[Tentatively planning to finish revisions before the end of the Year of the Snake in 2025. You can wait and read it then. Left on 2025.3.2]
[This book needs revisions. Some plot points need sorting out, and the structure needs adjusting. I also think the way the antagonists are handled is too lenient. Their good sides shouldn't be allowed to excuse their bad deeds. That's not right. I'm still considering how to revise it, and I don't know when I'll finish. Read with caution, and thank you all. I won't turn off comments, so check the comment section for potential triggers. Left on 2024.3.12]
[He Guan is the bottom, the bottom!!!]
He Guan transmigrated into a danmei novel as the scummy top's white moonlight.
The kind who abuses the bottom early on, then gets beaten up by the scummy top after the latter goes through a groveling-arc to win back his wife. At the end, the antagonist, who is also the scummy top's uncle, drowns him in a lake and feeds him to piranhas.
He Guan: Whoever wants to be this white moonlight can have it. I'm straight as a ruler :D
The original He Guan married the scummy top's uncle, a blind man, because he was short on money. Lately, he'd regretted it and was making a fuss about getting divorced.
According to the plot, He Guan was about to become an ex who'd been pining for him for nine years, only to meet a tragic end.
He Guan toured the sprawling mansion, with its seven courtyards and seven halls, then promptly tore up the divorce papers.
Wouldn't divorcing him now be kicking him while he was down? Sure, He Guan wasn't into men, but since they'd gotten married, that made him his wife.
Taking care of one person couldn't be that hard.
He wouldn't kick a man when he was down. Surely they could at least treat each other with respect?
As it turned out, that wasn't so simple.
*
On the day the contract expired, countless people waited to laugh at He Guan.
They expected He Guan, who'd sucked up to the powerful and wanted to marry into the Lou family but ended up marrying a blind man, to fall from the clouds into the mud.
But that didn't happen.
Instead, they heard that the new head of the family was holding a wedding banquet.
At the extravagant celebration, the man rumored to be blind had an icy gaze. His beautiful, pale irises seemed almost inorganic, and when he looked at people, it was like a god scrutinizing mortals.
The glittering ring on his left ring finger told the guests everything they needed to know.
Only when his gaze fell on the person beside him did a human smile appear in his eyes.
He Guan was eating dessert when the hair on the back of his neck suddenly stood on end. He reflexively grabbed the newcomer's hand. "What are you...!"
His voice died away when he saw who it was.
The man lowered his lashes and pulled He Guan close, one arm around his waist and back. With his other hand, he took He Guan's wrist and rubbed at the matching ring on his finger.
His voice was low and soft, like a cloud drifting into someone's heart.
If you listened closely, there was even a trace of wounded indignation.
"Didn't you say I was your wife? Why are you still avoiding me? Honey, last night I..."
Flustered and red-faced, He Guan hurriedly picked up a piece of cake and shoved it into his mouth.
His fingers were trembling.
The man caught his fingers and drew them to his lips, gazing at him with lovely peach-blossom eyes as he smiled and kissed his knuckles.
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1. A straightforward, straight-laced bottom who says exactly what he thinks x a top who quietly turns him gay. This description might not be quite right, but it's the feeling I want to write. The top will regain his sight.
2. A much-loved bottom, exclusive 1v1 happy ending. Since he's straight, he keeps calling the top his wife.
3. All entertainment-industry characters are fictional, fictional, fictional. Don't associate them with real people, don't associate them with real people, don't associate them with real people. The author doesn't follow celebrities or know any of them. Comments that do this will be deleted.
4. If you have any other concerns, ask in the comments and I'll reply.
Next Book
My Archrival Transmigrated into My Cat
Ten years ago, when Xie Songting and Xi Bisi first met, Xi Bisi was being confessed to.
At the time, Xie Songting was fast asleep in a corner of the rooftop with a black woven sack over his head.
Someone gently turned the girl down.
His rejection was so gentle that he didn't sound like someone refusing a confession at all. Xie Songting jolted awake and got goosebumps listening to it.
*
After turning her down, Xi Bisi turned to leave.
Unexpectedly, the woven sack on the balcony stirred. Someone sat up and retched twice.
Xi Bisi was startled but quickly composed himself. Smiling politely, he asked, "Hey, why are you sleeping there? Are you okay?"
The black sack rustled as it shook its head. "I'm fine."
"That's good. Then you can carry on..."
"You made me sick," the sack added. "I'll be fine once you leave."
A crack appeared in Xi Bisi's perfect mask... a rare occurrence.
*
Later, when Xie Songting found out that the cat he'd adopted was Xi Bisi, his eyes blazed. He gripped the cat by the scruff and enunciated each word: "Xi Bisi, you really know how to put on an act."
The strong cat lowered its head and ingratiatingly licked his thumb with its rough, barbed tongue.
Slowly, it got wet.
1. Exclusive 1v1 happy ending. The cat is neutered; the human isn't.
2. A modern urban romance. The ability to hear a cat speak counts as a supernatural ability, which is why this is tagged as such. In reality, nobody but Xie Songting has any powers. It's not horror, paranormal, or supernatural fantasy, just a simple romance, and there's barely any plot.
The Book After That
The Ailing Mentor Tears Up the White Lotus Script [Book Transmigration]
Yu Xichen transmigrated into a web novel's villainous mentor, the male protagonist's enemy. He's a hypocritical, materialistic, phony saint of a beauty.
He stops to rest every few steps and gasps for breath after a few more. His way of greeting people is to cough up blood. Taking advantage of the male protagonist's poverty when he first joined the sect, he grievously injures him, steals his treasure, and casts him into the abyss.
As everyone knows, villains never finish the job. So after the male protagonist returns from the abyss, the villain dies.
He dies in pieces.
When Yu Xichen arrived, the original body had just kicked the male protagonist into the abyss.
Yu Xichen coughed up a mouthful of blood and jumped in after him.
He was going to finish the job.
*
What he didn't expect was that the male protagonist's true form, which the author had only hinted at, was...
a black dragon.
The last one in the cultivation world. Rare, elusive, and powerful.
He didn't manage to finish him off. Instead, the male protagonist transformed into a dragon and carried him back to its lair.
And this dragon was... a little strange.
"You look so weak. Drink my blood."
"Why are you coughing again? Let me lick you."
"You're so cold. Come closer to me. A little more, yes, right here. This is the warmest spot."
Yu Xichen, picked up by the dragon and placed on its body: ...
*
A legend arose in the cultivation world.
The black dragon had a beautiful, powerful mate who could make it willingly submit with just one kiss, silencing it completely.
At that moment, Yu Xichen stood at the center of a magnificent underground palace. Golden shackles clinked around his ankles as his long black hair flowed down to them. His complexion was rosy, no longer as pale as before.
Hearing a sound, he turned his golden eyes toward the dragon at the door and said, "Yu Lie, behave."
The black dragon wrapped its tail around him, holding him tight without hurting him. Nervously, it said, "They're all saying you have a partner. How could that be possible...?"
Yu Xichen cut it off with a headache. "It's you."
The dragon tilted its head. "...?"
"You're the partner they're talking about."
*
Yu Lie knew he was the protagonist of a book.
Everything in this world followed the plot, moving forward step by step in the same old, cliche way.
That was until his cheap excuse for a mentor stopped following the plot, jumped into the abyss after him, and offered himself as a sacrifice to tame his true form: a black dragon.
...His mentor became his master.
In dragon form, Yu Lie had no memories. He could only learn what had happened after returning to human form.
After checking his memories once again, Yu Lie, who wanted to strangle his own black dragon form, spoke with a sarcastic, bitter edge: "You and my master are so close. He's never spoken to me like that."
Yu Xichen: ...
His good disciple has such a sharp tongue. I really want to break it off and make it into a magical artifact.
#Jealous of himself, and shamelessly so#
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1. A tough, decisive, sickly bottom x a reborn, corrupted black dragon top (nonhuman love interest warning).
2. A much-loved bottom, exclusive 1v1 happy ending. The bottom loves himself most, and the top loves adding fuel to the fire. Neither wants the world to be at peace. Neither is normal, and their way of falling in love may be strange. I'll write whatever comes to mind, banana-peel style.
3. The dragon's amnesia is temporary; he gets his memories back later. This probably isn't a healing story. If it does become one, it'll be a case of accidentally making things better while pursuing something else.
Theme: Sometimes things simply happen, and all you can do is your best to keep moving forward. Don't look back.
It was fine in the beginning, and there was still a slight flow of water, but in the later stage it was very restless. Maybe it's because of the perspective, so the events are unfolding piece by piece, and it feels like I've reached this point before I even thought about it. There are a few points of foreshadowing that are not used, some backgrounds are inconsistent, and the logic line is not smooth. Of course, there is no need to tell a story in detail. It is normal to mention some places in one stroke, but we just mentioned too much. I have a lot of questions but saying them here would be a spoiler. Now that I have read the full story, I am like a sheep caught in a fishing net... Forget it.
I hope the author can give this book a better ending. In fact, I have read many books, but none of them ended well. That's why my friends jokingly call me the "congenitally unfinished Holy Body". But I understand that sometimes this is just an affirmation of a book. If it were just a mindless article, a cookie, it would be difficult for the author to fail to write the ending; on the contrary, a world that tends to be real is often born under the author's wonderful writing. When the flesh-and-blood characters carry out their intoxicating love and hatred, the author's grasp of their fate will fall into a misty cobweb, or a hazy vastness like drizzle. At this time, the author would slap his forehead and suddenly realize that he was shocked: I can't write it, what should I do, what should they do, I can't control it, no matter what, it can't satisfy me, what kind of ending is worthy of them...! Just like a character in another sense is trapped within the rules of the world, part of the author's soul will also be trapped in a maze called a book, unable to find its own way out. Some authors say: If you make your character come alive, you will have to die. As a reader, I am just like what the poet Nishikawa said: When I open a book/a soul awakens/ When I opened this book again after a few years, the memories from that time came back like a tide, as if I was back to my youth, with the youth's yearning and yearning for a better world. In the past few years, I have been reminded of this book from time to time. First, I vaguely remembered the title of a blind box, vaguely remembered a blind character, and recalled the name He Guan. Then the colorful garden like an oil painting, the paradise-like life and the wonderful life of all kinds suddenly woke up from my memory. Then I recalled the madness of the white wolf who started with 500 million empty gloves, the unruliness of the two protagonists when they signed the contract, the warmth when they depended on each other, and He Guan's employment. The chicness when he was a confidant, the calm wit when confronting the villain, the sparrow alarm clock, blue tears, Lou Dongzang's paranoia, the flipped workstation sign in the office, the sea next to the mountain, He Guan's hand catching the sunshine when he passed the mountain... It is unforgettable for a long time. The beauty, poetry, wonderful wantonness, and vigorous vitality made me feel the two worlds occasionally overlap when I walked into nature, so a young boy was amazed for years. So I never read the ending of this book. I just chose to stay away from my mobile phone when I went off track, and became an escaping coward, just like the author. From then on, he became a passer-by who never looked back. He only had occasional memories in his mind, just like the shock after a broken love. Looking back at the development of female videos in China, many complex factors have led to the current situation. Sometimes we suddenly feel that female videos are dead, and sometimes we suddenly feel that female videos are on the road to development. Everything has its own destiny. Not only female channels, but also male channels are facing many problems in their development. We are all looking forward to more popular and real literary works, rather than just a drop in the ocean and gold mining in the sand. I don't long for love, but seeing the love between He Guan and Lou Dongzang makes me happy. And the love that opens the blind box in my heart is not just love, but more like a fusion of souls, an existence beyond love. Just like when you see them for the first time, you don't think about attack and reception, but are immersed in the blend of their temperaments, and just feel that the two are made for each other. Sometimes I think, it is just an online novel, how can it compare with those popular literary works, which makes me miss this. As I write this, I think maybe it is because the author does not only write about love, but also shows a real other world, including flowers, grass, sunshine and interactions between people. Just as there is no precise boundary between popular literature and serious literature, online literature also has its own indelible value and potential. So I bravely picked up my pen and kept improving my outline, but I still didn't dare to take a step forward. I'm afraid that I won't be able to write a perfect piece of work. So I have been improving my literary quality. Be strict with yourself and be lenient with others, so I don't want to push the author to a high place or entrust him with a heavy responsibility, but I want to say how profound that glimpse among thousands of flowers is. Some readers and authors believe that books are a commodity, while others are truly emotionally invested. It is difficult to draw a complete line. And I feel the emotion you pour into me. I think I can resonate with you, but I am afraid that it is just a temporary imagination. So, author, are you like me, with secret throbbing and joy in your heart when you first wrote this book?
Damn it, Xiaoyan is actually the male partner. It's really not easy for everyone (the only world where Zha Gong is injured makes me laugh to death)
Hey, hey, see you in the next book. I have a mahjong table in my bookshelf for those who have paused updating and summarizing. It's real mahjong, as long as there are no pitfalls. I was shocked when you canceled the bib. I thought something happened, so it'll be fine. But for the next book, I still hope that you can be prepared to write again. Originally, catching up on updates is enough to make people scratch their heads. If the author disappears again, it will really make people angry.
After reading it, the front and middle are indeed the better ones among the novels I have read. Whether it is the relationship between the two parties or the progress between them, it suddenly comes down from the back. It takes too long to read the comments? I don't know. Anyway, I really enjoyed watching the first part. I'll subscribe to it. I skipped to read most of the second parts. There really wasn't anything that attracted me. The plot was set up too big and the details were too weird. Speaking personally, even if I read the second and third time, I'd still read most of the first part.
I never expected that Yan Xu was no ordinary person either.
The child he favored the most was the most like him, and at the same time he forcibly arranged his way.
I have been reading the author's books these days. When I saw this article, I was a little uneasy, but I still clicked on it because it is a character I like to read in the past. As expected, the two of them are a pair of lovers that I particularly like, and I will not be disappointed at all in terms of the relationship. (There are a lot of spoilers later, so don't read if you haven't watched it.) When the plot line started to go offline, I clicked on the comments. If the update time is too long, there will be a clear sense of fragmentation. Do you feel that if possible, you can add more foreshadowing to the protagonist's development? For example, the cruise ship only appears at the beginning and the end, while the entertainment circle/company part in the middle, which is relatively bland and warm, has no intention of moving to other maps. It feels like a sharp turn in the end. And I feel that there are a lot of foreshadowings, such as Yan Daisuke is a person who wears books, Yan Xiaoshu is an undercover, and the relationship between Yan Daisuke and Zha Gong. It is obvious that we can expand on it or talk about it well. I wrote a little but did not continue to talk about it, so that part becomes dispensable. If it is less, it can promote the plot, but if it is too much, it will be like a stuck in the throat and always make people miss it. There are also some details, such as what Lao Lou did during that time, and if the master of the original owner was really from a scholarly family and cared about his well-matched sister, why did he become a fraudster again. If this was a million-word article, it would definitely be a particularly interesting story if all the supporting characters could be well described and some details could be filled in. I really like this article. I feel that the author has always been very good at describing the psychological state, and I can also see that the new article is making progress. I really like this pairing. If possible, when will the author revise the article? I'm really looking forward to it.
The back part is a bit unclear but the front part is okay... Otherwise I wouldn't have bought it without reading each chapter?
The old man is not very good at loving people, but he really tries to love the little snake. The little snake is not just loved and cared for, woo woo woo