Warhammer: Becoming the Eleventh Primarch

Oh, no one is watching? I quite like this book, it's very family friendly. It's just that the author needs to improve his writing skills. The sentence fragmentation is quite strange and the word order is sometimes a bit confusing, but it doesn't affect reading. As for the characters, it's not bad, partly due to the influence of the writing style. It's not a dark and sad style, so the characters naturally don't look bitter and hateful. The imagination is good, and the fun is there too. It would be nice if there could be more detailed descriptions. For example, I am really curious about what the Second Primarch looks like! Description is also a matter of writing skills, but it is not something that can be forced in a short time. As long as the author keeps updating, I will keep following this book. Come on, author! 😆

Huang Pizi's humanity is a bit too much We've already shut each other down, so what else can we say 😏

The plot review is too long

It's very beautiful. Come on, come on and don't stop updating.

It's still too difficult to express, and the language style is too down-to-earth and very family-friendly.

No, the main character in the comedy "Family Fun" is really strong.

Very well written. Update soon.