The Literary Girl Is Online, Roasting Her Fans

Hello, Dad. First of all, thank you for insisting on finishing this fanfic. I have also seen the impact of comments midway on your writing. It is worthy of praise for finishing it. I think you have a lot of imagination and expressive writing skills, but the arrangement of the plot and the emotional scenes are still a bit stiff. If you didn't insist on Dazai being the male protagonist, I think the score of this work could be higher. In fact, when I was struggling with Dazai's role as the male protagonist, I had been hesitating whether to pursue it. Everyone has a part to grow. Your description of Chuuya and Accelerator's relationship makes me hope that you can write the interaction between Mue and Dazai well. But in fact, my personal feeling is that Mue's care and intention for Dazai are not as much as Chuuya's, which makes this appointed couple not sweet at all. Doesn't it mean that lovers can't both be smart, and they can't be tit-for-tat? Isn't it the saying that makes enemies happy? But if you are happy that your enemies are just talking about it, you should also understand each other mentally. Mue knows about Osamu Dazai in the third dimension, but does she understand the literary giant Dazai in the second dimension? They may have similarities, but they are definitely not the same person. In your article, it is clear that Mue doesn't understand Dazai's despair. Do you think the reason why the other party still wants to be together because he doesn't understand Dazai is because Mue is attached to Dazai and can't get rid of him, so he has no choice but to accept his fate? Reading this way is somewhat disappointing. Speaking of Dazai, as the male protagonist of this article, he appeared very late, which put him at a natural disadvantage. After appearing on the stage, he and Mu Hui started to fight and plot against each other. I didn't clearly read the description of his attraction to Mue. His persistence can be said to be a protective film. What exactly is he attracted to Mue? There is indeed a plot later on where Dazai wants to protect Mue, but he doesn't know where to start, so it's all blank. Only sincerity can replace sincerity. If you tell too many lies, you really can't tell the truth from the lies. Maybe we can only think that Mu Hui is an intuitive system, and naturally comes with its own filter for translation. In addition, I really want to complain about the article. The title of the article is "Literary Girls Follow Fans Online". The whole text except Mue is a literary girl. This is just a background. The whole story has nothing to do with literature. Is this fan Dazai? I couldn't tell at all. In fact, at first I thought it was because Dazai was a literary fan of Mokue, and he only fell in love with Mokue when he resonated with her through writing... Never mind, maybe I was overthinking it. Another setting that I personally feel is a pity is that Kie is a literary master, but this status does not affect the thoughts in the article. What I mean is that Oda was inspired by Natsume's books to create and think about society. The above is my personal reflection after pursuing it for so long. I hope that the more I write about it, the better it will be.

I want to go to the library to see Little Cherry!

Ahhhhhh, so sweet! Such a sweet big cat! Why don't we try to kick that black mud away!

It's gone, how could it be gone, my heart aches. I hope that I will get better and better as I write more, and I don't want to get panicked again. The writing style is great, I think it is very good, I like it very much.

I thought I had played it, but it turned out there was still something, thank you very much

I thought I had played it, but it turned out there was still something, thank you very much

Hey, Dazai calls this "teasing"?

If CP is Zai, I feel like he will chase his wife in the crematorium.

Ah, so that's it. I always thought that the infected part was the black mud inside fate hahh

What? Ask Dazai where the black mud spirit went? I was beaten to death by a certain butcher chef because Fangmue's candy was so fragrant!!!