Personal Archive of Dropped Stories

1 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Wearing a Superhero Shell to Save the World PhilosoNo CP422k WordsCompleted 36.6kFavorites96.9kClicks/ch25kGifts

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③ Because cosplay is essentially an OOC disclaimer, and the protagonist's life, growth, and personality are not important. This ambiguity makes me have some existential myths about this article... The plot of Superman is too boring, like watching some kind of original broadcast. In short, it is just... Boring...

2 [ [Resident Evil] The Male Lead Is Leon Chu Zhi KongRomance285k WordsCompleted 9kFavorites9kClicks/ch37.2kGifts

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④ What I want to see: The heroine avoids some of the tragedies of the original work and develops a friendship with Leon from comradeship to love, but the main plot is still fighting zombies Written by the author: The heroine narrowly escaped death and was saved by Claire. She saw Leon again at the Umbrella Company. She ran over excitedly and was about to tell him that she was still alive. But she saw LA kissing, so she turned around and ran away feeling sour, sad and depressed. Aren't we on the American Hollywood zombie studio? Why are we so sour and East Asian? Everyone was feeling sore the next day as they didn't know whether they were dead or alive! ! The writing is very camera-like, which is a bonus. But when the story of the heroine's death begins in Life 4, it's too similar to "When You Are Literature" Later on, it felt like I accidentally entered the manager's big bed room [Eh~] It's so subtle.

3 c Cos Bai Chao I Also Want to Have a Gray Bat [Comprehensive British and American] Bamboo WeepingNo CP538k WordsCompleted 26.7kFavorites58.5kClicks/ch74kGifts

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① It's edible, but not delicious. There are only a few times when I am not in OOC (not referring to the emotional line) Like a female fan who enjoys herself and doesn't care about anyone else's life or death Oh, this is as big as the universe Cleverly, in some places, the psychological activities of the protagonist are not directly written, thus avoiding the risk of self-pity, because all the supporting characters (characters in the original work) are Hai Lan. 80% Of the plots are about the protagonist standing on the moral high ground and shooting the arrow first and then drawing the target. He implicitly accused the original superheroes of "shouldn't have treated him like this" When I was rating before, I had not seen the plot of the late MCU world. The main world Zhenglian thought that the male protagonist had invaded the MCU and started fighting without saying a word, so I gave it 3 points. I couldn't bear it anymore, so I came back and changed it to 1 star. Even if it is explained as acting, this plot is extremely failed in terms of rhythm and arrangement, because the reader's anger is superimposed by the previous [misunderstandings] that have accumulated continuously. ↓ A common problem in the UK and the US is to ask the author OC to do something → the original character does not agree → the original character is "unlovable" due to the author's writing skills/design problems → the original character is scolded The question is: Is this really who this character is? Would you really say such things and do such things? Are the authors really happy looking at the comments section blaming the original Superman/Green Lantern for their comments? If [the spin-off] isn't out of love for the original character, then I don't understand what is.

4 [ [Comprehensive British and American] How Lucky E Became a Passerby in Gotham Taro DumplingsRomance632k WordsCompleted 12.8kFavorites17.6kClicks/ch5.9kGifts

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③ The author is right to change the second person to the second person. The Titi brother in "The Complete Collection" is very suave and charming, but the writing here is too wordy and I can't stand it. My problem

5 洗 After I Cleared the Superheroes' Names, They Were Reborn [Western Crossover] The Cat in Blue-and-White UnderwearDanmei (BL)600k WordsCompleted 80.8kFavorites198.7kClicks/ch243.3kGifts

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③ There is a reason why some articles have been shelved by me from 2019 to now. Don't believe it.

6 哥 Gotham Worker Simulator AutumnNo CP325k WordsCompleted 17.4kFavorites30kClicks/ch6.3kGifts

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③ Around chapter 26, I started to feel uninterested. I put it aside for more than half a year and found that I didn't want to continue reading anyway, so I gave up. I like Tantra and the early part very much... I don't know what's missing, maybe a little less passionate (. It's just too flat, resulting in a very boring feeling.

7 [ [Western Crossover] The Player Aspires to Become Lord of the Alliance Lan LuluDanmei (BL)1.4M WordsCompleted 47.8kFavorites60.2kClicks/ch501kGifts

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② The author seems to be writing that he was suddenly snatched away by a meme kid and started to play bad meme. Can online articles be written less like Ganlu Temple? The most troublesome thing is to wait with all your strength for the return of the horse-trapping Dragon King. Especially the constant misunderstanding and constant procrastination, which made my anger gauge crazily charge up. Several misunderstandings that are not funny at all have been going back and forth. The plot where one of the protagonists mistakenly thought Nightwing was Damian/is a girl is so messed up that Chapter 9 is not over yet. The communication between the two parties has no information and is unbearable. Earlier, I could still tolerate the Riddler's jokes about information gaps, but the protagonist still misunderstood them despite Nightwing's denials several times. I originally thought about holding back because the combat and atmosphere rendering are both good. Turn the page and Batman misunderstood Nightwing and the protagonist were flirting? ? ?

8 [ [Western Crossover | Anko] How Can I Survive Gotham With an Intelligence of 1? Electric SparrowNo CP326k WordsCompleted 4.9kFavorites6.8kClicks/ch2.4kGifts

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③ Obviously I'm not the audience for certain words

9 当 When the Bat Family Comes to Miwa Town Tang BuheNo CP512k WordsCompleted 11.9kFavorites18.7kClicks/ch11.5kGifts

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③ I don't think bat readers will believe in the system so easily (even though it's essentially dumpling vinegar), but the reading experience is very uncomfortable.

10 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Dark and Diverse, but Vest White River Beneath the MoonNo CP842k WordsCompleted 27.3kFavorites35.7kClicks/ch94.6kGifts

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③ After trying it, I found that I couldn't accept the form of talking to myself like writing small notes in class...

11 运 Sports Anime Popular Character Simulator Yami YamiNo CP887k WordsCompleted 37.4kFavorites47.1kClicks/ch102.9kGifts

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③ The beginning is too long-winded and I can't keep going.

12 为 In Order to Sign In, I Became a Legendary Psychopath Xing YeDanmei (BL)474k WordsCompleted 60.9kFavorites107.5kClicks/ch52.1kGifts

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③ It was time to say goodbye when I realized that I had stopped reading for half a year and still couldn't finish it.

13 重 The Reborn Imperial Concubine Comes from Songyang County [Zhen Huan Biography Fan] Noise Reduction Ball HeadRomance396k WordsCompleted 9.1kFavorites31.6kClicks/ch2.5kGifts

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③ It's a mediocre Yuanmeng fanfic, but it felt a little different from the author's understanding of Huanbi's character and I couldn't stand it, so I gave it up.

14 你 Hello, My Friend Has Passed Away Zero Seven Two FourDanmei (BL)431k WordsOngoing 16.6kFavorites11.8kClicks/ch67.4kGifts

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② Although it is included in this book list, I may read it out of curiosity. By about Chapter 30, the reason for the protagonist's unbalanced mentality is completely confused. After all, no matter from the perspective of being an ordinary person (being protected) or a spiritual master (the ability to use magic weapons is given) in the past twenty years, he is a completely vested person, so what exactly is he trying to do... In chapters 30-40, the protagonist seems to be complaining about the description of Shou's psychological activities. A Xianglin sister-in-law... It seems that he is really unbalanced and thinks that these things should be his... One of the joys of Dihua Liu is [the protagonist is not that strong, but everyone thinks he is strong] or [the protagonist is very strong without knowing it]. Now that the protagonist is [knowing that he is strong, and people around him also think he is strong], he becomes a simple oil king...

15 在 Be a Teacher in a Dog-Blood Novel [Quickly Wear] Yancheng TaishoushengDanmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 126.2kFavorites246kClicks/ch159.5kGifts

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③ I can understand some of the exaggeration in the plot, but the main character is written a bit too much like the childish side that suffers from milk burps. It's too exaggerated. I can't do it. My problem is

16 [ [British and American] Kamen Rider, but Bat Cub Plague-Stricken Young GermDanmei (BL)748k WordsCompleted 7.8kFavorites9.8kClicks/ch9.9kGifts

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④ I was looking forward to this book but... Well... The writing is very cumbersome and wordy, and the pace feels uncomfortable. My problem

17 东 Tokyo Girl's Thoughts Mi JialeRomance788k WordsCompleted 19.4kFavorites22.9kClicks/ch55.7kGifts

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① Generally, I don't criticize the author's zzlc private products unless it obviously affects the reading experience. Compared with the author scolding the readers, the author's little thoughts are obviously more disgusting... It's normal for other characters to be biased against China, but when the heroine was Chinese in her previous life and has no sense of identity as a Japanese, it's shocking that she doesn't refute a word. And then you want to sell the persona of the Japanese Communist Party in this situation? If you insist on writing [Don't drink Chinese water], I would like to ask if boiling and boiling will result in nothing? Weren't the bacteria in Chinese water poisoned by the Japanese? Why are you pretending to be a foreign guest? I don't want to be called a traitor, and I also want the identity of Yamaguchi Momoe's younger sister [you don't have to deal with it this way], but the author has to deal with it this way out of his own little thoughts.

18 感 After Failing to Reform the Protagonist [Through the Book] Concubine in ShanyangDanmei (BL)524k WordsCompleted 321.2kFavorites444.6kClicks/ch142.7kGifts

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② It makes me feel that "The Sick Bamboo Horse" was written by God. Because the perspective of this article starts from Shou, Shou still doesn't know anything. The gap between the reader's perception and the actual development of the plot is too big.

19 小 Xiaoyu's Adventures in the Crossover World Lou Si MiaoNo CP2.2M WordsCompleted 86.3kFavorites156.6kClicks/ch352.1kGifts

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③ Invincible and good-looking in the early stage, weak in the mid-term, and boring at first Boredom is the original sin. Wen Ye's plot is so boring. I really liked the original feeling in the early stage. I even had pictures in my mind during the dialogue. I watched two episodes of the original and came back to watch it again. Wenye is really boring

20 生 Tower of Life (Infinite) JingfeiDanmei (BL)1.4M WordsCompleted 31.3kFavorites27.6kClicks/ch29.4kGifts

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① Boredom is the original sin Using Chinese folk customs to trick people in, they end up with women, children, and fish Shou Tinggong said that he was about to assimilate. "Suddenly he laughed, so hard that he held his stomach and even bent over." He didn't feel like he was criticizing a beauty, but he just felt a little bit sick←

21 [ [HP] Harry and Artemia ChisutenderRomance1.2M WordsOngoing 36.1kFavorites19.7kClicks/ch139.2kGifts

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② Instead of writing any new stories, I intentionally or unintentionally stole the spotlight from Harry... Hmm...

22 [ [Comprehensive British and American] the World Is in Chaos, but the Sunflowers Are Sprouting Like TomorrowNo CP579k WordsCompleted 4.3kFavorites7.4kClicks/ch4.1kGifts

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③ Every character looks like he's reading his lines, and the dialogue feels unnatural. It's really healing, but it's also very uncanny valley.

23 [ [Comprehensive British and American] How the Son of a Mockingbird Flew Back to Gotham Don't Dream of Panax NotoginsengNo CP494k WordsCompleted 21.8kFavorites33.3kClicks/ch39.1kGifts

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① Again, you can really feel the author's love for the characters. Let 17-year-old minors go. Don't think about it. It's a bit disgusting to think about it.

24 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Mr. Wayne's Daily Life as a Social Animal Acai BerryDanmei (BL)483k WordsCompleted 14.7kFavorites31kClicks/ch9.9kGifts

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② Stephanie and Tim were pregnant before they got together. Such an unimportant and controversial plot in the original novel could have been omitted. Such an obvious way of writing in a male channel (it's rare to see such descriptions repeatedly emphasizing the plump breasts of female characters in female channels) Tim never told Stephanie who he was, and then he kissed Cassandra, and Stephanie ran away again. Tim asked Connor to fly him over to chase Stephanie, so Cassandra was left behind again. If someone else had written this, I would have called the male protagonist sick. The advantages tie together all of Tim's major events. I really want to ask who is recommending it. Fortunately, it is the previous book of "Huang Mao". The author has made obvious progress in "Huang Mao"

25 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Isn't It Easy to Play Your Own Characters? Li YimengNo CP500k WordsCompleted 20kFavorites39.3kClicks/ch11.7kGifts

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③ I feel like this is the author's perfect work... The quality of the writing has dropped by more than one notch to prevent me from forgetting why I didn't finish it and put it in.

26 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Robin Simulator Lying High on East MountainDanmei (BL)625k WordsCompleted 19.4kFavorites33.4kClicks/ch55.9kGifts

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③ The beginning is very weird, Tim and Jason don't know each other... Well... Very weird! ! ! They all rushed into the base and beat people half to death. How could they not recognize them? !

27 掺 A Manual for Self-Rescue by a Diluted True Liquor FujinoDanmei (BL)841k WordsCompleted 43.5kFavorites84.5kClicks/ch66.4kGifts

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③ There are no big flaws in the logic, and the writing by Ethan Hondo is very interesting, like a person on the set of a spy movie. It was a bit interesting in the early stage, but in the later stage, it was written between the lines that the protagonist is so miserable and he doesn't want to live. Come and save the protagonist. Classic lines such as "Then why do you look like you are crying?" Gave people a headache. In the middle period, I was in the police academy group and halfway through the CIA. It was really boring in the later period. I felt like I could shout the safe word and stop in time when it was dangerous. It immediately weakened the quality of the winery in the early period. I think authors who want to get serious about drinking and having sex should first read spy movies/spy novels Also: The author's copywriting in another book emphasizes that [the author can see the content of the book list's rating] as if he is threatening the readers... The look and feel is super subtle.

28 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Magical Girl in Gotham Tea StickRomance226k WordsCompleted 14.9kFavorites34.2kClicks/ch7kGifts

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③ When there are no big problems, [boring] and [running account] are the biggest problems btw, Dick is a star after all. Others shouldn't be too surprised by his gymnastics talent.

29 [ [Comprehensive British and American] I Cosplayed Qiao Family Courtyard in Front of Chaoying Yan XunDanmei (BL)466k WordsCompleted 26.3kFavorites50.1kClicks/ch22.4kGifts

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② The protagonist keeps giving speeches under the national flag

30 米 Giyuu from Miwa Town Is Also Confused Today Returning West AgainNo CP636k WordsCompleted 61.3kFavorites88.1kClicks/ch142.9kGifts

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② The logic of the plot doesn't convince me, it makes me sad to watch.

31 [ [Comprehensive British and American] How to Become a Savior Want to Eat Fried Chicken and Drink ColaNo CP522k WordsCompleted 23.7kFavorites19kClicks/ch26.4kGifts

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② It's a pity to throw away tasteless food I can understand what the author wants to write about the character, but it's too slow for me. The protagonist becomes a god in the first world. His ability is so invincible that it makes him very boring.

32 [ [Comprehensive British and American] the Daily Life of an Atypical Bat Cub in Gotham Happy CabbageNo CP499k WordsCompleted 42.6kFavorites103.8kClicks/ch65.6kGifts

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③ The same goes for "Gotham Summer Vacation". The writing and characters are similar, but it's a bit more boring than that one. Boredom is the original sin

33 狂 Berserker Growth Manual Drifting in a Frost-Free HarborRomance219k WordsCompleted 7.8kFavorites17kClicks/ch7.5kGifts

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② You can accept Shark Clown, but you can't accept Shark with no foreshadowing. In the first chapter, the clown turned his back to the heroine and took the handle and killed Mikura. I know everyone misses Shark Clown, but this will make other people look stupid.

34 [ [Comprehensive] Mutant Tomie Shark RoeRomance446k WordsCompleted 21.4kFavorites103kClicks/ch12.2kGifts

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② Author: Reduce the sense of country Actuality: It's all about country feel It is filled with a lot of the author's nostalgia and self-pleasure about Liuzi's career.

35 我 I Raised a Real Daughter and a Real Young Master Wheat Field SnowmanRomance756k WordsCompleted 15kFavorites32.6kClicks/ch17.3kGifts

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② It's not that cool writing is not an excuse to write about a villain who has reduced his intelligence.

36 [ [Comprehensive British and American] It's Not the United States That Is Strong and Miserable, It's Batson Hehe HeheziDanmei (BL)983k WordsCompleted 45.6kFavorites119.9kClicks/ch98.7kGifts

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③ The kind of sick mother-in-law approach that overemphasizes various PTSD and trauma reactions It felt like it wouldn't shape Batman, so there was only Bruce's disapproving look. Bruce said no, Bruce said get out of Gotham, and the boss Bruce said yes. In the middle, the author has completely immersed himself in his art. It's 900,000 words, but Chapter 40 starts Infinite War. Isn't the progress a bit weird?

37 我 I'm Spending the Summer in Gotham A Steamed BunNo CP513k WordsCompleted 59.9kFavorites193.8kClicks/ch52.7kGifts

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④ I can watch it. Overall it's good, but it's too routine. I still prefer the plot to be more compact.

38 好 After Maxing Out Affection, I Became the Dark Moonlight Leaving the Hidden Mountain in the MoonlightDanmei (BL)2.7M WordsOngoing 74.2kFavorites124.3kClicks/ch474kGifts

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③ The opening of Shuichi Akai is better than the opening of Toru Amuro, and the barrage forum is worse than other articles (the author used cp+ to explain the plot, and even after three pages, he used barrage to complain about "a lot of nonsense") Entering the memory killing, it started to get boring, so I said that if Gin adopts an experimental subject after seeing one, then the best thing he should do is raise a cat. The pacing is terrible. Basically, it alternates between dozens of chapters in the current world → dozens of chapters in memories → dozens of chapters in the present world. The memories are too long and affect the perception of the plot in the current world (so I don't have the patience to read it)

39 黑 The Black Lotus Manual [Book Transmigration] White Feather Drawing a Carved BowRomance439k WordsCompleted 1.3MFavorites1.4MClicks/ch641.4kGifts

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① Advancing the emotional line depends entirely on the male protagonist having an erotic dream

40 洄 Returning to the Heavens Huai ShangDanmei (BL)709k WordsCompleted 1.2MFavorites1.6MClicks/ch3.6MGifts

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① I was too curious to see how bad it was, and I paid the price for my curiosity.

41 失 The Ex-Boyfriend I Gained After Losing My Memory Concubine in ShanyangDanmei (BL)1.7M WordsCompleted 561.1kFavorites597.5kClicks/ch1.3MGifts

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② The emotional line is greasy and unbearable

42 除 Everyone but Me Is the Protagonist Cong WenRomance749k WordsCompleted 464.4kFavorites784.6kClicks/ch601.4kGifts

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③ The fashionability of the protagonist is still very important. I can accept that the heroine wears a bamboo hat and rides a buffalo (after all, she has such a fairy look), but I cannot accept that the mythical animal chosen by the heroine is a donkey (it is not okay to transform into a mythical beast if she has blood).

43 第 The Ninth Agricultural Base Red Thorn NorthRomance732k WordsCompleted 456.1kFavorites702.5kClicks/ch2.3MGifts

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④ Don't like to read farming articles

44 升 Happy Coffin Raising Black Cat White SocksDanmei (BL)510k WordsCompleted 301.9kFavorites358.4kClicks/ch239.2kGifts

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① The sweet love between Shou and Shou sacrificed a master. They got entangled and fought. The master thought Shou really wanted to run away but tried to help him. In the end, the master died and they were sweet together.

45 当 When the Villain Is Bound to the Female Lead System Day After DayRomance526k WordsCompleted 248.7kFavorites406.9kClicks/ch113.2kGifts

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③ A bit boring

46 四 Exchange Forum for Patients from the Fourth Hospital [Unlimited] Colorful RiceRomance823k WordsCompleted 221kFavorites313.6kClicks/ch232.2kGifts

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① The heroine's design is all about pretending to be crazy and acting stupid

47 职 Professional Villain [Quick Travel] Frozen SupermanDanmei (BL)1.1M WordsCompleted 211.3kFavorites415.7kClicks/ch285.3kGifts

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③ Another villain with a past as heavy as a fifty-pound quilt + the original protagonist of a true villain

48 看 Have You Seen My Cat? [Unlimited Streaming] Nian LuanDanmei (BL)1.7M WordsCompleted 209.8kFavorites397.1kClicks/ch725kGifts

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④ I forgot the reason, I didn't finish reading it

49 可 Hateful! She Pretended to Be [Infinite] Yan FuRomance864k WordsCompleted 208.3kFavorites268.9kClicks/ch257.9kGifts

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② The plot that can be seen at a glance, the effect of showing off ≈ Arguing with the security guard at the gate of the community and throwing fifty yuan in the face

50 买 Buying Life Yu Jing Peng XiangRomance6.6M WordsCompleted 205.2kFavorites244.1kClicks/ch2.6MGifts

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④ The battle line is too long