When the Beautiful General Was Coveted by His Sinister Student

[Completed. If you've bought the whole book, could you leave a rating? Thank you!]

An early work. The writing and pacing are a mess, so I don't recommend buying the whole thing all at once and reading it QAQ

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Character setup: A wild-dog gong who's extremely fierce and great at playing the victim, cries and goes berserk, but can be soothed by petting him the right way × a cold, heartless, flirtatious and self-aware, moody, top-tier dog trainer of a beauty shou who's completely unhinged.

Blurb

The young major general was sent to fight on Tula Star by his own teacher. It was supposed to be a battle with no hope of return. While everyone was mourning the major general, he somehow came back, gravely wounded. After he recovered, the media interviewed him.

The interview went smoothly enough, until someone brought up his teacher, that beautiful and vicious general.

"Major General Lu Jue, do you feel that your teacher went too far by sending you to fight on Tula Star alone?"

Lu Jue glanced at him, then raised his head and stared at the camera in the center, as if he were looking at someone through the lens. He said each word slowly and clearly: "Teacher, you're watching, aren't you? I'm back alive. Do you remember what I said when you sent me away?"

He paused, then added, "I said that if I came back alive, I would definitely..."

He didn't say the last three words aloud. Instead, he mouthed them: "I'll fucking kill you."

Outside the frame, Shen Yang, dressed in a general's uniform, switched off his lightbrain and muttered, "What a lunatic."

He looked down at the prisoner being tortured, furious, and kicked him hard. Then he left with a final order: "Keep interrogating him. Don't kill him."

The general's looks were beyond reproach, but he was cold-blooded and heartless, with a fickle temper. One moment he could be smiling as he spoke to you; the next, he'd shoot a bullet through your brain. So people all over Blue Star kept their distance from Shen Yang.

Lu Jue was different. Shen Yang had picked him up from the battlefield, brought him home, then left the little stray to fend for himself.

Once a stray pup grows up, it starts biting. Shen Yang found it annoying that Lu Jue was taller than him. And after he inexplicably awakened the ability to realize he was a vicious male supporting character, foreseeing his own ending, Shen Yang treated Lu Jue even worse.

He kicked Lu Jue, slapped him, called him a mad dog. But sometimes he also thought that this was the only mad dog he had left by his side.

When he discovered Lu Jue using his clothes to get through his rut, he felt sorry for him. Yet after gently helping Lu Jue take care of it with his hands one moment, the next he personally sent him off to Tula Star.

This was General Shen Yang: he never did things by the book.

And Lu Jue was hopelessly in love with him...

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① A super awkward little scene that really captures my CP's personalities:

Lu Jue: "I've seen right through Teacher. He looks down on me and treats me like a bad kid, ordering me around whenever he likes. I've decided I'm not going to listen to him anymore."

Shen Yang (just woke up) (lazily reaching out) (slim waist exposed) (tears at the corners of his eyes) (mumbling): "Lu Jue?"

Lu Jue: "Teacher, I'm here! I'm here!!!" (rushes to the bedside) (leans close to Shen Yang) (coos and acts cute) (rubs against Shen Yang's hand) (starry-eyed)

Shen Yang: "I want some water."

Lu Jue: (eagerly hands him a glass) (starry-eyed, hoping for praise) (I'm your most obedient student, right!)

A few rambling thoughts:

1. This is a writing exercise. My prose is only just readable, and I'm working hard to improve by reading.

2. As the blurb says, if you're a hardcore gong-con, please don't come in. One-on-one, happy ending, both are pure.

3. Two lunatics fall in love. The shou has no conscience, and the gong is a shameless madman.

4. Yes, the shou is heartless and unhinged. When he sometimes wants to kill the gong, he really means it. The gong is crazy and messed up. The shou is stunningly beautiful, and the gong is so obsessed with his looks that he can't tear himself away. He's utterly, utterly, utterly devoted to the shou.

5. Logic goes flying everywhere, and there are original worldbuilding details. The shou is fierce and will wear women's clothes. If that bothers you, don't read.

6. There is a side CP, Situ Lan × Qin Yang. They barely appear in the main story, though. Whether they get an extra chapter depends on reader response.

7. Please don't give me writing advice. You don't need to tell me if you're dropping the story. The moon guided me in writing this, so don't scold me!

A mention of my upcoming novel, After the World's Most Hated Begins to Forget:

Character setup: A timid, deeply insecure, yet gentle and kind, slow-to-react cutie shou with a reaction time half a planet long × a possessive gong who seems gentle and respectful toward everyone, is courteous and proper, sunny and cheerful, but gets insanely jealous when his lover gets too close to someone else and makes sneaky little moves to declare his ownership.

Blurb

At home, Lu Yu has an exceptionally capable older brother, an academically gifted older sister, and a lively, lovable younger brother. There's no doubt that he, with his unremarkable looks and quiet nature, is the least liked of them all.

His older brother looks down on him, his older sister dislikes him, and even his younger brother mocks him.

As for his parents...

Of course, they don't love him either.

At school, his personality is so unsuited to that of a noble, and he also gets poor grades and is timid and cowardly, making him a target his classmates enjoy teasing and bullying.

As for his teacher...

Of course, the teacher pretends not to notice.

Recently, Lu Yu seems to have fallen ill.

The doctor's diagnosis on his medical report was the name of a disease he'd never heard of. The doctor said it was also known as selective amnesia. As for its symptoms, even the doctor couldn't explain them clearly, only saying that he might gradually forget the people around him.

The first person Lu Yu forgot was his older brother.

The symptoms began when he woke up one morning. He opened the door, saw his older brother in a suit, and went straight downstairs, leaving out his usual morning greeting: "Good morning, Big Brother."

His older brother was puzzled.

He thought Lu Yu was sulking because he'd scolded him the night before.

That was until no lunchbox was delivered at lunchtime, until Lu Yu failed to say "Good night, Big Brother" before bed, until...

His second younger brother seemed to be ignoring him...

The second person Lu Yu forgot was his younger brother.

His symptoms began after his younger brother mocked him that day. He no longer checked his brother's homework at night or stepped in to smooth things over when his brother got into trouble. He even stopped preparing the exquisite birthday gifts he'd always given him...

His younger brother panicked.

His second older brother seemed not to care about him anymore...

The third person Lu Yu forgot was his father.

His father grew anxious. His second son seemed to have forgotten him...

The fourth person Lu Yu forgot was his older sister.

Gradually, Lu Yu noticed that the people around him cried whenever they looked at him and kept treating him well. They pampered him as if he'd been born to be loved by everyone.

"Did they always spoil me this much before...?"

The only person he hadn't forgotten was the childhood friend who'd grown up with him, the boy who'd always been the pride of the heavens.

One morning

The horn of a motorcycle sounded outside the villa, and his childhood friend's carefree teenage voice rang out from outside

"Sangsang, let's go! Time for school!"

Lu Yu smiled in a way they'd never seen before and ran outside

"Coming!"

Little scene ①:

"Sangsang, will this illness make you forget everyone? Will you forget me too?" Song Jianli looked at Lu Yu's medical report, his eyes reddening. His voice was hoarse, and the hand holding the report trembled uncontrollably.

Lu Yu crouched down and wiped the tear from the corner of his eye.

"No, I won't forget you." Lu Yu opened the notes app on his phone to show Song Jianli.

It was a photo of him, with a note underneath:

"Song Jianli, very, very, very good. I can't forget him, because I like him."

Song Jianli:!

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A few rambling thoughts:

1. One-on-one, each other's first love, happy ending. The gong spoils the shou more than his own mother does ().

2. Everyone except the gong gets the crematorium treatment. Sangsang won't forgive anyone easily. Forgetting means forgetting, and he won't forgive them until they hit rock bottom!

3. A slice-of-life story with both sweet and bittersweet moments.

4. The illness is made up, so don't worry about the logic! Sweetness, sweetness, sweetness; pampering, pampering, pampering. That's the whole point! Shout it with me: Long live sweetness!

5. From being hated by everyone to being loved by everyone.

6. To make it a lucky six, here's a line from Song Jianli: "Lu Sangsang, unmatched under heaven!"

Theme: Where there's a will, there's a way.