Warhammer: Prototype Begins in the Hive City

Overall, it's a good book. The first 15 chapters are about convincing yourself to eat poop, from an ordinary person to someone who can eat poop to save lives.

It's really well-written. I think the Blacklight virus could be upgraded; the male protagonist could become the Blacklight Primarch, splitting off into forms like Venom to enhance others. Otherwise, it's really a one-man show. I think Blacklight's combat power could be improved. Is the Warhammer World's strength sufficient? Chapter 51 was a real failure.

I'm only a casual reader of Warhammer, so I won't comment much, but regarding the Blacklight virus, it's the best and most insightful one I've ever seen. In my opinion, the only current issue is that the chapter about conquering the hive is a bit long, but that's probably for developing the protagonist. Worth reading.

A good book. The writing style and plot are top-notch, the writing is smooth and enjoyable, and the character portrayals are also quite good. I look forward to the author's further development of the Blacklight virus's abilities.

So far, it's alright, but I don't understand why the protagonist was assimilated by the fungus. Blacklight shouldn't have been assimilated so easily, right? And also, how did the others manage to pry open the protagonist's tentacles while they were climbing upwards? They shouldn't be stronger than the protagonist, right?

It uses many clichéd plot devices, has some inconsistencies and plot holes, and some illogical parts, but the love for humanity is undeniable. The protagonist deserves the title of "Second Primarch," after all, good stories always tell the same story.

A red-themed story disguised as Warhammer fiction, written in a very subtle way. It's worth trying a new flavor.

So far, the writing is excellent, the story flows smoothly, and the character portrayals are also outstanding.

The writing style and plot design in the early stages were predictable, which is why it received a low score. The later parts were alright, and it was a good way to pass the time.

It's very well written. The clash between Blacklight and Warhammer creates a unique spark, adding a glimmer of light to an absolutely cold and dark world.