The Outcast: After Moving in with Zhuge Qing, the Taoist Master Gives Up

Demining: 1: The early stage progressed quickly but there was not much physical contact, which was a bit strange, and it seemed that the characters had no reaction to their falling in love. They all expressed their blessings. It's been a long time since I've watched Under One Person. Maybe I don't understand it well enough. I'm a bit too open-minded. My personal opinion. 2: Repeated words and phrases appear many times: "It doesn't feel bad", "Thank you", "Thank you for what?" It's easy to read too much. 3: Mostly daily, less main line, very bland, which is both an advantage and a disadvantage. 4: In some places, the boundaries between brothers and lovers are a little blurry. It has been emphasized many times that Zhang Lingyu, Zhuge Qing, and Wang Ye are like a family, and the part of decorating a new home takes up too much of the article. Although I know what the author wants to express, there is something wrong with it. 5: The end of the chapter is often a summary of the day, which is a bit monotonous and the length is also a bit short. 6: There are not too many twists and turns in the Cp relationship, maybe because it is a straight shot, but the reactions after the resolution are too bland and will not convey an unforgettable feeling to the readers. But this is definitely the most beautiful cp story I have ever read. Isn't it ridiculous to hit the cook even after the meal is eaten? It's super good-looking! ! ! I really like Ye Qing CP, but there are not many good-looking and main-line stories that fit the characters' personalities, so I'm starving for books. Ye Qing99! Starting from Chapter 65, I feel that the two characters Wang Ye and Zhuge Qing really come to life. The author has also changed from short sentences to long sentences. The descriptions are more specific and vivid. He also depicts the psychological state of the characters very well, which is very comfortable to watch. Moreover, their relationship seems to become very active after that, and there is a faint sense of a couple than before [Chigua]

Secretly give yourself a five-star review, no one will notice [thinking]

The article does not have too many ups and downs, nor does it have major conflicts. Instead, it blends the details and tenderness into every ordinary moment, and unfolds their most comfortable and true appearance before your eyes. It's like outside of the story, giving them a relaxing time where they don't have to save the world and don't have to carry too much.

It's very real and in line with the character. I'm already dreaming about life after marriage [laughing]. The only thing I want to say is that after watching it for a long time, I realized that my cp station was wrong [smiling] I'm a little disappointed. I remind everyone to read the introduction carefully! Interested family members feel free to enter

It is very, very, very beautiful to read. The emotions written by the teacher are very delicate, and every chapter is wonderful. There are no inexplicable interactions and plots. It flows like water in the mountains, long and thin, and it is very comfortable to watch. Especially the emotional line, it's really, really sweet. If I were to rate this book, out of 100, I would rate it 10,000.

It's very good, the content is very substantial, the structure is very clear, and there is a main thread. At first, I thought it was about theater. It was so annoying that the corners of my mouth never came down.

In line with the character, the emotional line is very delicate, there are not many superfluous things, and the water flows smoothly [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

It looks good. Although there is not much physical contact in the early stage, you can still experience it in life. Xiaobai appears to be very discerning in the author's writing. Every time he is young, his interest fades away and he becomes frustrated! However, there are some words that appear frequently, such as "This is not bad, just wait for other words." It will make you tired if you read too much, but overall it is still worth watching, and it is not too OOC, so it is worth recommending.

Chef, I will follow you for the rest of my life [almost crying] [sending my heart]

I don't know why I feel comfortable when I read these chapters written by the author. It makes people feel that after the Luotian Festival, the lives of Zhuge Qing and Wang Ye should still be like this, like rivers that will flow forward when encountering accumulated stones. Their lives are so warm, warm and full of color. I am a person who is not very expressive, but I really feel that their world is what I yearn for. If I like it, I really like this novel.