The Bones of the Sin Domain Shall Reign

To the respected Lord Rosen, Lord of Ashes: The First Consul of Lower Sagali came in compliance with the ancient covenant. My husband fought against the chaotic side, and now it has made a comeback. The situation is serious. I hope you will come to Sa's house to meet me in person. In the past, when the church arose and the goddess revived, we and you were lost between heaven and earth. You returned to the plane of ashes and we retreated deep underground. The current situation cannot be matched by the church, and the goddess has been polluted, even if she is added to the Rainbow Tower, she cannot be matched. And you have been fighting for thousands of years, waiting to escape from fatigue, which is dangerous! Now is the time for us to rise up! In this autumn of life and death, the world is in turmoil, and heroes are all emerging. I hope you can recommend one or two. I would be very happy to welcome you. There are many things to say when you are sincere and sincere, so it is time to talk about them, but it is not as important as this one. Let's talk about them acknowledging each other. Have a safe journey. 67893.6.37 Iron Abyss in Sagari

Maybe because this book was written relatively early, the plot is very old-fashioned, and most of the elements are either Dark Souls or Blizzard, which is very dramatic. The most important thing is that the logic is seriously inconsistent. The power of the Chaos side and the Order side are completely disproportionate, and the brain IQ is even more disproportionate. I often have a lot of trouble with the Order side. In order to cope with the protagonist's upgrade, important events seriously lowered the levels of both parties. For example, the Ultramarine Fortress at the beginning was related to the safety of one-third of the country's territory. No one from the country came forward, so a lord in a remote area was asked to defend it with a few cannon fodder and black iron. This is simply beyond explanation. I read it casually, but halfway through it I really couldn't stand it anymore. The only advantage is that the writing is okay and above the standard. I seriously don't recommend it to newcomers.

The plot is quite interesting, but I just can't figure it out. Where are the souls obtained by completing so many tasks? All eaten by the author? I have a narrow escape from killing monsters without soul upgrades. I saw that the people of Chaos have at least 10,000 souls. 2,000 Souls are already bronze. If you can't beat them, don't you know how to upgrade? Every time I see it, I feel like I am holding on to a lot of experience and saying that the opponent is so powerful that I can only use my trump cards. God, how about you upgrade to a lower level and crush the opponent?

My first impression when I saw the name was that of a villain, but the book is pretty good. Please update it, old man.

I felt something wrong halfway through, so I turned to the ending and saw that there was still no heroine in the end. Goodbye (ー_ー)!!

​​ Sin Gu, to be honest, there are too many memes. No, this is considered a copycat, not a joke. It's really embarrassing from the front, and the memes are not well integrated into the plot. But it's nothing, but when I saw the mobile terminal, I really wanted to give up the article. There was no basis at all, and the rules were embodied casually. All the principles and structures were just mentioned in one stroke, without any detailed description. It was like God saying that if there is light, there will be light. It is very simple, let alone logistics and express delivery. It is really difficult to accept it. Maybe my thinking is not advanced enough, so I can't accept it. All of this is developing too fast, and my ability to describe it is so poor that I can't feel the logic. I feel like a young man who has traveled through time, and his mind and character have become so perfect in just a few years. Like a human being who has lived for hundreds of years, there is no logic at all. The ability to depict characters still needs to be strengthened. Although the plot is good, novel, and very imaginative, it lacks key links and lacks good foreshadowing. It feels more like forced insertion, with just a few pleasures and no foreplay, making it impossible to get more involved. Overall, the book is good, but I really can't connect to it. Slower writing and more detailed descriptions and foreshadowing will make people feel better. Maybe my ability to write a book is dozens of times worse than yours, and I can only talk on paper. Looking back now, there seems to be no particularly memorable plot in Bones of Sin. I am moved and excited, but yes, but not deep enough. After reading it, I won't feel the same as drinking boiled water, but I have no thought of aftertaste. Well, I am just casually chatting. If I didn't post for 500 fan points, I might have bought the last chapter. Although I am sorry, I am still a prostitute~(￣▽￣~)~

At the end of the netherworld lives the king's bones! Those who serve the Supreme Being come to report! I came in after reading the title of the book! Book it all and go!

The hardest bone will eventually feed the dog 😁

Three brushes. Everyone, I like Randall Scarlet the best.

I discovered this book in the afternoon and was very excited. After all, there are very few fanfics about Dark Souls. After reading Chapter 4, I couldn't read it anymore. The author's writing style is really good, and the details are well described, but the biggest problem is that he can't tell a story! From what I have seen so far in Chapter 4, every storyline is very cliche. Basically, you can guess the ending just by looking at the beginning. There is no surprise, but it cannot be said to be disappointing. But the plot in Chapter 4 is a complete replica of Fate's Holy Grail War. The characters, personalities, and story development are all the same. What's the point of bringing out the protagonist Red A? A story with no new ideas at all is too boring. The author should use more imagination. Moreover, the actions of the protagonist are completely planned by the mission. It is really intoxicating. Isn't the purpose of readers to read novels to bring themselves into the protagonist? How can people be introduced to this protagonist who does not even have freedom? It looks like a puppet on strings. It's a pity that the author has such good writing style. After reading some of the previous posts, I didn't feel happy if I didn't vomit. If I'm wrong, think I'm farting! Finally, I sincerely hope that the author will achieve greater results.