The Outcast: Wherever the Thunder Strikes, Nothing Remains but Scorched Earth

There is nothing wrong with the logic and writing, but I think there are some things that make me uncomfortable. For example, the protagonist's grandfather doesn't want her to bear the storm because the protagonist is a girl. Chu Lan should bear the storm as a boy. I don't understand why the male should be protected from the storm. This makes me very uncomfortable. It makes me feel that the heroine is completely divorced from the relationship with her brother and grandfather in some subsequent plots. I hope the author can realize that of course it is just a small shortcoming and continue to work hard!

It is really well written, and there is a difference between good talent and genius. The author directly writes out how to use that talent in great detail. It is different from the novels I read before. There is no ambiguity, the writing is very clear, and the character is not ruined.

Good luck! I've finished staying up all night to catch up, and there's a new one coming soon~ All book friends, you can rest assured that this book doesn't have the embarrassing Mary Sue setting of digging your toes into the ground, and the heroine doesn't become stronger inexplicably, and the growth process is also step-by-step. Finally, baby Amian, you are a cute little cake! ⁺ʚ⦁⩊⦁ɞ⁺

The writing is good, it looks like CP should be Wang Ye

A very good "Under One Person" fanfic The plot is logical, not brainless, and looks very comfortable. The characters are rich. The heroine also has flaws in her character and is growing up. The behavior of other characters is also in line with the original work and is not OOC. The overall tone is relatively relaxed All in all, it's not enough. Please do your best, author [please give me more updates][please give me more updates] In addition, the author is great, is CP the king?

It's pretty good. It's written very naturally, and the training process is very detailed. It doesn't give people the feeling of getting stronger inexplicably.

The characterization is very good, and you can read the heroine's personality traits from the author's subtle prose. The author has updated it to more than 70 chapters. I read it all in one night. The writing is also very good. I am looking forward to the follow-up story. Wow, can the author add more chapters? I can't get enough😘😘

I read about ten chapters and I have a question. Zhang Chulan and his sister should know about the Golden Light Curse. After all, Zhang Chulan knows this thing, which means that the heroine should understand this thing and also know that their family is related to the Celestial Master. Why does the protagonist seem to have no idea at all [what][what][what] @Noace999

It's not a brainless Mary Sue that makes me cry. How can it be written so well? I really like practicing martial arts from the age of 14 to 19. The writing is very logical. Maybe the author has done special research? That's why the rating is so low.

You can tell at a glance, it is a good book, needless to say, it is very beautiful, the quality is very good, it is worth reading, the writing is also good, the plot is also attractive, I recommend, recommend, recommend ٩(๑^o^๑)۶, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.