Lord of the Sword of Time

It's okay to delete my book review. I'm indeed a little excited, but you really need to think carefully about these chapters. Read this chapter for yourself.

Wolf, how can a sword be such an inconvenient thing... Look at my 6 moves with a killing sword of 3,600 rounds per minute.

I thought the author would write about the steam-driven Ming Dynasty. I have been looking forward to it for a long time.

Talk about the word Xia! Chapter 12 of the main text. From my understanding, the protagonist should not let the old monk go, and Xuan Yi should be killed. There are three crimes. One is to accept a disciple without checking it. If the disciple kills someone, how can the master be blameless? The second is that the believers are ignorant and allow them to do evil but do not stop them. The third is ignorance of one's own sins, which is called non-compliance but actually acquiesces. Of course it is right for a person to want to live, but his three apprentices committed murder in front of him for more than a year, and he did not stop him. He should be guilty of this evil. He wanted to live, what about those who were killed? Without his acquiescence, how could someone not have discovered anything for a year? Hahahaha, ridiculous! To put it nicely, he wanted to stay alive and find a chance to stop it. In the past year, his apprentice had killed people and sold goods. Even if he didn't get a share of the spoils, he could still eat the human blood steamed buns. What did he do this year? Just knocking on the wooden fish as a warning is deceiving yourself and others. Even if you meet someone who has the ability to stop it, you may die due to his tacit consent. This is true for one year, what if it is ten years? This is a wrong concept. Even half-grown children understand it. Therefore, this person has committed a heinous crime and deserves to be killed! I write this book review to tell those who are not yet able to distinguish right from wrong. Evil is evil. Small evils and big evils are all sins. There is no room for sophistry.

In a world with advanced technology, there are not even cameras in the prison cells 🙂

At seven years old, you entered primary school. On the day of school, you were bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. At the age of thirteen, you are at the peak of sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you still have the air of a naughty kid in your every breath. Like those fifth-grade children, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet the strong men in the junior high school level. Even the weakest junior high school masters, their strength is by no means comparable to yours. And in this realm, if you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy strips, it's so scary. So you made up your mind to enter the realm of junior high school At the age of sixteen, you reached the realm of junior high school through years of study and hard work. You already look down on your classmates who are at the same level. The usually elusive high school realm is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the restrictions of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the test of the heavenly tribulation of the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal body and enter the university realm. Received blessings from higher education institutions. Those who fail to pass will lose this opportunity and become adults. In ancient times, some of them could also become the most powerful and obtain the Great Way. But under the current world trend, the vitality of heaven and earth is so thin that it is almost difficult. If you go with it, you will be ordinary; if you go against it, you will become an immortal. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. At this time, your girlfriend of four years actually belongs to a huge family power. In their eyes, you without financial resources are like an ant. The family promised their girlfriend to a young master of a large family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You just remember that Lihua Daiyu's girlfriend made a three-year agreement with you. You recall the shame, the powerlessness, and the pain you experienced that day in elementary school. Your heart is roaring and roaring. The veins on my hands are popping up. When I come back, I will dye the sky with demon blood! In order to become stronger in a short time, you chose the Internet. From then on, you enter a big company and get the guidance of a big cow. Even the time spent sitting on the toilet is used to study. As he continued to grow stronger, he discovered a shocking secret. From then on, he started his own business. I have encountered despair and encountered danger. From Beijing to Shanghai and then to Shenzhen, I have seen strong people working hard in the adult realm, received life experience from the guidance of mysterious old men, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from university. They have all become your driving force to move forward Three years later, the situation was calm, and the woman was at home. Do you think he will come? Hearing this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter in her heart. In the past three years, she has refused many blind dates arranged by her family. Now it's almost reaching its limit. The sun is almost setting. Is it just a disappointment after all? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's home. The mother-in-law's face changed slightly at the sound of the mount. Their family had been in business for many years, but in the final analysis it was just a small branch of the family. She had seen Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, from afar, and she would never forget that voice in her life. But this sound is different. The father-in-law suddenly thought of something, his face suddenly turned pale and he started to tremble, this was impossible. How can you do it. No matter how hard I try for half my life, I can't overcome it. My father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are well. A man's voice sounded. Sure enough, a golden dragon Rolls-Royce came down from the doorstep. Suddenly there was silence in the house, and the mother-in-law asked cautiously where the mansion was. The answer was, Taiyi Xianfu (urban area) in the magical city, so the mother-in-law lowered her head in shame and arranged for the wedding, and the young couple needless to say. Another year passed, and on this day a man with glasses named Ma visited me riding a penguin. -After some pleasantries, you are invited to enter the new map of the Righteous Way Alliance (Internet Conference). As soon as you enter, you find that there are about dozens of people present, and their strength is unfathomable. One can hear that I am not interested in money and I have not received a salary for a month. Set a small goal and earn 100 million first. I am face blind and don't know whether it is beautiful or not. Things like that. You can't help but be stunned. Recalling what I saw and heard along the way, it feels like a lifetime ago.

The type and plot of the book are very suitable to my taste. It is a very good book. I have seen the latest features. I would like to give some personal suggestions to the author. It would be best if they can be adopted. If you have any objections, you are entitled to treat me as nonsense. One: Strengthen explanatory content, such as opening a small account to join yourself after becoming the master of Liang Jie. The author did not explain whether the recruitment of family members was secret or public, which led some comments to think that it was public and considered this a poisonous point. Two: There is a foreshadowing before skill acquisition. The author always talks about the acquisition of skills: 1. The protagonist's skill proficiency is enough and he has learned a certain skill; 2. He suddenly acquires the skill. This kind of description is too bland, and the readers look confused. How can they acquire skills? The author can describe in advance 1. The protagonist feels that he is almost proficient enough to learn a certain skill, what is the effect of this skill, and what the current or previous battles will be like if he learns it. 2. The protagonist feels that he is lacking in some skills and has shortcomings. In this way, when the protagonist acquires skills, it will be less abrupt and more impactful. Three: Give the protagonist a "hook" at appropriate intervals. So far, I feel that the author is deliberately "suppressing" the protagonist's growth, or is he making the protagonist's growth more "real"? But the protagonist has already cheated, so why let him continue to be "cowardly"? A few reasonable outbursts can make everyone more enjoyable. 4: The background description is always too thin. The author's description of the background is a world where spiritual power and the development of spiritual energy technology coexist. But now, I still feel that this world is more like an ancient world of martial arts. The only impression of spiritual energy technology products is the spiritual energy lighter? Moreover, in ancient times, there were such things as Huozhezi, which could not express the word technology of spiritual energy technology. And then the sect that didn't use chains came out and explained that relying on external objects can only make you stronger in the early stage. In this case, it is better not to mention technology, after all, the mainstream is still cultivation. Five: Realm, the first thing that bears the brunt is the names of the four realms. I am still a little confused now. None of the names of the four realms is higher than the last or has a numerical increase. The result is that it is difficult to distinguish between strong and weak; secondly, in the description, the author now only writes that the nine stars can be advanced, but what is the qualitative change after advancing? What can you do that you couldn't do before? None of these are available, so I still can't figure out why nine stars means advancement and eight stars means small level improvement.

This is preparation for the eunuch

At the end of the new chapter, the plot is too bloody. A few years ago, there was a fantasy martial arts routine plot. If you write too much of this, it will make you want to give up the book.

This book has been discontinued for several months. But the writing in this book is really good, and the plot design is exquisite. The author has thought of many clever ways to combine the dungeon copy and the real-world story in a very exciting way. When comparing the strongest villains, the characters in this book, especially the main characters, are slightly better portrayed. It's really good-looking. Even if it only has so many chapters, it's still worth reading. I don't understand why this book has bad data. Respect all the author's choices. If the author can read the message, I hope you can relax a little. Good luck makes people happy. Your choice of story and setting of the plot are absolutely top-notch. Absolutely. I am a very clever reader and a semi-professional. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I didn't find any flaws in the character setting or plot. Even the compactness of the plot and the laying of suspense were both good. What a shame. If I have to point out one problem, it might be that the ingenious setting of the first jailbreak at the beginning is a bit complicated. It's not that the plot is not a good-looking setting, it's probably a little complicated... Maybe it's stuck here for a lot of readers... In short, this book is really great, interesting and worth writing. I really want to watch it. But if you really have to give up like this, I still support the author's choice. After all, writing a book is for money. Without money, no matter how good it is, I can't continue... It's a pity.