I’m Being Hunted by a Bunch of Experts
我被一群高手通缉了
- Status
- –
- Length
- 88k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
32Chapters
1kFavorites
113Nutrient gifts
793Clicks per chapter
101Comments
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I... Searched for a long time and didn't know how to comment for myself, but when I saw it... It was all because I was blind and didn't see the small print at the bottom. Comments will be replied after they are sent. Darlings, don't buy the V chapter. It's really Laila's fault that they can't understand it (Cat Cat Rolls and Cries. JPG), so please wait another three months, and I will save the manuscript until it's finished. Momojiu OvO
You are so cute (/ω\) shy Can I make a small suggestion, which is to modify the adjectives when writing, such as in this paragraph Jimo Jun squinted his eyes and looked through the gaps between his fingers as the shadows of his hands grew larger and smaller, and the light shone from left to right. The clear joints, as clear as jade, could not withstand the wind and grass, and seemed to be like grass roots that would break at the slightest touch. Becomes: Jimo Jun squints his eyes and looks at the shadows of his hands that are getting bigger and smaller through the gaps between his fingers. The light is swinging from side to side. Those slender knuckles that are as clear as jade seem to be unable to withstand the wind and grass, making people afraid to ****. It will read better if you modify it. I don't have enough words. XX is an adjective and I can't think of a good one. Also, I feel that I can understand the scene I want to describe, but many of my sentences are incorrect, which makes the reading a bit confusing. (I am not giving guidance on writing, I don't have that ability. If this comment affects DaDa, please delete it.) Finally, please do your best (^ω^)
Oops, I came in based on my name, but I couldn't find the copy, hahaha. I browsed the comment area, okay, leave a thumbs up, and cheers. I'll come back in three months to see if there's any updates. Hehe.
Scratching my head, I was just about to read it when I saw the author saying not to read it. What's wrong?
I can't understand, it's all foggy
Let's take a look first, the copywriting looks quite interesting.
As a god, when he is beaten and scolded by others, he lightly says "Why is that so?" This god is so useless, why should he be called a god?
The copywriting and the first chapter seem to be different...
See how complicated it is