The Sweet Little Omega Was Supposed to Turn Into a Big, Bad Alpha

Ah this. This Tao Su. Have been disgusted

The setting is very good and attractive, but the writing style is a bit immature, and the characters are not attractive to me. Looking at the writing, I thought it was more mature in terms of both attack and defense, but in fact both of them are quite childish╭(°A°`)╮ For those who like this kind of attack and suffering, they should like it. I read the comments section before watching, and I think I was mentally prepared, but I also knelt down when I was attacking, hahahaha, which is a pity, I really like the setting of the copywriting. The author has a good idea. This is the first article written very well. Come on.

It was a bit messy to watch, and I felt that the plot was a bit confusing. And I was a little fascinated by the image of Tao Su. In the beginning, I even slandered him, but later he turned to Qi to save people. . . ? Dr. Ding is better but still a bit weird. But judging from my wife's reply, I feel that she is a good person. Come on!

The author's writing style needs to be improved. There are some problems with the plot logic, and the settings in the article also need to be strengthened and refined. Come on.

Based on my many years of experience in reading novels, I feel that Gong should be a general (?)

Has the author come back and corrected it? The plot is really confusing and inconsistent.

Even so, it's still unforgivable, offensive and irritating.

Damn you for attacking and choking SB

In addition to being capable, there is still nothing left to do. Is that what I mean?

I was going to quit after the first chapter, but after reading the author's explanation in the comments I decided to persevere. After reading this, I felt like I couldn't hold on any longer... Regardless of whether I was pretending to be weak or not, after about ten chapters, the only feeling I felt was that I was aggrieved, aggrieved, aggrieved. In addition, the characters and plot are very strange, going up and down suddenly. Both the military students and the researchers feel that they are more or less brainless, alas.