The Strongest Possession of Pirates

I have read 600 chapters in Shuhuang. Although the book was written a few years ago, I still feel that the content is too stupid. What is the use of the system? If you're seriously injured, can't you possess someone with strong self-healing ability? Wolverine or something? I can spend tens of thousands of Baileys, but I haven't used the system for a long period of time. The content I wrote said that I wanted to save money to deal with powerful enemies, and then I was afraid of being taken away. So after the possession time is over, won't the possessed soul be gone? Being able to seize the body means that the system is weak. If the system is not weak, why should we be afraid of seizing the body? There is a problem with the setting. You have to push forward forcefully. You said you can't make it in time even if Lao Liu died, but you can't make it in time even if Enel is captured? The Rock Bass he wrote was about to retreat, so Luo Chen ran far away and watched? Then it's too late to save people? Even though they are evenly matched, someone is captured, and the protagonist cannot catch up. Is this an evenly matched match? Why should the enemy run so fast? Why not just guerrilla and destroy the protagonist group? The outline and timeline are so messed up that I can't even tell the difference in terms of strength. You still have to call it innovation. Sengoku, you said it's not even close to the strength of the original work. Then shouldn't other juniors of the same generation besides Whitebeard, such as Kaido, also have a gap from the original work? In his prime, Whitebeard and Kaido and Charlotte Lingling were called the Three Emperors. Ace was only 8 years old in the same year, which was still more than ten years away from the original era. In this era, Kaido only had over a billion, right? Whitebeard in his prime, with a bounty of billions, and Kaido, who is still a mere fish worth over a billion, are jointly called the Three Emperors? If Kaido has always been great, I would ask Garp Sengoku to chase Roger, and Roger became the Pirate King with a white beard and a golden lion. Garp Sengoku was able to tie Roger, but the result was that the Sengoku man in his prime could not defeat the old man possessed by Whitebeard? So in this book, the earlier the appearance, the weaker the strength? The word count is too high, but there are obviously no details at all, but a plot that requires dozens of chapters seems to be very detailed. I asked the host how many chapters has this woman not spoken to? How many chapters has Robin not spoken? Instead, a Chablo Ross chapter appears. Who is more funny than who has more drama, right? Reading 600 chapters is a waste of time, I suggest you abandon it, it is too toxic.

940 Chapters, I read it in two days, no skipping chapters, but quick page turning. Overall, it's very good. The plot is not the focus, only the battle is the real meaning. There are often long battle scenes of twenty or thirty chapters, which are very enjoyable to watch, but there are also a lot of meaningless battles, which are completely watered-down battles. The system is average, and the power system is a bit broken. Sometimes the characters that can be redeemed by spending more money are not as good as the characters that can be redeemed by spending less time. For the characters that are summoned, the system does not have a definite power division. The power system and timeline are also a bit broken. Sometimes it overexaggerates a person's strength, and sometimes it devalues ​​a person's strength, causing a person's strength to fluctuate, sometimes strong and sometimes weak. For example, Kaido was beaten to a pulp by the protagonist and cut into pieces, but he couldn't be killed, which was a bit disgusting. There is also the fishman Tom, who can actually build a battleship stronger than Hades for the protagonist in three months, and then this battleship shows its power once. Another example is the wizard of the Balot Kingdom. First of all, each of them is as strong as a vice admiral. Their original king can challenge the general, but the protagonist says that as long as he masters domineering, he can torture the king to death. And after just a few chapters, the protagonist became the king of the Balot Kingdom, and the strength of the five wizards became generals. In the author's writing, the strength of generals can be seen everywhere. The pirates with a bounty of 4 to 5 billion are sparse and ordinary, and they are simply ordinary minions. There are also many with a bounty of 8 to 9 billion. I remember there was a chapter where the navy evaluated the protagonist's pirate group and said that the protagonist's pirate group has four generals in terms of combat power, but in the new world they are only in the middle of the pack. I'm really speechless. Aren't the navy admirals the highest in terms of combat power after the Yonko? . In addition, after Wizard Balot slapped a Celestial Dragon in the face and killed a rear admiral, the Navy did not dare to deal with him, saying that the Balot Kingdom had a high status and was equal to the Celestial Dragon. However, the previous king of the Balot Kingdom was imprisoned in the Impel Down City by the Navy. In addition, I have never mentioned this kingdom in other One Piece fan fiction. It should be the author's own creation. He wrote dozens of chapters, and it didn't have any important role later on. It was just a waste of words. The errors in the timeline are reflected in some small places, such as the strength and military rank of the three navy generals at that time. The plot is also a bit uncomfortable to watch. The author wanted to write something new, but he unconsciously stuck to the original work. For example, the protagonist and the golden lion were imprisoned in Impel Down at the same time, but the protagonist had the ability to obtain the unlock key and exchanged a handcuff key with Shiki. Although he was asked to give him the shackle key, he broke his legs and escaped from Impel Down. What I especially want to complain about is that the protagonist controls the prison beast and kills the jailer to obtain the key. But how do the protagonist and other pirates use the key to open the stone cuffs when their hands are cuffed? I thought about it, maybe I opened it by holding it in my mouth. But after the protagonist obtained the key, some commotion was caused, which attracted the Navy's investigation. At this time, the handcuffs between the protagonist and the golden lion had been opened, but the Navy did not notice it. Moreover, the protagonist killed the jailer and took the key and kept it with him for several years. The Navy never knew that the key was lost. It is really so stupid! Having mentioned the shortcomings, let's also talk about its highlights. The highlight of this novel is that it is set a year or two after the death of Roger the Pirate King. At that time, the Golden Lion had not yet lost his legs, Whitebeard's power was at its peak, the Four Emperors had not yet been determined, the dragon had not yet gone to revolution, the three generals of the navy were still only major generals, Ace was not yet born, and Luffy only went to sea at the end of the novel. The sea is full of heroes, and the protagonist wants to fight them all and ascend to the throne of the Pirate King. This is no longer a story about Luffy's era that is about to be written. Therefore, this is still a One Piece fan novel worth reading. After all, I read it from beginning to end instead of giving up. However, it will be more embarrassing for real Pirates fans. After all, some mistakes are really intolerable! ————————Excerpt from Zhuishu lv10 King

It's the first time I've seen the protagonist of Goldfinger with a system that is so rubbish. He can't kill anyone. There's also a problem with character strength classification. I don't think Whitebeard is better than Mr. Yamamoto.

I don't usually write books, but I really couldn't help it. I've seen bugs in fan fiction before, but this one is outrageous. I rarely use swear words, but this book is really hard to express, and makes me want to curse people. I would like to trouble the author to study the original work carefully before writing a fanfic, so as to avoid making jokes. I believe it is not a happy thing to see a group of people scolding me under my own work.

I couldn't stand watching Chapter 36 of Upside Down Mountain. How old was Kizaru when Roger died? Just a general? The author probably hasn't watched One Piece seriously.

To be honest, I have already read the game for the second time. I probably didn't read many books when I read it for the first time. At that time, I skipped through the early part of the game and it felt so slow. But I liked some of the life-saving plots later, but I also felt that the ability setting was very unpleasant. When I read it again, I can only say that the poisonous and development type is okay, but I really can't stand it in the early stage. Because it was released in 2016, I don't really compare the plot, but it's mainly about the battle. I can only say that if it is free, you can use it when you have nothing to do.

What a crappy book, I almost got embarrassment after reading a few chapters. It's a Japanese comic but it adds a bunch of domestic characters, so you don't think the style of painting is weird. It's also said to serve the plot. This plot is disgusting.

Luo and other pirates are inseparable from the protagonist, but they don't even have Kaido's formal qualifications, and the protagonist doesn't face his qualifications in front of Kaido. If the protagonist is not possessed, at least he has the combat power of a general. Even if Luo Shi is strong, he is only a quasi-general. It is impossible for the Four Emperors to ignore a general who is going all out even if he is strong. I hope the author will take a good look at the issue of combat power. There is also a battle between the navy and the protagonist, which should be spread to the new world. The new world should have heard about it, rather than most of them not knowing about it.

In 16 years, in 2016, please, the novel fan fiction at that time was not as perfect as it is now. This book was already pretty good at the time. There is no need to use the perspective of 21 and the plot to say that he is deviating from the original work. The plot was not even there at that time. Where can I get the reference from the original work 😅😅😅😅

Seriously, this book is for real bookworms.

This book is so powerful that I fell in love with it. I admire the way a good martial arts system is crammed into the Pirates system. It gives me the feeling that the style of calligraphy and painting is unique. I can refer to the fairy tales with long hair and swords. Suddenly, an image of Luffy in fourth gear appeared and knocked away the previous one with a punch. The sword-wielding man, then they used the power of different systems to fight for more than ten days in a very two-dimensional world. Then the man suddenly transformed into a fairy-like style and transformed into Bruce Lee. He shouted "I fight!" Over and over again while fighting Luffy in four gears, and then changed into a supernatural style and started playing with spells. . . . . You can figure it out on your own. The author has really brilliant ideas, but it's a pity that he used it in the wrong place. Putting fairy tales and martial arts into the two-dimensional world was originally a taboo, and it turned out to be a conspiracy. . . . . Nb🙂Be sure to read the book review section before reading this book

Why do you want the swordsmen on the ship to eat the Bone Fruit? A pure swordsman forces you to become a juggler. I have to say that the handsomeness of a swordsman will leave you speechless. In terms of character alone, it is incomparable to Sauron and Hawkeye.

It turns out it was written in 2016. I asked why the timeline is so messed up.

I really want to know, what can Ip Man do? Fuck Nami?

It was too toxic in the early stage and I couldn't hold on. Not to mention the power system, the first choice of character to possess is very speechless. In addition, the protagonist's IQ and EQ are just average. He has lived for 30 years, experienced two worlds, two lives, and seen heroes. In the end, he is a weakling, both physically and mentally. The funniest thing is that there are countless logical flaws in the escape at the beginning, especially as an insider + related person, you made it look like a temporary escape, MDZZ.

Read Chapter 1 or 2: People are trying to arrest you. You just had to stop the system from killing you to hide yourself??! This is not a question of whether the Holy Mother is not a Holy Mother. It is simply brainless Goodbye everyone. I have tried the poison. It is too toxic.

I am convinced by you too. This book is almost ten years old. How can you still whip corpses? Why don't you go find the novel that was published when Qidian was first published? If you like it, just read it. If you don't like it, leave it. I don't understand the meaning of the comments.

They were all updated four years ago. Next door, the "Pirate Code" is burning incense, and here is the Whip Corpse.

The early and middle stages can be said to be good. If you don't care about the detailed descriptions, it is very suitable for reading. It starts to fall apart in the middle and late stages. First of all, there are many pitfalls that are not filled in. The Naruto part is very awkward and can be skipped if you have obsessive-compulsive disorder. Not to mention the dragon running away as soon as it runs out of health, the combat description is very watery at first. The martial arts part was very embarrassing... I couldn't bear to see him forcefully punch Superman in the back...

Everyone in the comment section is talented. Every time I see your words, I immediately abandon the book 😅😅😅

Are there any friends who can't stand it after reading just one chapter?

First of all, I read this book without thinking. Secondly, I read a pirated version because the first few chapters were too addictive. I knew I wouldn't be able to watch it for long and it was impossible to spend money to read it. Then, I didn't read it even without thinking. The reason is that the protagonist group has always had a killing mentality towards the navy, but the navy has always said that it will pull the protagonist into the impel city, even when the general is about to be killed! I can't bear this. Like the protagonist said to Garp later, if you catch me in, I will escape, so why not kill him? Is the Navy really so kind in its heart? Then why did the little pirate kill again? The only thing I can think of is that because he is the protagonist, the author insists that the navy be merciful and not kill him! What the hell! When I saw this, I only had one thought, that is, I wanted the protagonist to die, but I knew it was impossible, so I gave up, and then read the book review again. All the problems mentioned before without thinking about it came out. Sure enough, it is wrong to read calligraphy without thinking. A book that is full of mistakes in details should not be read at all. Although I didn't spend any money, it was a waste of my time. I was so angry, so I left a message.

This book is also really awesome, written in 2016

I've only read three chapters and I'm hooked. I never expected it. After all, there are so many flaws. It's easier said than done at the beginning, but it's hard to say it. I can't even think of a name. I'm so embarrassed by the storyline. I really don't want to waste my time reading it anymore.

Upgrading is not an upgrade, being invincible is not invincible. I really admire you for being able to write it down. The power system is in a mess. The ceiling of the world of Death God High Martial Arts cannot kill General Chubu Pirate King. The heroine even made me vomit. A descendant of the Celestial Dragons knows with his brain that even a pig's foot has the strength of a general, he may not be able to save her, and he keeps saying that I knew he would come to save me. How could it be more outrageous, Tom, to help you build Hades just because you are the brother of the Pirate King? It doesn't cost you a penny? I vomited.

Ip Man is actually not very good. He is famous because he has an apprentice.

One chapter of poisonous hair, Wing Chun Ip Man, ten beatings, embarrassing cancer.

Isn't the red-haired brother a Celestial Dragon?

This book is quite loud and doesn't look good.

I tried my best to read more than 20 chapters. How can I put it, if it is fantasy or fantasy, I can read it, but Japanese comics are terrible. It's not the ability that belongs to Chinese comics, but the writing method, which is a fantasy writing method for writing light novels. It's awkward to read