Getting by on My Fuzziness

I think this article about my wife is the one with the best pace and the best portrayal of the protagonist. (Personally, I think "My Boyfriend is a Dragon" has the best character creation and emotional line development, but because it ends too hastily, it seems incomplete. The main theme is obviously love and academic inspiration, but the details of Yu Fei's life changes after his counterattack are too few, which is not proportional to the slow-cooking plot of the process of emerging from the haze. It seems top-heavy, but reduces the completeness) I didn't find the daily routines that set up the relationship between the two of them unclear in the early stages boring. I think my wife is very good at writing daily routines that are not boring, and she writes the character's life in a very rich and inspiring way, which makes people optimistic. But I still want to point out two plots in the early stage that I personally found rather unpleasant. 1. Maybe I've read too many slap-in-the-face stories. When I saw Qiao Ran being blamed by his colleagues, I didn't lecture him verbally until he was speechless. I felt a little aggrieved. With Shou Luoluo's generous personality, I don't give in at all. I don't understand why he didn't verbally retaliate and warn his colleagues (although he has already reported it). If he doesn't tell the bottom line, he will be delayed by unreliable colleagues. With Qiao Ran's independent and strong personality, he should be strongly protective against violations of his bottom line, but there is no corresponding behavior. I feel aggrieved, which makes me speechless. 2. Van Lundin was indeed very rude when he appeared. It can be regarded as Sentinel's lunacy. But later, when the two became neighbors and Fan Lundin had a cooking fire, he ordered Qiao to do this and that. Qiao didn't complain at all and just accepted it. He was still too soft. For example, Joe can use the excuse of mastering Valentine's calming method or curing his disorder to complain and fight back. With Shou's carefree personality, there is no need to pet the lion to please its owner or tolerate him. It is unreasonable to sacrifice self-esteem to satisfy yourself with trivial things that are not equivalent to it. I read "Tofu Dongshi" about the cheating wife. The attack made me very angry at first, but because of the verbal counterattack and the care attack, he had to bow his head and deflate, which made me find it interesting to watch and attracted me to continue reading. If you don't want one side to appear to be bullying the other, it's best to make both sides evenly matched. I have read several articles written by my wife, and my wife seems to have a special liking for this kind of "bullying" between aggression and suffering. I think it is normal for authors to have their own preferred plots, but it is also important to rationalize these plots, otherwise it may lead to a situation where the author is happy but the readers are not. But in addition to these two points, I think that after Fan Lunding fell in love, he started to use subtle tricks to "cheat" Qiao Ran into getting close to him. Qiao Ran was obsessed with saving money and didn't know anything about style. A new map of the academy will be opened later, and various events are compact and close to the main line, making it dizzying to watch. And there is no hasty ending rhythm like other articles. At the end, it brings out the original loss of the spiritual body and the fate of the two people, which is particularly great. I was very happy that the two of them were reunited. I hope the author's wife can write more interesting ideas!

It looks good, but when I saw that Qiao Qiao's spiritual body is Bai Ze, I thought of Bai Ze in Inhumanity. Bai Ze went to the master's house and scared away all the master's strange beasts. Bai Ze, all the beasts were frightened when they saw him. According to this idea, other spiritual bodies should be afraid of Qiao Qiao. Then wouldn't it be miserable for Qiao Qiao, a fluffy man (covering his face and laughing)

Amao hahahahaha from the beginning to the end

Congratulations on the completion! ! A very nice little sweet article wwww

I don't know when it was fully booked, so I have no impression of it at all, but now I think it's okay

The tail is a bit rushed.

Good guy, it's so cool to see this from Panda and Dragon.

Leave the claw(*^?^*)

Finished scattering flowers?? Flowers

Finished spreading flowers???