Warhammer 40K: I’m Founding a Second Imperium!

I don't quite understand what you wrote. I feel like you wrote it using AI. It seems that you are very accurate when introducing the character information at the end of each chapter, but in combat with armor and other aspects, it is as if there is no armor piercing. The Terminator can be beaten by ordinary armor + chain axe, and the Terminator's leg armor can be scratched to bleed. I Chovy. You didn't even write about genetic modification, you just wrote about brainwashing. Black Carapace didn't know where you went in writing, but you wrote something that basically didn't have any delay into modern full-armor fighting. I can only say it's too bad.

Finally, there is a book that is neither yellow nor chaotic. 😄

Help young authors Brother, I hope you can go further. I will give you the three electricity generated by love every day. Your plot has just begun, and you still have a lot to write. I hope you won't stop updating. What's more important is not to be pessimistic about the current data. When you write 200,000 words, 300,000 words, and have a wave of traffic, you will not be able to stand out until then. In addition, I will share your book in the Warhammer post. Your content is good, easy to understand, and the feeling of pleasure is clear. I believe that many people will fall in love with it. Also, I hope that the protagonist can have more of a leadership temperament, such as not being too casual when speaking and negotiating.

It looks good, I love reading it, the author please give me more updates

It's a bit of a drama, completely inconsistent with Iron Yong's discipline and obedience. Just forget that the protagonist has a sense of self-consciousness. Other new bloods are not like Iron Yong at all. They are too human and look fake.

It's pretty good, I like it very much 👍

Yun, the black carapace is the nineteenth operation. It grows under the skin. What do you mean by "putting on the black carapace"? Moreover, the transformation of the Astartes is not completed in one go. It takes a long time. There is no process at all. The protagonist faints and wakes up as an Astartes. You're a bit too vague here, why don't you try to understand the basic settings?

The writing is okay except for some details. Overall it's okay.

Good-looking, good, good 😳

. Very interesting, looking forward to the follow-up.