A Beauty Tempered by War (Heavenly Sword and Dragon Slaying Saber Fanfiction)

The article is very good, I read it from beginning to end in one go today. The only flaw is the ending. The ending was too hasty, and the reshuffle of power has always been cruel. It is not something that can be controlled by controlling Zhu Yuanzhang's life. With this kind of merger, the protagonist's subordinates may be ruined in the future.

After reading the full text, some people say that this is a book that abuses young people, while others say that the author is trying to attack and control. These are all unreasonable remarks. A large section of the entire article focuses on Song Qingshu's growth. How can we say that the author is attacking and controlling? He went from being a near-death cripple to rebuilding his meridians and martial arts, from being frustrated and despairing to becoming energetic again, from being abandoned by the one he loved to being the right one, from being killed by everyone and then becoming a general against the Yuan Dynasty, from being a villain in the martial arts to being forgiven and affirmed by his father, masters and uncles. Qingshu was extremely lucky to be given the opportunity to turn from negative to positive. How could he be reborn without hardship and pain? In particular, the author actually gave Qingshu a golden finger. He was invincible in conquering cities and lands, so that he and Wuji could have sex with each other for dozens of chapters with almost no worries. The reading experience of readers like me was hardly disturbed by the cruel war. There are no other shortcomings in this article except that it is a bit frivolous due to the large length of the war story but it is always easy to get through, and it seems aggrieved because Qingshu's attitude towards Emei is too low. The first point is passable, because everyone mainly enjoys watching people falling in love, but the second point is a bit uncomfortable.

At the end of the appraisal, the author is an offensive and control person. Although the writing is good, he has taken a detour from now on.

Song Yuanqiao: Passing the throne of emperor (bushi)

My wife really understands the character of every character in the original work. It's so well written.

The ending is perfect... After all, this is a story about Yitian Tongren, not some original martial arts novel. If you really want to be an emperor, you have to fight for your life but not to keep it. In the end, it just ends up with a double death. He can take it up and put it down, and he is also a real person.

All I can think about is that river crabs have crawled over me hahahahahahaha

The leader's counterattack! Was moved

If Song Yuanqiao forced Qing Shu to get married, would Zhang Wuji still be able to laugh? Curious ~ But to be honest, in several articles, the author would rather suffer than suffer, and Qingshu will be very pitiful later on...

The writing is super good, I like this [Come on]