The Wizard’s Journey Through Infinity

To be honest, I have high expectations for plane travel novels. Generally speaking, I can read it if it's well written, but I'm a little confused about this novel by the author. Judging from the arrangement of the entire line, the main task must be to upgrade the wizard level and see forever. However, the author failed to grasp the overall progress. He wrote about real life at the beginning, but after telling his family that he wanted to go out for a walk, there was no news, and there was no description of the real world again. Even if the time ratio is 1:100, ten years have passed since you were in Narnia and you haven't called home? What about the family? Have you considered time conversion? Please note that since you have written about the real world, it is best to continue writing, either as a connection point for the whole text or as a smooth transition period. Judging from the arrangement of the branch lines, it is obvious that the author wants to integrate the different planes into one line, such as from Narnia to London, from London to the transfer station, from the transfer station to the mummy, from the mummy to the apocalypse, and then back to the world of Harry Potter. The arrangement of the whole line is a very good idea, but the key is that without a clear outline and extraordinary writing power, it is difficult to write this line clearly. Obviously, the author's writing is a bit broken, with confusing clues and scattered descriptions. He can only follow the plot without having his own plans and opinions. Finally, as a suggestion from a reader who wrote such a long book review: The biggest problem in plane travel novels is the integration of the power system and the rationality of the overall upgrade. If the power system is not clear, it is easy for the high-level power to be unable to defeat the low-level power. For example, if your first super power is out of control, in the later stage, the telekinesis power is at least ten tons. What is the concept of ten tons? Ten tons of force push a steel nail, and the Hulk can pierce it. Therefore, it is very important to arrange the power system reasonably. There is also the issue of power upgrading. Plane travel is a shortcut, so the power upgrading will be faster and faster in the later stage. As long as you have a certain amount of power, you can directly rob the protagonist of opportunities when entering a world, which is the origin of the world. This will become faster and faster, snowballing all the way, and it will easily collapse in the later stage. Okay, after typing so many words, I feel soft, that's it.

This book is okay, but it's a bit logically inconsistent. The author himself said that the laws of each universe and each plane are different, and the result is that witchcraft can be used universally in each universe and each plane. You can at least set one up; this kind of witchcraft is very powerful in this universe, but its power in another universe is very small, and it can't even be used. Such a difference.

Does the author really intend to continue? Kavin can understand it, and the water chapter is not unacceptable! However, could you please stop mentioning some setting explanations over and over again? Let's not talk about the previous ones! How many times will the latest chapter of Thanos' setting about the Silmarillion's restraint of evil be repeated? From The Lord of the Rings, who doesn't know the setting of The Silmarillion to restrain evil? Wouldn't it be nice to simply mention it? An explanation of the setting of the Silmaril to restrain evil is half a chapter in vain! Really, it's okay to just mention some meaningful words, whether it's daily life, some ideas, or just some insignificant storylines, it's also acceptable! As a genuine reader who supports full subscription, I really don't want to spend money to read some meaningless setting explanations that are equivalent to repeating chapters! After explaining, most of a chapter and several chapters passed like this... My patience was worn away bit by bit! I don't know if I should continue pursuing it! The story is very exciting. At the beginning, it was criticized for following the plot of the movie without doing anything. Then, starting from the second half of The Mummy, the original ideas were wonderful, and The Lord of the Rings was even more enjoyable. However, later on, some repeated mentions began to be explained in a long paragraph, which is not what it should be! Author! Cherish what you have at the moment! It's not that readers can't understand some authors' difficulties! Whether it's writing a letter, or trying to meet the word count for perfect attendance. But the water shouldn't be like this. Please use some snacks to get rid of the water! You can change your perspective to get rid of some meaningless dialogue plots, or some stories or psychological descriptions of supporting characters! It doesn't matter if it's water or anything, as long as it's not those meaningless setting explanations mentioned over and over again! Please! O(≧口≦)o

If you haven't read Prometheus, don't write it. It's wrong. Do you know that the White Giant family keeps researching in order to solve the problem of being unable to reproduce? Then they came up with the profession of engineers. Their purpose of studying life from beginning to end is to solve the problem of reproduction. They use black water to study in order to develop their god, Deacon. They think that as long as they study Deacon and eat his flesh and blood, they can solve the problem of reproduction. And The reason why they destroy human beings is not because of some fucking experiment, but because they think human beings are greedy and want to destroy human beings. They also brought humans back to their planet for education and then sent them back to the earth, but humans killed him. That person was Jesus, so the white giant made up his mind to destroy humans. The last sentence, Don't say anything. I was reading a pirated version. I searched for the Prometheus novel in my browser and saw this book. Otherwise, I wouldn't have known about it at all.

There are so many planes, why does the author repeatedly move around several planes? ? It's annoying. I think what most readers want to read is the power system, customs and customs of each plane in the multiverse, and how the protagonist changes the world. They don't want to see the protagonist go to various planes to find women!

A 20-year-old behaves like a child, which is very uncomfortable to watch 😅

When you choose the path of a wizard, there is no need for your parents, wife, and children to appear at all. Unless the whole family becomes a wizard, they can only become: 1. Radiation mutant monster or Karma. 2. Handle! For so many years, the protagonist is still a show-off young man, longing for the admiration of the people around him. Isn't he childish? 🤫 It seems to be written by a 20-year-old person

Apart from anything else, I just want to know if the author writes the book without thinking? "Even Bourne, who was blind and had a broken tongue, struggled and said, "I'll go too..."" Where was the author's mind when he wrote?

The protagonist is a loser, and the thigh pendant trend is endless. The protagonist is a useless fw. The conspiracy theory may be a scapegoat.

Why does this book have no beginning or end? When I saw the last picture, I realized that the book was actually over. Where was the plot of this novel?