Warhammer: Prototype Begins in the Hive City

Overall it's a good book. The first 15 chapters are a process of convincing yourself to eat💩, from a normal person who can show off to a person who can eat💩 to save others.

It's really well written. I think the Black Light Virus can be upgraded. The male protagonist becomes the Black Light Original, and splits out like venom to strengthen others, otherwise he would really have to fight alone. I think Black Light's combat power can be improved. Is it enough for Chengdu like Warhammer World? Chapter 51 is really a failure. Just implant a virus and then threaten it. It's such a failure. You can just modify the memory. And as of now, the male protagonist's combat power is still too weak. Let's strengthen it.

I don't have much praise for Warhammer, but the Blacklight Virus seems to be the best and most in-depth one I've seen so far. In my opinion, the only problem at the moment is that the chapter of establishing the hive city is a bit long, but it is also for the purpose of establishing the protagonist. Worth a look

A good book. The writing style and plot are top-notch Tomatoes. The writing is smooth and refreshing. The characters are well drawn. I look forward to the author's follow-up exploration of the black light virus' abilities.

It feels okay now that I see it, but what I can't understand is why the protagonist was assimilated by the fungi? Shouldn't black light be assimilated so easily? Then, on the way up, how did others break off the protagonist's tentacles? Shouldn't he be stronger than the protagonist?

There are many desperate situations, some inconsistent bugs, and some unreasonable things, but the love for mankind cannot be faked. The protagonist is worthy of the title of "Second Primarch". After all, good stories always tell the same story.

The author's writing in the red text covered with a war hammer is very cryptic. It's also good to try new flavors.

So far, the writing is very good, the story is very smooth, and the characters are well drawn.

In the early stage, I can guess the writing and plot design, which is why there is a low score. In the later stage, it was okay. It was a good way to kill time.

The writing is very good. The black light meets the war hammer and creates a different spark, adding a touch of fire to the absolutely cold and dark world.