Chronicles of the Cursed Immortal

Damn it? Have you started writing again? ? It's been eight years now

It's been a few years, please remember to update! Ox

As a bookworm, I am very happy to be able to write my own opinions on the novels I like. I am also very grateful to the author for writing wonderful stories, which gave me spiritual support during the book shortage. I simply write down some of my thoughts, I hope the author can read them. 1. As a small person, Shiraishi's grandfather wanted him to be on the gold list, so he kept working hard. Even though he had failed three times and was laughed at, he still did not give up. He praised Shiraishi's persistence and perseverance. 2. There was a sudden change in the family, and grandpa was seriously injured. However, Shiraishi was able to stay calm in the face of danger and use his own abilities to write spells for grandpa to improve his physical condition. His courage and filial piety are commendable. 3. After a competition, he was framed, and a good citizen became a villager. His life path was changed, but he was a blessing in disguise. When the village was facing internal and external troubles, he worked with the villagers to overcome difficulties, made suggestions, and laid the foundation for unifying the village. He is even revered as a god by the villagers. 4. When the village was under siege, and the young and old in the village were held hostage, Baishi single-handedly rushed into the enemy formation with unstoppable courage, and was seriously injured in order to save the villagers. His courage, ambition, courage, and caring for others also earned him the respect and love of more people. 5. Regarding the story structure of the novel, I also have some small suggestions. The pace of the novel is too fast, and sometimes there is more than one storyline in a chapter. Although it is enjoyable to read, it is not conducive to the author's plot. Many stories end while unfolding, causing a certain shortage of readers' sense of picture. 6. In terms of the creation of supporting characters, I hope that more characters like Xu Jian and Wei Dragonfly will appear. Many supporting characters are gone without even being able to eat their lunches. They have no sense of existence and picture. Regarding the establishment of villains, the author's description is a bit vague, such as Kong Tan, who has no physical characteristics, although I have a fresh memory of his affairs.

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It's beautiful, but the waiting is excruciating.

The plot is compact, seems to have a sense of urgency, and is awesome. 🤭🤭🤭🤭

After the revision, Sanjiang votes will no longer be cast.

It's okay. It's not easy to find one like this at the starting point.

The novel mainly depends on the plot. The plot of the speaker's novel is attractive. I like it!

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