Start by Analyzing Mudun

The subject matter is actually very good, but the writing style, the cognition, the setting, and the strong sense of fantasy and immortality make it difficult to read. Not every reader has such a high resistance to poison. Do you think you are a Taoist? Breakthrough? Swallowing a golden elixir into my belly, my fate is up to me. Even if the genin broke through the chuunin, they would become stronger and fight each other, and every other chapter or section, suddenly there would be a chunin who was several times or dozens of times stronger than the chuunin. Although novels tend to write random settings, the relationship between genin, chuunin and jounin and shadow is not a realm breakthrough. The shadow is the village chief. Lower, middle and upper are closer to the institutional level rather than realm strength. Senju Hashirama is the god of ninja, and the first Hokage is also a jounin. What kind of thing like a genin challenging a jounin? This kind of thing is equivalent to a level-crossing challenge or is set by a powerful genius. Each one of them is a result of reading too many fantasy novels or something? Also, please, even if you don't read the original manga, please read the animation a little more seriously. At least understand the setting more, and you can't make up the second setting randomly. I sincerely hope you can write well, after all, most fandoms are written out of love.

I really admire the author. I didn't look at the settings in Naruto at all and wrote everything according to my own ideas.

I quite like reading Naruto fanfics. This one is not depressing. With the current development status, it is estimated that the power system will collapse in the later period. However, it is fun to watch, the logic is self-consistent, and the poisonous points are acceptable. As for the textual research party and the loyal to the original party, just don't read it. It's such a struggle! This is borrowed from Naruto World fanfic!

When I'm drunk, my timeline is all messed up, and I can't handle it anyway.

Genin training, chunin training to transform chakra, Jonin chakra purification, Kage level - Six Paths Chakra Transformation Pill, and later on, Nascent Soul, it's about this level, I guess I won't be able to read it, you have to do homework even if you are so popular.

It's not bad for now, it's best not to have all the abilities, just have them.

Is Mudun strong? ? ? Just look at Yamato and you will know that the Wooden Release is just like rubbish. In addition to suppressing the tailed beasts, its combat power is simply garbage 😅😅😅😅 The reason why everyone thinks that the Wooden Release is very strong, It's because there are Madara and Hashirama among the users, not to mention Madara, just talking about the pillars, the amount of chakra used by the Buddha on the top, even if a fire escape technique is used, the fireball is estimated to be at least bigger than the Kyuubi, no one can block it, no one can avoid it [fn=14 ]😅 Nowadays, many fans always exaggerate about wood escape. In fact, Zhuzhu has more chakra than Kyuubi. Any escape technique and any D-level ninjutsu are more powerful than others' S-level ones. As a One of the two heroes of the Warring States Period, Brother Zhuzi's strength is not the bullshit Wooden Style at all, but a body of shocking chakra 😅😅😅 With the same chakra, any of the Five Styles can turn Wooden Style into a dog😤

Nagato's Samsara Eye was given to him by Madara, and Madara's Samsara Eye was upgraded through the Eternal Kaleidoscope + Asura Chakra (that is, the first generation cells). This is the main line in the original work. Why does the author, including a bunch of readers, think that Nagato awakened himself? Naruto has been finished for so many years and there are still so many fans

It's just a random fabrication. What a pity. It's a good subject matter. In the third battle, he said that he was almost as strong as a Jonin, but the Sunagakure Village killed the Jonin team instantly. Then he fought Orochimaru, but he didn't win. Then the next day the Sannin and Hanzo dueled. The Sannin failed to defeat Hanzo and was given the title of Sannin by Hanzo. At this time, the protagonist suddenly jumped out on the battlefield and said that he wanted to kill Hanzo... Fortunately, he had just had a fight with Orochimaru, but he couldn't beat him... And the protagonist was from the Hidden Rain Village. Now that foreign enemies invaded, he didn't go to kill several people in the wood industry first, but actually wanted to kill his own leader first... What's even more poisonous is that he was just an ordinary poor man a few months ago, and was secretly taught the chakra extraction method by a young chuunin under Hanzo. This is a serious crime in Yuyincuo. But when Hanzo found out, he forgave his chuunin friend and him... (These plots were all written by the author in the book himself...)

A perfunctory work by a fantasy Aoten-ryu who has never watched Naruto

Nagato didn't awaken his samsara eye by himself

Nagato's has been transplanted, not awakened. This is all wrong.

All bugs. It's impossible to watch. Not to mention the problem with Nagato's eyes, I don't think it's a big problem there. The key point is that the author didn't even understand that the name of the Sannin was from the Second World War, so he said it was from the Third War. The rope tree is not dead yet, so Dan and Tsunade don't know each other at all! ? Shen Tm died in front of the rope tree, and the steel hand was not there yet.

The timeline is confusing, and the ninja system is also a mess. I guess the author may not have watched Naruto, but may have only read some fans.

It's so stupid that it can be reposted.

After reading Chapter 15, I really had a headache looking at the author's level. How do you define the genin level and chuunin level for the protagonist? Chakra amount or combat power? In terms of chakra capacity, you said that the protagonist has almost the chakra capacity of a chunin, and his combat power is not that of a genin. How did you get to the genin chunin level? When chakra continues to increase and reaches the chuunin level, do you think of a fantasy upgrade? Ninjas do not have a fixed level in the first place. They are appointed by the village instead of assessment. And the amount of chakra you have is outrageous. When Naruto just graduated and was still at the end of the crane, his chakra amount was four times that of Kakashi. Excluding the one who was restrained by the Kyuubi, he could have more than 100 calories. Kakashi's chakra was also absorbed by the Sharingan. No matter how little he is, he is still an elite jounin, but when he comes to you, he will be the most useless Uzumaki?

Has the author watched Naruto? Whenever there is a chance to become a ninja, these civilians will do more disgusting things than the Ninja Village. Besides, what's so pitiful about little Japan?

You can go to Sanjiang just for this, haha

Damn it (｀Δ´)! Isn't the Rasengan a Muhin ninjutsu without attributes? Why does it need to have a wind attribute? Also, is the main character's development ability only wood escape? Why is there no progress at all in taijutsu and other ninjutsu, and why the more I see the protagonist and the lack of characters, especially with a group of apprentices, I know that a strict master produces a good disciple, which makes the protagonist's words useless, especially the rope tree.

You haven't seen the anime or the manga, so why are you writing this?

It's just nonsense. The author just wrote whatever he thought of in the original work.

The data is not nonsense. I went to the toilet upside down. If it is true, then these readers have had brain congestion for many years. I seriously doubt that the author has never watched Naruto. He only knows about it through hearsay.

Without further ado, let me make a report. Some people asked how to report it. Just click on the author's name on the cover, go in and report him directly. Although this may not be useful, this book is so disgusting, and we are also disgusted with the author.

Sanjiang is getting worse every time. There is one movie that I can watch every week, which is pretty good, and some of them are a little bit poisonous.

There are several rubbish novels collected by more than 10,000 people. Crazy

I remember looking for a wife when I was just resurrected, but within a few chapters I forgot where I went to the Bird Country to become a disciple of Nagato. It's impossible for the protagonist to forget the outcome of this plot. What kind of character is your protagonist?

Can you stop stalling? It's disgusting 😰

The protagonist doesn't know anything, so he learned chakra extraction, and he has the nerve to take the rope tree as his apprentice.

It was fine, but suddenly I became a eunuch.

Mr. Tsing Yi, I think you are writing a pirate book. I have read your book several times. Let's try another one. Can you be a navy this time?