You're Such a Rascal

Damn you crazy?!!! In fact, I didn't like the first chapter. The writing was too plain and the language was too childish. But after getting over the first chapter, I was able to get the strange cuteness of this article. Although the language is childish and likes to use two-dimensional language, the plot really attracts me to watch it because the author's imagination to create the plot is really good enough! With this second language, it has the feel of a fantasy novel, and this unique writing style combined with a great plot will undoubtedly make it a masterpiece, or at least a masterpiece. After all, the author has constructed it very well from the first movie world to the toy staircase world and the elevator world and chessboard world, and has written a lot of foreshadowings, such as who sent the "five-color Tong-e" holding the Miao knife. If it is white glasses, why do you have to say "take him home?" What is the relationship between the intruder and the people in the horror world? How do the principals and others in the real world know the devil in the movie? Miao Dao Su Han in the Comet World is definitely a setting, especially Miao Dao! All of this is fascinating to watch. The author's skill in setting up suspense and novel ideas are really great!!! But why is there nothing afterward? Miao Dao didn't explain. The principal and others asked the protagonist to kill Su Han and let it go. Did Su Han get along normally with the demon king and the principal who killed him? Why does the principal know Demon King Su Han and others?? Author, you can't just say that you write freely and happily without completing the line that the article should take! Let's talk about the emotional line!!!!!! From the beginning of the first movie world, the author has foreshadowed it. For example, the doll told Su Ning that "Mary Sue" means Beria is very pitiful. Don't leave, this is just one place. The housekeeper also said that Su Ning was not here for the first time. Beria wanted to hide Su Su when she met him. These are all foreshadowings! You can't say that because Su Su is the "former owner", that's the reason why the housekeeper said he had seen him!! Obviously not! The article assumes that Beibei should have a lot of entanglements with Su Ning! After all, it's obvious that Beibei didn't fall in love with Su Ning because of love at first sight. They must have a past, otherwise where would the subconscious little boy come from and be there all the time? Otherwise, where would the person Beria jumped off the Susu train to look for come from? Otherwise, where would the little brother in the memories come from? Moreover, the character and plot of Beria are really full of foreshadowing, but none of them are explained. Especially after I started to want to mess with the master Su Han, I inexplicably stopped explaining it. Why is Beria entangled in Susu's eyes with emotional threads? Is it because of the master's power? What is the relationship between Beria and his former owner Su Ning? Why did Beria want to leave Susu in another world in the "Madman's Wish" session, just because the truth is that Susu has half the power of terror and Su Han is a bad guy? As I said above, aren't everyone and the master Su Han very good? The so-called killing him is nothing. You, the author, don't explain or foreshadow this point? Just two lines of conversation between the bosses as if they were joking? When the copy of "Mad Man's Wish" was about to end, Beria cried while holding Su Su's "corpse". He also said that Su Su would face the cruel truth when he went out. At least the side evidence must be a big deal. In the end, just like this, the arrangement was just to let Su Han go. ?? Why does Beria have to catch the comet with his bare hands in the comet script? Then disappeared into Su Ning's eyes? Are you going to stop explaining all this??? This is too baffling!!! To be honest, apart from the fantastic feeling formed by your extraordinary imagination and the secondary wind, the second most adorable point of this article is the copywriting, and it is also the point that the "Devil's Love" presented in the article can pass the test! Beibei has a very complete character, from the wet-haired roses flying in the air and talking to Su Ning on the train in the first story, to being poked by Su Ning in WeChat Moments, to going to the parallel world to find Su Ning. The tsundere is super easy to coax and the iceberg beauty is a big devil. She is really cute, but why is there nothing at the end?! The foreshadowing of Beria I mentioned above is completely gone. Beria basically does not appear. He appears on the background of Iceberg Idiot. He does not appear as much as the Magician. Did I make a mistake? Are you kidding me? No emotional line at all? It's fine to make jokes in the article, but if you really don't want to write about the emotional line, then you can just write without cp. Why does the copywriter use the super easy to coax the devil to attack x ten thousand ghosts fan Pipi shrimp to trick people into reading? Especially after "Whirlpool", Beria's basic background is still one that only appears once in a dozen chapters. Is it really poisonous??? I just want to read the love story between the devil and Pippi in your fairy tales! That's it??? I'm so fucking disappointed, where's my foreshadowing??? Where is my love? Where is my Bei Ning!?? I was so vomiting blood. I originally looked at the table of contents when I saw "One Hundred and Early" and thought that I didn't have to worry about it being quite long and the back would be enough for the author to write a romantic drama. But what happened?!! The more I watch, the more disappointed I become. The more I look forward to it, the more disappointed I feel. I want to cry (┯_┯) I don't know how many points I will give you. I hope you can see that such a good mind and a good character can write a particularly good article.

What have I read... I feel like all this money has been thrown away

??? So why does Beria want to protect the master? So he wants to keep the protagonist in Madman's wish because he doesn't want him to know that he is just a "tool man" used by two forces to deal with the intruders? (Although he didn't mind the plot either) And then the emotional line is like this??? Are all the good settings gone? Is it really okay to still play such pointless jokes? So why does Belia catch the comet, why does it disappear, and why is it in the eyes of the protagonist? Why why why

Damn it, where's the love line? Where's the line?!! Just let Beria be BEed like this. Fortunately, he worked hard to replace more than 200 children. Did the author not even give him a daughter-in-law?!!!

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha The emotional scene is as if it has been reduced by the protagonist. However, Beria and the protagonist both kissed, and Beibei still has such double standards, it is barely tacit understanding.

I want Beibei!!!!

What the hell??? As for the love line, I also want to see Beria and Su Ning fall in love. I'll go.

Ah~ I used to read the headlines and people like crazy in order to watch the emotional drama later~~ It turns out that the author ate up the emotional scenes! (Walling in sadness) (Already scored~)

The beginning is particularly good, and then from the middle to the ending, there's almost no emotional drama that I'm looking forward to! Wow!

Hahahahahahaha