[Western Crossover] I Really Have No Excuse

The remaining parts of the clown are sterilized at a high temperature of more than 2,000 degrees. To describe it in a more down-to-earth language: cremation

Wing??? Undercover in paradise? 2

I... I saw it as: "You are already on the recipe", and I still thought why are you so cruel??

So... Why are there angels...?

OK, I've finished reading it!!

How did this full order come about? . . I obviously ordered everything, why not?

Check to see if there is a label.

Ending with flowers and thanks for the treat, although I don't like the ending. Before Chapter 70, there was no foreshadowing of angels and demons at all.

First of all, congratulations on the completion and a few flowers. First of all, let me explain that I am not a gay, and I am not deliberately looking for trouble. After all, I subscribed to the full text, and I read and graded each chapter honestly. Then I decided to write a review, so that there may be spoilers, so those who haven't read it should read with caution. From the perspective of characters, the original OOC is still quite big. The original characters gave me the feeling that they were very brilliant images, but it was a pity that I could not write them out. The descriptive language is relatively... Simple, and the vocabulary is somewhat monotonous and lacking, which results in the image being out of shape and not three-dimensional. It is recommended that the author enrich the vocabulary and have the opportunity to modify it. If the full score is 100, the character can be given 70 points. From the plot point of view, the meme of Deep Distress is actually very good, but unfortunately, the subtleties of this meme are not highlighted in the whole article. Instead, some points that are not very important to the full text are highlighted. The full text seems very scattered, and I feel that the author wanted to cover everything but used the wrong points, and the gain outweighs the loss. Therefore, the plot is not compact enough, and coupled with the problem of language function, the tension of the plot is not enough. For example, the important plot of the protagonist versus the clown could have been a climax point in the entire text, and it could have helped to shape the image of the protagonist, but unfortunately, it was mediocre and even a bit frustrating! Maybe the author's idea was good but it didn't achieve the expected results. There are also some inexplicable blushing scenes and Chaoying's inner drama. To be honest, all of these should be supplementary, but they take the spotlight. In fact, why does it have to be written so clearly? The biggest advantage of God's perspective is not mind reading. Appropriate white space will not make people confused. Moreover, it is a wonderful way of foreshadowing and enriching the image. It can be seen at a glance that the character is a paper person, allowing readers to think about the character. Only the character can come to life. I hope the author can find someone who also writes about the United Kingdom and the United States to take a look - I have no ill intentions - I just hope that the author can keep up his efforts. There are too few interesting stories in the "Complex English and the United States". I gave you a score of two. Don't criticize me. QAQ

I still want to watch the extras hehehehe