Writing Novels in a Xianxia World

😭 After working on it for a long time, I can finally post a book review. It turns out that this is the fastest way to gain experience. I only know this now. After reading the book reviews, I found that many people asked about the source of the book. This is the first Xianxia variant version of "Fights Breaking the Sphere" that I believe everyone will not be too familiar with. The book about turning into a cat overnight is actually "Go Back in Time and Become a Cat", but for the setting, the author made reference to a very old novel "The Giant Lizard", which is also an old novel about alien beasts. White Snake, I don't think I need to say more. Many people should have seen it. Zhao Yazhi's image is really classic. You can also recommend some of your favorite novels, and I will include them if they are useful. [Fn=2_2]

The subject matter is good, but you wrote it poorly.

Teach barbarians to have babies with cute boys and girls? [Fn=4_12]

If an ordinary person goes to force the world of cultivation, is it false to really respect the strong? Are they all good people?

If the protagonist of this kind of novel didn't have a buff like invincibility at the beginning, I wouldn't be able to read it. Because in the world of cultivating immortals, strength is the most important thing. If the protagonist has no strength and is suspected of knowing a lot of things, isn't he seeking death?

The subject matter of this novel is really good, but the author didn't write it well. Too much of it was pretentious and homely, and he didn't write about the cruelty and darkness of cultivating immortals, nor did he write about the kind of shock and suspicion that his novel should bring to the aborigines. The most important thing is that there is no clear goal. The protagonist should have an immortal goal to push him forward.

Unexpectedly, I became a divine farmer. The first plot: Although something unexpected happened, everything was as expected. Enter the world of cultivation for the first time: the protagonist, a mortal who travels through time, tells stories in his own store, and makes up a prescription saying that it is Qi Xing Powder to increase the absorption of spiritual energy. The real cultivator heard it, and he can really find the medicine with those names when he goes back. After refining and experimenting, it turns out that it can really gather Qi, and the effect is very good. However, before taking it, you must practice the Tai Chi created by the protagonist, otherwise there will be greater side effects. I didn't read it later, just know it's poisonous, there's no need to poison yourself to death.

Compared to the otherworldly life assistant god. Your storytelling skills are low. Right. Type can be referenced. You have to write your own style.

How should I put it? The creativity is good and the writing is good, haha

In fact, the subject matter itself is good, but after more than 100 chapters, I couldn't stick to it. The main reason is that I can't stand the author's perspective. The YY plot problem is too serious. The protagonist is an ordinary person with rich experience, and he is a single and a nerd who is a Japanese manga addict. I can't help complaining. However, I personally think that the otaku is the author's own attribute. Some of the jokes are good to laugh at, but the author's descriptions are so vulgar. I guess there will be some bastardization in the future, not once or twice. It feels like there will be a story about selling meat to the protagonist for daily welfare in Japanese comics... Alas, the subject matter itself is quite interesting, but the more I read it, the more disgusting it becomes 😐