The Game I Played Became Reality

I don't want to poke any extra points, I prefer the non-god Dorothy, the cold-faced lolita hehe! Ou Shen is too silly and naive, and the character design is not that of a god!

When I first started reading, it was only about ten chapters. I was still in high school, and now I'm in college. It's not easy. I'll finish it~

Hahahaha Dorothy is worthy of the god of luck. She will have everything she wants. If you like Tarot, you will get the plus enhanced version.

I clicked in after realizing it was finished, and spent a few days reading it from beginning to end. The story is completely smoothed out, the growth line and the emotional line are clear and complete, and the imagination is wide and rounded. I have to say that from these aspects, this is really a good article. However, the chapters starting from the day when the book cannot be updated have obvious traces of "water" in their writing. Even if it ends well in the end, the water chapters in the middle are still considered failures, which is a pity. This article itself is a long third-person narrative. If there is too much of this kind of narrative, it will look like a didactic force-feeding setting. In addition, one setting is mentioned over and over again, which is really a bit unsightly. However, after the update was restored, the feeling of hydrology was reduced, so it is difficult to say whether the author's lack of writing power or lack of mental effort caused this problem. I would like to make a small comment. I hope that the author can try to shorten the length of third-person and God's perspective narratives in the future, and enrich the character and background setting through first-person dialogues of different characters (of course, not all dialogues, but still need to maintain a balance). In short, I hope there will be another one, and I hope the next one will be better written.

When can I write this kind of article again? I really want to read it.

After two or three years, I finished it in one go. The writing is so great. When will I start writing Western fantasy novels again? (Star eyes)

It's very interesting, but the time span is very long. I saw that you had updated dozens of chapters, and I thought to myself, it's okay, but it won't work until later, and it's only now that I bought the full text. It's not easy, but this is why I have completely forgotten about your novel later.

How can I put it this way? I have been following the novel before and I always thought this novel was very interesting. The long lag in the middle was originally very annoying, but there were too many automatically renewed novels, so I simply forgot about it. Recently I found out that it was finished and read it from the beginning again. I have to say that it is really good. Everything that needs to be rounded is rounded, it is not unfinished, and the plot twists are not abrupt. It's just that I really don't like to keep up with this novel after it's over, so I'd better just read the ending. The author's deceptions are probably better than those of the previous ones. I can only say that, at least it is finished, and it is not an anticlimactic ending.

The author's structure and writing style are really good, and the setting is also very good and unconventional. It's just that the v lag is too weird... Sigh~ I was so angry before that I didn't read it for several years, so I came here and started it all over again and read it to the end.

It has finally been completed after so many years. I really like the mythical world of the game set in the West. I have always liked the setting. The content is also good. It is very enjoyable. After watching it again, I feel that some settings have been repeated several times and the description of believers in the later period has been reduced too much. The rest is really good.