Minotaur Memoirs

After reading Chapter 142, I couldn't stand it anymore and gave it up The description at the beginning of the story was quite good. Niu Niu and the time traveler met and mistakenly thought the time traveler was a devil, which led to the follow-up path of dual cultivation of shaman and warrior. Watching the protagonist continue to become stronger, the interaction with his family and villagers during the period was also very pyrotechnics. The battle with strength beyond the same age gave him the pleasure of showing off. Overall, it can be said to be very good But when I saw the plot after the time traveler retreated and woke up, I started to feel uncomfortable. The relationship between Niu Niu and the time traveler changed. It was understandable to be suspicious and distrustful of each other in the early stage of the plot, but it was very uncomfortable to still distrust after experiencing various events. "The time traveler kindly helped Niu Niu, but Niu Niu suspected that the time traveler was doing evil. , But after discovering that he had indeed helped him, Niu Niu neither felt guilty nor reflected, and would do the same next time, and the time traveler would not be angry or angry, and would continue to help him next time." In other words, the development of the relationship between the two people was strangely stagnant Another uncomfortable point is fighting. Niu Niu has experienced many life and death battles, but he hesitates every time he encounters an unexpected situation. I was dumbfounded and could only wait for the time traveler to save me. After learning more skills, it was obvious that the author's description of the battle became increasingly weak, and the newly learned skills seemed to have not been learned When I saw the second time traveler appeared, and it was a cultivation time traveler who also taught the skills to the protagonist, my feeling of discomfort reached its peak. After reading a few chapters, there was no relief, so I had to give up.

This book has been on the bookshelf for at least a year, and I just discovered it now. In fact, I am a bit confused. It has 2.2 Million words and more than 5,000 votes. Is it because I was isolated by Qidian Niang or because of the lack of writing skills? I clicked on the book and found that I had read a hundred chapters before I knew it. After tasting it, I also understood why the results were unsatisfactory. It's not that this book has shortcomings in writing and plot, but it's a problem with the audience. In layman's terms, it's too unpopular. Take Fighting to Break the Sky as an example. The grandfather is an indigenous person and the protagonist is a time traveler. The grandfather of this book is actually a time traveler, while the protagonist is an aboriginal. The difference in identity between the two is not just a slight difference, it is equivalent to the author opening up a new uninhabited stream, which can be said to be an alternative classic. But a sudden reversal of identities and changes in ideas are extremely unfriendly to some people. With the addition of the first-person perspective, impetuous people will start to point out the world and trigger the original inertial thinking, which will lead to terrible consequences. The loss of most of the drug testers will prevent a large number of subsequent readers from seeing this book, and pollute the comments, giving this book a brand. This is not to belittle this book, but an objective analysis of this book. However, if the author wrote this book for a dream in his heart, then I can say that the author is a person who is persistent in his dream, or is responsible for a small number of readers, both of which are worthy of praise. Any book is the hard work of an author. Actually, there is another whisper. It is better to end it earlier and lay the foundation for the next book. Although it is well written emmm, I am still reading it, quack😰😰😍😍

This book has really poor results. . . But it's very strange that it's clearly written so well. . . The author is working hard to build his own Western fantasy world to depict the rise of one of the most ordinary tauren. However, it is difficult for an ordinary tauren to rise, so he added the original male protagonist who failed to seize the body...? So stubbornness and detachment, simplicity and cunning, fall in love and kill each other under the unequal strength and wisdom. Many times the tauren's stubbornness makes people anxious, but if you think about it carefully, isn't this what a real tauren should be like? I feel that the conflict between the two people and the deviation of the plot are largely due to the author's dissatisfaction with the current routine. . But in order to continue the plot, it had to go full circle and rely on the stubborn party to give in to return to a similar situation. . . Have no choice. . . In the end, the two male protagonists (?) Fell in love after killing each other... Anyway, now the two of them influence each other and penetrate each other. One wants to simply protect, the other wants to do whatever he wants, and now it has become. . Simply do whatever you want. . Anyway, it looks good, NB Then I hope the author will do a lot of publicity, that is, go to a certain degree, a certain C, a certain WeChat, or something similar. There are articles recommending novels on them, and you can help me recommend them. There is also a website that recommends novels, and you can also help me. In short, it is a good novel, but too few people know about it. The pearl is covered in dust. I hope the author will get better and better.

A person who basically doesn't need to use his brain... No, it's a minotaur. How smart do you think he is? If we follow the ordinary Tauren life path, this fool might have grown a little during the Centaur invasion, and then he might have tried his best to improve his strength for revenge, or he might have been devastated. The former might have become a Minotaur that went further than his father, and there is no need to say more about the latter. Therefore, his attitude towards Li Mou was largely related to Li's seizure of the body after time travel. This incident confirmed Xiao Niutou's position towards Li Mou as an enemy. Therefore, the simple-minded Tauren needs room to grow before he can understand whether everything Li did for him later was correct or whether Li was really his enemy. To put it simply, Li kept giving advice or planning for the future. The Tauren might resist, but many of them were chosen based on Li's words. The tauren doesn't know this. He only knows that you wanted to kill me before. You are an enemy and I can't completely trust you. I want to have enough strength to get rid of you. . . . . . . . The book is very good, but the pace is too slow as I continue reading. (The above is my personal opinion, please bear with me if I find something wrong. If you are not in the mood to scold others for excitement, please don't come to me. Thank you 🙏)

Halfway through the pursuit of the book, I can say that the delicate and rigorous world setting and character characterization are very rare in online novels. From the beginning, the world is shown bit by bit, and the truth of everything is slowly discovered like solving a puzzle. This way of telling can be seen that the author wants to create a literary work, rather than just write an entertainment work. The story is indeed a good story, but now that I have seen it, I have some thoughts on the reasons for the unsatisfactory performance of this book: First of all, the first-person description itself is not a poisonous point, but the lack of growth experience and character portrayal of the protagonist has led to readers having a more negative perception of the protagonist - a stupid, stubborn, impulsive and narrow-minded pig teammate who does not understand good and bad, and is bound to lose his chain when something goes wrong. This is how I felt about Bihong when I was halfway through reading. Of course, in fact, if we start from the story itself, this state is actually what a newly adult tauren from another world should look like. However, just like the same meaning can be said in different ways, the results may be completely different. Although the setting is that Bihong gradually grows from this character and gradually matures, the description of Bihong's growth experience and character formation in the book does not give readers a sense of identity. Especially the several major turning points in the protagonist's thoughts (1. Falling in love with Taiya, 2. Meeting Taoist Priest Feiyun, 3. Meeting Zhao Ritian for the first time) are a bit pale and weak. 1. Regarding Taiya, a young calf who has just grown up and has just begun to fall in love falls in love with the most beautiful priest at first sight. Falling in love at first sight is indeed an unreasonable thing, but if all the descriptions are just Bihong thinking about how he likes the priestess, it is like Talking to oneself generally does not resonate with people. Although the author himself said that he is not good at emotional dramas, the more intuitive feeling after reading the whole story is that the relationship between Bihong and the priestess is more like a love because of the setting, and there is a feeling of lack of flesh and blood. 2. Taoist Feiyun, this plot is actually an important point where the relationship between the protagonists begins to ease. There is nothing wrong with this plot itself. However, as the plot unfolds, the crisis of trust between Bihong and Leo breaks out again and again, creating a sense of dissonance - also facing the time traveler, does it seem too easy for the old werewolf to gain Bihong's trust and influence him? Leo, who has helped him and rescued him countless times for many years, cannot even gain his trust more than an old werewolf whom he has only met once. Even if it is reasonable from the plot, it will inevitably give people the feeling that the protagonist is an unfamiliar white-eyed wolf. 3. Regarding Zhao Ritian, if it is easy to trust Taoist Feiyun, then Zhao Ritian is at the other extreme - hostility comes unexpectedly. From the first time I heard about Zhao Ritian until the two met, the points that created hostility towards Zhao Ritian were probably the following two points: the voodoo doll that cursed the little girl, and Leo's threat theory. It seems that it is a bit too thin, even until the two people officially break up and kill each other (currently watching this), to be honest, I sided with Zhao Ritian when these two people fought. The protagonist is really too unlikable. I have said so much above, but in summary, as a first-person perspective, the author's description of the protagonist's inner activities and thought changes is a bit too pale. The most intuitive result is that it is almost impossible to stand as a minor. From the perspective of the tauren whose body was taken away by an alien creature, we can understand all the actions of the protagonist, but this kind of understanding can only be obtained from the perspective of God when separated from the story. It cannot be obtained from the main perspective of the story (the perception from the main perspective is that he is a 🐮 version of a naughty kid). Of course, I don't mean that the setting of the protagonist is not good. Using Jin Yong's The Legend of the Condor Heroes as an analogy, looking beyond the story itself, the protagonist Yang Guo is actually a very paranoid, egoistic and emotional person. It can even be said that the three views are not very "positive", while Guo Fu is actually more of a spoiled child and cannot be called a naughty child. However, what readers feel and can identify with in the story is that Yang Guo's bad behavior is understandable, while Guo Fu's willfulness is annoying. As for the plot so far, it feels like The Legend of the Condor Heroes has turned Guo Fu into the protagonist and Yang Guo into a supporting role. Even if the story is still the same, the perception is completely different. Whether the characters have flesh and blood and are recognized and liked by people, the character design is only one aspect, and more depends on how the person who writes the story tells it. The last thing I want to say is that writing a story cannot blindly cater to readers, but since it is written for everyone to see, it is also necessary to consider how to make readers identify with it and make the story more attractive. I hope the author can write better and better.

Summary of Chapter 363: In fact, there is a lot of well-written content in the front, but I feel that it is too exaggerated and boring. But I was actually unhappy after reading this chapter, so I sighed. In this section, Niutou's performance towards Zhao Ritian, without mentioning the details, still adheres to his concept of earthlings, that is, of time travellers. Travelers = invaders = should be killed or kicked back to the original world. Before reconciling with Leo, this was quite right. But after accepting Leo's benefits for a long time, using Leo as a tool, he met and pursued the people he liked, and established a long-term friendship. He actually wanted to rush forward and kill the other person without consulting him. It could be said that he was throwing friendship to the ground regardless of the feelings of Leo, who was also a time traveler. Moreover, it is described that he becomes more determined to kill time-travelers after getting the treasure, but his attitude towards Leo is not firm, and he also shows his obedience to the bull head, which is also very dissatisfying.

In fact, I feel that if I had succeeded in winning directly from the beginning, my results would have been much better!

The first person is acceptable, and the subject matter is novel. After reading Chapter 200, it was really hard for me to give up. Niu Tou is still stubborn, but after accepting Leo's various benefits, he really can't stand the hatred that remains unchanged. If you really want to write Niu Tou as someone who will never change and be stubborn from the beginning to the end, then leave Leo alone. If you want to hate him, just stick to it and not accept any help. This way of accepting benefits while scorning it is really disgusting. After describing a lot, I still come back to the old grandfather. After reading chapter 30, I thought the relationship was about to ease. After reading chapter 100, I felt that the relationship between the two would change. After reading chapter 170, Niutou was still accepting Leo's benefits and there was still no big change. After reading chapter 200, I felt that it was just a dog. I fed it meat every day and it would not be as double-standard as Niutou. Why do you still hate him after accepting Leo's gift? Whether you accept it or not is up to you. If you find a reason to accept it, you still hate Leo. The more stubbornness and determination to set the goal that will not change are described later, the more hypocrisy and old double standard dog 🙏

I think it's really good. I haven't read such a great book in a long time. However, I guess the author's performance in this book may not be very good. There are basically no comments in the paid chapters. I don't know if the author can stick to it. I haven't had such an experience reading a novel without sleep and food for a long time. Bi Hong's kindness and true heart, the loneliness and ambition hidden under Leo's poisonous tongue, Taiya's gentleness and intellectuality, and Yilu's independent and enterprising image. . . Under every word, I seem to see the author in front of the computer conversing with every soul in the book. The plot of Brad getting up at night reoccurred, and it was very interesting for me to read it. Although each chapter only has one or two sentences, combined with Leo's complaints and Bihong's finishing blows, it felt very vivid. It made people feel that the purpose of supporting characters is not to add to the plot, but to really have their own life. There are also chapters where Bihong, Taiya and four other friends meet for a trip. Whether it is the banter and laughter in the restaurant, getting close to nature in the hills and farms, or the sincere birthday wishes for Taiya under the starry sky, I can feel the warmth of friendship lingering between the four people. There are also descriptions of the family and villagers in Vail Village, the tenderness of the family staying together during the Easter Festival, the bickering between the two old guys, the grandfather and the grandfather, the sadness in the calf's head when his sister got married, and the concern when leaving home. . . It entrusts the Chinese people with their beautiful ideals of family. Of course, it is difficult to have such a family in reality, but who can say that in the ordinary life and disputes of food, rice, oil and salt, there are not a few moments where the heartstrings are touched by family love similar to that in the book? I read from the book that the author said that he is already 30. 30 Is a very embarrassing age. Calling him uncle seems a bit too old, but he can no longer say that he is still a young man. I wonder if the author is anxious about his life? Does the Leo in the book reflect the author himself? "The earth does have enough food and clothing, but people can't see hope." Is this Leo's complaint? Or is it the author's melancholy? Judging from the results of the book alone, it is difficult to say that the author is successful. Maybe the author is really so unhappy and unwilling to accept it? But I feel that the author still has the heart of a teenager. There are long words at the end of each chapter, either talking about books, movies, or news topics. Young people get old easily, and blood is hard to cool down. The author seems to still retain sensitivity and enthusiasm, rationality and reflection. This trait of the author is reflected in the exchange between Leo and Bihong. It is sometimes shown, or in other words, in the dialogue between the Minotaur from another world and the otaku from the Earth, we will unconsciously take part in it, follow the author's thinking, sometimes look at the other world from the eyes of the Earthlings, and sometimes look back at the Earth from the perspective of the Minotaur, and think in the comparison. This arrangement is really great. Finally, I want to talk about a character, Zhao Ritian. In fact, this character and the related plot are really inexperienced, but the story is really wonderful. If you are the only protagonist of the time-travel flow, then you will feel that the whole world is yours. When the second time-traveler appears, you will be nervous, defensive, and even shaken like Leo in the article. In short, it will not be "satisfactory", but it also elevates the reader's perspective and changes the reader from routine reading. I feel that I am more interested in the future direction of the story, and I have to say that I really can't stand the strong nouveau riche atmosphere of the protagonists in many so-called great books. They are always greedy and cruel, and they are obsessed with pursuing wealth, power, power, and beauty. They are like rude guests who break into the door of the host's house and robbed everything that originally belonged to the host's house under the banner of justice. I think it is lucky that these are all fictional, otherwise people in other worlds would be too miserable. . .

I finally understand the uncomfortable point above, There is an iron law that every enemy must be punished and every kindness must be repaid, even if it is a pure villain novel, it will never violate it. Not to mention that Mavericks does not remember Leo at all for saving the whole family, and Leo's attitude still looks like licking after being treated like this.