The Alchemist's Handbook

This is really a pity, such a pity I really like the early plot, but the later part is really too perfunctory, the emotional line between attack and reception is completely unclear, and the later fight scenes are even more abstract and short. The scene where the God of Death comes should be very shocking, but the writing is not as emotional as the previous game. In addition, there is also the problem of the introduction. Although it is generally correct, the overall style is completely different from the introduction. Moreover, this era cannot be said to be completely dark, and it is a bit deceptive (I personally feel that you are right if you say it). And I I haven't seen the long-awaited story about the romance between the two of them. It can be seen that the author originally wanted to use this as a turning point to promote the relationship between the two. Later, he probably cut the outline and rushed to finish it (I'm not sure why, but I really feel it's a pity) In addition, the two latter people dug out the mastermind very quickly. It was just like the hard work of the two of them in the past many years, especially the attack. The Holy See's defeat has become even more divided. It's just like a joke. In fact, it's not that I can't accept that the revenge will be completed immediately and then the infrastructure restoration will be completed, and it will end like this. In fact, it is completely possible to advance the offensive and emotional lines after the revenge is completed. I think this is more suitable for the scandal between the two of them in the introduction. Plus, I think With Shou's character, it is impossible for him to consider falling in love before he has truly taken revenge... After all, it is just my opinion. I really like this book. It is a pity that this book cannot be written more and better. The ending is indeed too hasty. If possible, I hope my wife can fix it in the future, or make it into a sequel.

How wonderful the beginning is, how rushed the ending is. At the beginning, Brooke, as the protagonist, was very unconventional. Nowadays, all kinds of tall and flawless protagonists are popular. I haven't seen such a market-oriented, stingy character for a long time. Although this is just Brooke's disguise, it is vividly described. No one is born perfect, and not only perfect people have the right to love and be loved. As the plot unfolds, the distinctive alien continent gradually unfolds, and the endless distinctive combat professions are refreshing. The result... Ga? Suddenly killed the enemy in two blows? —Shouldn't this describe a vigorous century-old battle against the Insect Curse? Suddenly the two protagonists fall in love? —Didn't they just discover each other's true identities? Suddenly overthrown the big boss behind the scenes? —It's so easy to overthrow, why did it take so long to lay the groundwork? In fact, this article is suitable to be written into a long novel. How Brooke became stingy and greedy for money, how he became such a powerful insect warlock while wandering, how he carefully planned every step to overthrow the mastermind behind the scenes, and how he had a vigorous decisive battle of the century - this fantastic story unfolds slowly in a magnificent alien continent... If it could be written as a long novel according to the standard of the first half, it would be so enjoyable for readers. It's a pity that the ending ended abruptly, too hastily and briefly. Another note: It would be great if the habit of "how do you say it" can be corrected? Sometimes you can see a page of the mobile phone reading interface twice, which is really uncomfortable...

The ideas in this wife's articles are always great, and the beginning and middle are also good. However, every time the ending is hasty and anticlimactic, which makes people feel helpless.

It was really too rushed, nothing unfolded, the emotional scenes were all thrown together inexplicably, and then the big boss suddenly hit me, it was such a pity! I miss the early days when 20 kids were working all day long while writing meticulously. What followed was a running account, such a good character, and such a good world view. . .

It still has the same grand world view, interesting settings, and a hasty ending.

Guess it's almost over. Really. I hope there will be a sequel. It's really good.

It's still unfinished, it's too short, and the ending is too hasty. I feel like I could have written a long novel like 30,000 Years of the Earth. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, that I am heart-wrenching. Madam, I really don't want to be like this anymore. I can really keep up with you for a year to update 😭 😭 😭

No more, I really can't get enough of it. I haven't been so happy reading it for a long time. It's just that the second part is too fast, like pressing the accelerator. Maybe it's because this book has poor traffic. The author's wife wants to open a new book. Please support.

It was really too fast from behind Is the author not very good at writing about emotions, so he made a lot of cuts 😂 😂 😂 In other words, there are really almost none, but I actually finished reading them all 😂 The plot is really good. Chapters 40 to 50 are great. The protagonist is also very interesting. It's rare to see such a character. I really like 🤩 🤩. The knight is relatively thin because he doesn't appear much, which is understandable, hahaha. But when I started to accelerate later, it 💔💔 In addition, there is actually a bug. Travelers from thousands of years ago. After thousands of years of development, it is impossible that the world has not been able to communicate with this country, right? It's impossible for everyone in this country to go out. After all, didn't the railway stop just 12 years ago? I think it is more appropriate to change it to about two hundred years. After all, a dynasty will change after three hundred years... It is impossible for a dynasty to last for a thousand years without any development. Moreover, the insect magician said that it disappeared a thousand years ago, but the industry had just started to develop at that time. How could it suddenly stop working 🐶 I think the time aspect can be modified.

These last few chapters are so out of touch with the previous ones, and the ending is so rushed that it doesn't even look like it was written by one person.