Chasing the Mystery

It feels like a lot of things are not explained clearly, the logic is not quite right, and it feels a bit rushed.

Several criminal investigation novels I have read recently have this kind of plot. The protagonist's brothers and sisters who were kidnapped when they were young are coerced by evil forces into bad guys and become the new big boss... It's so tragic.

To be honest, Zhou Qilu felt something was wrong as soon as she appeared on the scene. How could she be mentally healthy after having been in close contact with and living with those people with distorted views for more than ten years? But the two experienced and excellent criminal police male protagonists just couldn't see it. They really felt that they were forcibly subduing the male protagonist's intelligence. Moreover, throughout the article, the feeling of being rejected yet allowing oneself to actively seduce, accepting yet pretending to be cold and deliberately pushing away, not saying anything clearly, but being unable to accept the presence of others around me is really like a scumbag who deliberately hangs others. . . It really made me so angry that I wished that Zhou Qilu would torture Gong Qi in front of Shou and make Shou feel guilty for the rest of his life. . . But I still have to say that it's hard work, Mrs. Good luck in the future~

It's so uncomfortable. She went astray in the end. I wish she could finally become an ordinary little girl, living under the sun, with a brother who loves her very much, and with very close friends.

I haven't finished it yet, but I'm close to a few chapters. I finally read the ending and made a comprehensive evaluation of this article. There are not many flaws in the writing. At least the narrative is basically up to standard. However, typos and unreasonable pauses in some sentences still exist. Let's talk about the shortcomings next. The beginning The writing is good, including the foreshadowing of the character creation, which is why I bought so many chapters. However, later on, I can clearly feel that the writing is getting weaker and weaker. It seems that the author intends to build a big framework but has limited ability to write it. This is related to my personal writing level. It needs to be written. It takes more practice to understand, but to be honest, the connection between the emotional changes between the characters is quite unnatural, the emotional drama is just average, and the most terrible thing is that the plot of solving the case is not exciting enough. One of the reasons why I like watching criminal investigation is that I like the excitement of the protagonist exploring the case. But sometimes this book feels a bit like a running account, especially when you get to the end of the appointment, it makes you want to skip reading. The design of the final BOSS is also quite pale, which feels quite bizarre and outrageous. It feels like it is written in a wrong way. I don't recommend ordering it all for the readers who follow. . . . You can read it chapter by chapter first

I finished the chase in one go. I really like edamame. I was poked by the extra story. Porridge should always be healthy.

I always felt that the modus operandi of the Bagua array should not be something that a primary school teacher could come up with. I had been waiting for a big BOSS, but unexpectedly it ended in a hurry. Aside from the rushed ending, overall it's still a good watch.

I looked over intermittently, and at first I thought my sister might be dead. What should I do if my brother is not found and feels uncomfortable? After my sister appeared, I kept praying not to become a bad person. When she became a hostage, she knew that she could not be a good person. This was a result more uncomfortable than death. If it were before, I thought the plots in the novel would only appear in the world of the novel, but now the reality has made me realize that there are far more dark sides to the world than I imagined. People's skin is a protective film layer after layer, and the true face underneath can never be seen clearly. In reality, how many people can move towards the light like Edamame, and how difficult it is to meet the right person like him. When I think about it carefully, I feel sad. Maybe there are criminals in action as I type these words. In short, this is an article that made me not happy at all after reading the story of the villain being caught. Even the fish porridge didn't make me happy, so I probably don't have the courage to open it a second time, so I'll say goodbye to the fish porridge here. I hope that every child will have a healthy and happy childhood. I hope that people with evil intentions will be caught and beaten in the end. I hope that there will be fewer bad people, more good people, and less news from the underworld. Goodbye.

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Finished with flowers~ My sister's ending is a bit disappointing. . . Porridge has been looking for his sister to find the murderer of his family. He suffered a lot as an undercover agent and did not dare to confess to his lover. He lived in the shadow of death every day, but in the end, his sister still could not live in the sunshine again. . .