The Infrastructure Craze

I have read it several times, and I sigh that this article is really suitable for adapting into a shounen manga... It's a pity that the manga is basically ruined now... The wife's ancestral beasts and various ability settings are very detailed, and the protagonist is also rich and interesting. Although there are many bugs, to be honest, it is really awesome.

I have edited several articles written by the author. They are all very grand in structure, exciting in process, and then end badly! The author wonders whether you want to improve it or not. It's all spread out, and the ending is hasty and inexplicable.

No more ratings, jj doesn't give five stars, so the review is 5 stars! ! ! This kind of ancient tribal infrastructure is quite interesting, and the setting of the ancestral beast is also very novel. However, the ending feels a bit rushed, and it should be expanded a little. Also, in the large text, there are really almost no emotional scenes, although the plot and career line are indeed very manageable, and it is very enjoyable to read! All in all, I really like the pen refill!

There are too many stories to tell! ! The story of the little flying bird! Kun's territory! What to do with ten suns! The customs and landforms of various tribes! The origin of small mushrooms! Many new maps have not been opened! The accurate imagination is really beautiful! I really can't get enough of it! I still want to read many stories about this world!

The most regrettable thing about such a large article is that every article feels like it ends abruptly. I feel that many things are not explained clearly and the content ends too hastily. It is a pity.

This ending is a bit rushed!

The emotional descriptions are not very good, the war is a bit of a joke, and the charges later on are so expensive! Chapter 39

Although the comments are messy, it is still good-looking. I admire the author's great imagination!

I have to say that although the author is not very good at emotional lines, he has a good grasp of the rhythm of writing about infrastructure construction, which is very attractive.

I read the first 60 chapters carefully, and the rest just based on the titles. Maybe it's because of the order of appearance, but I don't have a sense of belonging to Scarlet Emperor City, even though the author has repeatedly emphasized that it is the protagonist's home.