The Heart of the Empire

After reading Chapter 110, I can't hold on anymore, it's extremely poisonous. Faced with the woman who betrayed Pig's feet, Pig's feet not only forgave her, but also licked her. Abandoned

It felt good at the beginning, but it was mentioned earlier that you can get rewards by sacrificing the faceless man's head. After cutting off the head, there was no explanation at all later (maybe I haven't seen it yet). In addition, the summoned elf is full of loyalty, but later it was said that his face became cold, and there was a barrier, etc., Which felt a bit inexplicable.

Then readers don't have a sense of immersion. Who will read it? They can't even imagine the results of the following books.

I'm reading chapter ninety-two now. Why can Morno tolerate the protagonist in every possible way? You must know that the protagonist was only a level 5 warrior before, a level 14 warlord, and he tolerated a level 5 mercenary leader of a mercenary group in every possible way? Even a level 6 warrior in Upgrade City, in this chaotic place, can be dragged to a combat meeting, and they play guessing games childishly, and even blush in the end of the discussion. Does this warlord have no face? Or is the protagonist his son? I don't object to you writing some routines that you have in mind. But at least it must be logical and reasonable. Look back and see for yourself, do you think it's reasonable? How did such a person grow up in this chaotic place?

Author, have you ever taken your work seriously?

The first few pictures have no sense of immersion at all! ! I don't know what will happen next, a half-orc leading the elves? Or a local half-orc! Damn, that feels so good

Seeing so many comments complaining about the character design, I really feel that I hope the author does not have a good habit of explaining the key points in the introduction. Although the character is high, the grounding can persuade elementary school students.

I have read more than 100 chapters. To be honest, the slow pace at the beginning is okay, but the more you get to the back, the more sluggish you get. I have to write one chapter for something that can be solved in 20 words. It makes me sick.

When is the protagonist going to build a human building? I'd rather skip it and watch. The dense layout makes my eyes dizzy and my head hurts.

I feel that the reading experience is very average, not particularly attractive.