After My Nemesis Sent Me a Substitute

The novel is very good, I like it very much, but I could actually write a longer one. For example, the love changes of the male and female protagonists over a hundred years can be written about a lot of daily life, the heroine's journey as a sword before she awakens to self-awareness, and the story of the heroine and the second heroine, including the appearance of the male protagonist's affection in the extra story, can also be expanded into several extra chapters. 250,000 Words is too few. The characters and plot could be more fleshed out in this story. If it is too short, it will miss the mark in characterization. Many things seem to be written in one stroke. It is a pity that only 7 points can be written for things that could be written as 9 points. [Glasses], the overall rhythm is good, steady reading Keep going, the ending part and the plot of the second female lead made me cry all the time, but I still have the same feeling. It has been written very well, but it is too little written. It lacks a spark. It could be more fleshed out (it's the kind of regret that you really like a treasure but think it can be more amazing). I look forward to the author's other works.

Very nice. What surprised me was that the author came up with such a world view of various schools of thought + fantasy. It was very novel. At first, I spent a little brainpower to sort out so many new concepts. I even felt a little pity after reading it. If such a world view setting could be written into a full-length group portrait, or perhaps it would be wonderful as a background setting for animation or games. In terms of characters, there are actually prototypes of group portraits. The main reason for the prototype is that it is not long, but each character is impressive. Mei Chichun is a stubborn person who refuses to do anything the teacher says. Long Ling is naturally stupid, but her nature is to serve the country, the people and the world. Lin Qingyao, I have a mommy issue. Xiuxiu is generally timid, but has backbone. Shi Yueqing, I was half worried that she would almost become the control group for the heroine, but luckily she didn't. Even the few characters I drew left a vivid impression in my mind. Lin Cangyu thought she was a cruel tiger mother, but secretly she didn't know why she felt sorry for her cheap daughter. The Ji brothers and sisters are very arrogant. They have a feeling that if you call them "Guardians of Light", the next second the brothers and sisters will follow them to save the world with their heads held high. There are other roles that I won't list one by one. Thank you author, I like this article very much.

It's not boring at all. Goddess, please write more. I'm crying. I want to see the daily life of a young couple after marriage. Two bitter gourds haven't even had two chapters of happiness. Goddess, please write more. Just treat it like chicken feeding. I kneel down and beg you.

I think the modern design of this young couple could be a strange girl who is proficient in everything and a talented young man who is the first in his grade. The love at first sight plot is still very interesting [Rainbow Fart]

Very beautiful, I like it so much. I haven't seen such a good match for a long time. Spread the flowers [poor]

I want to watch Xuan Xi's extra [crying] [crying] [crying] please, please I keep crying [crying] [crying] [crying]

2026.6.9

Oh, so cute! ! ! ! ! I really want to see more extras, please get the physical book~

Songting Songting, who are you? How could someone write such a wonderful story? I read the introduction to the Little Magpie Bridge book and said it will be published this year. Is it true? Do you still have the energy to publish another book this year [Glasses]

2026.9.24