The Goddess Is Hard to Keep

What's going on? The hero has an ex-girlfriend?

Emmmmm ancient sword stalk? Watching it all the way... I feel that the setting of Jianghu is a bit biased.

Ah, I've read a few chapters and it feels pretty good. I don't know why it's not popular?

Hello Dad, I am a dead fish from Shicheng Studio. I am very happy to comment on DaDa. The following is my personal opinion. Please forgive me if it offends me. I don't know where to start, and it's not that there are too many flaws in the writing. It's just because it's better that I don't know what to say. The large writing style gives people a feeling that they need to read carefully (when I was reading, there were some places where I wanted to take a rough look at some parts, but then I didn't know what happened so I had to go back and read it again). That is to say, every content is indispensable. In fact, I am quite cute. 2333 Then the big label is... Wuxia, but the more I read it, the more it gives me a fairy-xia style, especially the sentence "It's a fragment of a page left by Fuxi when he created the world" gives me a fairy-xia feel. And from the very beginning (i. E., Heroine 1.0), I had the same kind of um... Kind of campus violence comics that I saw. First, senior brother Tianqi broke the gambling rule by breaking the rules, and then burned down the bookstore. Later, he went to his junior sister Wei Lin'er to find a way to make Xiao Zhu a scapegoat. Wei Lin'er disagreed at first and then agreed... Actually after seeing this, I thought Wei Lin'er could become a role like the heroine's best friend, but I gave up this idea when I persuaded Xiao Zhu to be the scapegoat. Then senior brother Tianqi seemed to feel hatred because of the dazzling appearance of senior brother Guiyue, because he gave me the impression of a playboy from the beginning. Later, seeing Tian Qi's various performances proved that he was just cannon fodder. If he could put more thought into Tian Qi, he might be able to transform into an important figure later on. As for Fu Guiyue, when I recalled spending time with Ya Cangxue, the character dialogue also conflicted somewhat with the description of the character Fu Guiyue. For example, what Da Da describes is a "gentle and gentle young man", but later he shows a somewhat restless temper. It may be that he is young and frivolous, but the so-called gentleness and jade are in conflict. Perhaps Wei Lin'er's transformation between good and evil was too fast, which made me think that the main problem with the character structure that I doubted lay with her. At first, he thought that his senior brother Tianqi's attention was not good enough to refuse, and then he was gradually persuaded. At this point, Wei Lin'er was regarded as a kind female supporting character. In the process of persuading Xiao Zhu, he hesitated again, and finally became irritable. Or maybe it's a sentence I didn't know where I saw before. In the back, Wei Lin'er pities the heroine Xiao Zhu and is finally persuaded to give up on her. It gives me an indelible feeling. To put it harshly, it feels like she is like a green tea bitch. Ya Cangxue is one of my favorite characters. There is no big problem specifically, but there is one thing... After Tangmen is injured all over his body, there will definitely be scars, but the previous description of the clothes showed the chest, but there was no description of the scars, so it felt a bit conflicting. Well... Anyway, I have mentioned these main characters. I suggest you go back and review the article carefully. You will find out what is wrong and what you want to change. In the end, the writing style seems to be very deep, but as more and more characters appear, it would be a bit cumbersome to describe each character's appearance first. It would be good to add some mystery appropriately. The overall plot is relatively good, but I don't understand why the big data is so bleak, so I can only rub my head. In the last sentence, when Dada uses the sentence pattern of "..." Xxx rubbed his eyebrows and said, "...", The word "xxx said" should be followed by a comma instead of a colon [No, I am definitely not reviewing my Chinese knowledge with Dada, I just have obsessive-compulsive disorder] Finally, I wish your data will get better and better, and I wish you good luck in the Year of the Rooster...! [Manual Funny]

Give me some encouragement, okay?

Give the author motivation! Come on come on! Say goodbye to standalone!!