Ending the Five Dynasties

When writing history, write history. Don't turn into a fairy halfway through. If you want to write about a fairy, say it directly at the beginning, or explain it directly in the introduction. Don't turn into a fairy halfway through the writing 😅

I'll give you another chance. I hope your style won't change again. I'll give you five pushes.

The author honestly told me where he came from, and he actually knew Nankang. . .

Isn't it said to be a purely historical novel? Things like cultivating immortals, fairy tales, fantasy, and summoning are now all written for the eyes of sand sculptures. Seriously, I'm not going to lie to you!

I would like to give some advice to the author. Since it is ancient history, it should not be mixed with so many modern elements. It is both a political commissar and a military region. It is very inconsistent. The army will not increase its combat effectiveness just because you change its name to a modern name. The key is training and system.

The modern so-called military hierarchy of army-division-brigade-regiment is just a variant introduced from foreign countries. It is exactly the same as the ancient army planning. I don't understand what the significance of such a reform is? Instead, the lower-level officers and soldiers were asked to relearn their cognition, and they just took a shower and went to work in the fields, wasting their money in vain.

I've endured the political commissar, so what's the point of a one-on-one battle with a coach in a night raid in Fengzhou? There is no chance of fighting in a melee. No matter who you are, 10 elite crossbowmen will kill him with a volley. The same goes for Xiang Yu, unless the arrows don't penetrate deeply into the flesh. Ordered 2 chapters and got away.

The biggest failure is that we have a political school, which is better than the staff department, but there is also a political commissar, which seems awkward! Not necessarily all modern things will be good in ancient times! Every era has its characteristics and products

1. All kinds of modern vocabulary push the button, filling the screen with embarrassment. This way is tolerable. 2. Various modern military establishments and the mechanical application of modern concepts. Summary: This is probably my first time writing a novel.

Author, you'd better not try to make a regiment commander or a battalion commander or something like that. It looks pretty good at first, but you're going to be a little bit more poisonous.