with a good beginning was ruined by the author. What is written after this is directly preparing to start a harem. Do you know where the focus of writing is. Too many routines are poison. Please read Jidao Tianmo or Kou Daozheng in "Gun Da". The more you write, the more crooked they are. It's really annoying to read. Brothers, if you think what I said makes sense, please go up and let the author take a look 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆.

I once had many big dreams and even wanted to sacrifice myself rather than be a yes man.

The author must be in trouble! You can go and read "A Monster Cultivation to Immortality"

The songs in the list flow with the past. I secretly look at your Weibo when I am alone.

Is there any trick? I wish I could know that I've thought through everything I've been through.

I'm just fat. Why can't I gain weight if I eat? That's the real disadvantage.

The hands stretched out silently in the darkness, the cold air is like fire, and the hands are closed again in fear

There are things buried deep inside us Major and minor we are like piano keys

The sound of the wind has just arrived in the season, and it feels a little warmer than the shoes that have stepped on the beach.

I'm singing my sorrow among the blue tears, accustomed to the blue sadness

A broken arrow in the darkness and I see the eager longing in your heart I glimpse a ray of light in the darkness

Happy Lantern Festival to everyone! In good health

Honey, please put down your guard. How did we end up like this? Our love is not over yet.

Just imagine that your efforts will yield results. Believe in your promise without any reservation.

Feel how the fingertips stopped at my beginning freeze time instantly and remember to look into my firm eyes

After passing the glacier, the sails are raised again and the singing is under the rainbow. Keep walking a little faster.

A wounded heart can never heal. Don't spend the whole day in regret like me.

How many times will I come again next time when I regain my strength? I look at this long road again and again

If you look at the withered rose for a long time, you will feel sad. Romance is too hypocritical.

Whenever you and I are deeply involved, it seems that our perception is magnified several times, and I cross the sea of ​​​​hearts alone.