[The World II] Bring It On, I'm a Tank!

Hahahahaha!! This chapter is too bloody~~ Mother must appear!!!

Hehehehehe BX brother finally came out again

Too many people have died in the ambiguous stage of testing each other. It's not easy for two people╮(╯▽╰)╭

It turns out that Fleeting Time is really the male protagonist (⊙o⊙) I am a tragic supporting character. . . .

He said he doesn't like fleeting years very much, so please come up with a great person for YY

Mie Hahaha, as a trumpet who can't even enter Ancient 3, expresses his longing for the three-dimensional beast =. = Come on, I really like it~

My mother used to fantasize about it, and the equipment she wore was so eye-catching.

Same story, different ending, maybe just because I didn't meet the right person.

I love HE online game articles. Please give the author a big boost and send me flowers =u=.

[Here is the evening song that contains the article] I came in when I saw that the title was Tianxia II. When I saw Tianxia II, I also remembered that I haven't played it for a long time. The human shield and horse game is the most popular. [Hey, this is not the point...] Ahem... The point Well... This article is also very different. How should I put it? I have read a few articles about online games before. Either I embraced the master after being tricked, or I embraced the master through various understandings. But the author's article is about returning to the world, yes, returning again. This is one of the small highlights. There is also the author Da Da's writing. Although it is a little joyful and a little dull, there is also a sense of reality in it, which is different from other online game writing. Most of the online game articles are written in a more dreamy style. Most of them are either the master coming to trouble him/her, or he/she accidentally gets into trouble with the master, and then becomes the master's apprentice, a god, etc. These are all very dreamy, more attractive, and easier to bring YY to others, but to be honest, the master doesn't just hug him when he says it. I also want to hug the master, peat, but is the master the one you want to hug? How can a great god be so bored that he would trouble you for no reason? [It is not targeted, so if you see it, please don't take it personally. I don't want to cause public outrage. But the author's article is about two people who have known each other in the game for a long time. It is a very ordinary but very tangled relationship. Well, I had a very messy feeling after reading the first chapter. In fact, some of the frames can be avoided, especially the brackets in the names and a lot of punctuation marks, and the small brackets in the explanation of DPS are completely avoidable. As long as the author marks it and notes where the author has something to say, the layout will not look so messy. Of course, I don't mind opening another chapter in this chapter. To explain everything about the game, at least the reader will know what MT, DPS, etc. Are after reading the first chapter, and they will understand it naturally after reading the text. The biggest shortcoming of the whole article is that there are too many punctuation marks, especially parentheses, and the names can actually be replaced by this, so that there is no need to use so many parentheses [Current] ×××: It is more comfortable to read like this. [This kid likes to find faults... So I'm a little excited] In addition, the author's writing is a bit joyful. Apart from a few small problems with layout, there should be nothing else in the entire article. However, the author can focus on describing the environment, characters, etc., Which will bring more fulfillment to the article. [Purely personal thoughts] Well, in addition, the author has a lot of descriptions of some games in Tianxia II, which is very suitable for people who have never played them to improve literacy. Online games only focus on a few points, such as defeating monsters and upgrading FB, but this is only limited to online games (fuck you, this is nonsense). Although online game articles are also indispensable for these points, emotion should be the main line. The author can describe more scenes of two people in online games, not limited to YY or reality. Okay, final summary (this is the longest one in the collection, three hours is no joke) In fact, I quite like the character of the male protagonist, (laughing). To be honest, I think the ending of your HE is very rushed. In one sentence, the ending is not happy enough. It makes people want to fill in some plots to make the whole ending look warmer and happier. However, the two of them are finally together (laughing). It can be regarded as a HE. It is a very special HE and leaves people with endless YY.