Pirates: Starting from the Valley of the Gods

I have a question. You have only been in this world for a few minutes. Why are you there for three people you just met? You are sometimes desperate and angry. Aren't those three people just dragging you out? It's just a life-long friendship. Since you are not familiar with them, you can just run away. Just because you know these characters and the future of Xiong is indeed very miserable. Do you have to fight there? So full of emotions. . There is a saying, even if you die there, those three people may not be too sad, after all, in their eyes, you are just a stranger they happened to meet on the way to escape. . ∠( ᐛ ∠)＿

How pitiful is the bear? Isn't it pitiful to spend your whole life waiting for Nikka without knowing how to save yourself?

This introduction is very difficult to describe, it's too rude.

? ? Can Xuzuo feedback damage to the user? Where did the second set come from? As long as you can't break the virtual left, the people inside will not be hurt. Your two assumptions are really weak.

Can you not add the miscellaneous abilities of the Hokage system... It doesn't look pure... Why does it look so awkward😐😐😐

Well! Maybe I am no longer young anymore, and I can no longer stand this kind of novel that is full of chuunibyou. It is so embarrassing that I am almost cancerous. Especially the big pirate who even Rocks couldn't conquer was actually convinced by your words...

AI text, throw away your brain and forget about the original work and just read it~

Something doesn't feel right. The main character is bound to Uchiha Madara, but why does Tsukuyomi and Amaterasu use the kaleidoscope ability? If you were to choose any kaleidoscope ability, Obito's Kamui would definitely be your first choice. Also, it's a bit awkward to share life and death. Where does the emotional foundation come from? A fellow countryman meets a fellow countryman and sacrifices his life to accompany a gentleman? After reading it, I had the impression that not only were there a lot of the author's own idioms, but they were also completely nonsense. All kinds of sutures, all kinds of obscenities, my scalp feels numb just looking at them

The protagonist is very strong, but he just can't do any damage. No one from the original novel dares to kill him.

Can the author stop being obscene? When will Susanoo's damage be reflected back to him? If you do this, Sasuke will have died several times 🥵😅

You don't even have chakra, you set your head on fire and escape

Uchiha Madara Eye Technique Tsukuyomi Amaterasu, Susanoo's injury feedback to himself Is it difficult to understand before writing fan fiction?

Sharing 60% of the template, just use a fireball in a fight and then directly use the fruit power to go wild. It doesn't look at the combat experience and awareness of Gong Gong at all, right?

Chapter 1: You know everything about the Green Dragon Fruit. Why don't you run away and wait here to be poisoned?

I don't see anything that's so great about the protagonist in your writing.

Studio story, the protagonist can use wood to escape, but he just needs to find a man-made boat, and he has to go to the shore to repair the boat? ? ? I don't understand that Yamato can easily build three bedrooms, one living room and an attic, and the protagonist Mudun seems like a waste product.

After reading the introduction, I didn't want to read it anymore. He looked like a little gangster.

……Depend on! By the time I found out, it had been off for a month... Boring

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

In the past, it was still possible to write about the subject of plane war.

Compared to me, who can't even be considered a provocateur, you're doing quite well. I'm just a part-time coder, so it would be best if I could have a reader. You can write three thousand words a day without me, just keep in mind your original intention and entertain yourself 🙂

The road is long and long, and I will search for it from top to bottom. Let's work hard and encourage each other!