Put on My Ninja Secret Identity

What looks good in the front is getting worse and worse in the back, driving high and moving low. Enmmm, I don't even understand the role of the protagonist's identity. It's better to set up a time-travel party that completely travels back in time to build the world of Naruto. The ending in the later stages was particularly rushed and the background was very blurry. For example, from the perspective of Gojo Satoru and Naruto, the person from the Ninja Sect is going to carry out the Infinite Tsukuyomi Plan. There is no reason to persist at all, and the construction is too weak. Also, knowing that Tobirama and the others would stop Tsukuyomi's plan, why would that person from the Ninja Sect (the protagonist's identity in the eyes of Gojo Satoru and the others) resurrect them? ? Many holes have not been filled.

The words of Infinite Tsukuyomi are really good for losers (like me). I don't want an unhappy and imperfect life at all. People will die in the end. How nice it is to die in a perfect dream. Anyway, I don't know.

Let's give it a little evaluation, it sucks. Many places are actually quite unreasonable. Naruto exists as a character who reveals the settings, and Sasuke always interrupts him, but then he doesn't stop Hashirama and others when they explain the exact same settings. I don't understand why they interrupt the reveal of the settings. Furthermore, the setting of this leader is also strange, and his background, reasons for his actions, etc. Are not mentioned. Many parts of the story that should be expanded have not been expanded, and many things that should not be included are present. The narrative is also quite redundant, and the final climax is covered in one stroke. It stands to reason that Madara's Infinite Tsukuyomi should have been written in several large chapters, but it ended up being completed in two or three paragraphs. The existence of the system is also quite magical. My younger brother has guessed this a long time ago, but the middle personality is really annoying, and the lack of awareness and emotion are not reflected. When the system awareness is less than ten, he is still confused and loses his temper, which makes me confused. The only thing that supported me along the way was Infinite Tsukuyomi, but I ended up feeling uncomfortable all the way... I hope you can work hard.

It's really a bad ending, I still didn't believe it until the end [knelt down and cried bitterly]

Love you, Yunsang, your readers love you deeply To be honest, I bought it in one go and then put it on my bookshelf and didn't read it again. Now when I read it, it felt so bland. It's not that the author didn't write well, but there was a faint feeling that the character creation was not full. It's not an OOC problem, it's just a strange feeling. Each of you has done your best to fulfill their character, but you feel inexplicably not like them. Every time you change scenes, you will feel very strange. The author wrote them into two camps, so it should be We shouldn't be so close to each other on the surface. We should just interact more privately. It also made me feel strange when we were in contact. With Gojo's character, it's impossible for him to just suspect and not report it. The timeline jumped too fast, and there wasn't even a real ending. When it is written, it feels like a month has passed before the next year has passed. Overall, it is actually a suitable read. It is not the original work. The ending is a bit inexplicable. When I wrote the system as my younger brother, there was no foreshadowing, which was a bit abrupt.

Why did it end so suddenly? The hole of the leader of Shinobi has not been filled yet.

? Is this a bad ending?

Did it end a little too quickly? Why doesn't the protagonist go back to the ninja world to have a look? Ahhhhhhhhh

...? It ended so suddenly

Why do I feel like I've been stabbed through the heart by thousands of knives?